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    The author provides three reasons for going to college: 1) to gain self-respect, 2) because it feels better than not attending, and 3) to fulfill his dreams. However, the second paragraph lacks a clear topic sentence and does not provide valid or relevant information to explain the author's reasons for attending college.

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    The author provides three reasons for going to college: 1) to gain self-respect, 2) because it feels better than not attending, and 3) to fulfill his dreams. However, the second paragraph lacks a clear topic sentence and does not provide valid or relevant information to explain the author's reasons for attending college.

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    The author provides three reasons for going to college: 1) to gain self-respect, 2) because it feels better than not attending, and 3) to fulfill his dreams. However, the second paragraph lacks a clear topic sentence and does not provide valid or relevant information to explain the author's reasons for attending college.

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    Paragraph 1

    Reasons for Going to College

    The topic would have been better if it was stated like “My reasons for going to College”

    The topic sentence here is “Reasons for going to College”


    The author clearly describes why he went to college in the beginning by stating “Self-respect”
    The author puts an another relevant reason like “It feels better to go to college”
    Then the author puts another relevant reason for his going to college: “To fulfill his dreams”

    Paragraph 2
    Why I am in School
    There is not enough relevant information in this paragraph. So, a topic sentence cannot be
    pointed out.
    The author tells that he went to college because one day his father scolded him. This does not
    serve as a valid information or a valid reason to convey to us the real reason for the author to
    go to the college.
    There is not sound and relevant information in the paragraph.

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