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“An interesting experience you have had in your life.”


My experience was ten years ago. we was live from Lleida for do sports at mountain, raffting, booming,
etc down the river and a cannoa and aftter well diner and go party for pubs in Lleida. my girlfriend
and my we are funny and my friends they drunk meeting girs of Lleida. was a night crazy was very
awesome.

One of the best experience that I live was when I went last year from Marenostrum Music festival. it is
like a very big concert with a lot of deejays. the festival it lasted a weekend, with ten diary hours
listening loud music. the kind of music that you listen there is EDM. I feel so good those two days
because I went with my friends and I see friends that I didn’t see for a long time.
In conclusion, I invite to all the people that likes this music to go this year.

Last year, me and our band started a tour in UK. We move trought the country, playing in London,
Manchester, leeds and some other cities in scotland. It was a nice experience, but UK is a very
expensive country, so we spend a lot of money in food and gasoline. the weather was very cold also,
and one day, it was snowing even. Our partners in the tour were very friendly and very good guest.

two years ago in tordesillas (Valladolid) in September the 2013. Much the person visit the festejo
popular “el toro de la vega”. the experience very good except died the toro. very good the ambient
with the persons tordesillanas.

The best experience that I had in my life was when I touch, play, break and look the first time a
computer. Really, this is my passion. Repair a motherboards, change configuration of BIOS, install a
new programs and programming other programs, change a components. My dream is live of
informatica and programming a new Operative System or a Distro of Linux.

Tell about your favourite experience in a trip


My favourite experience is visited Tarragona. my friends I visited the beach, The museu, the magazine,
the coffes, and Parks. They family are sympatique. I don’t visited Barcelona because it sometimes rain
at this time. She has a dog very big, I’m love at dog the my friend. We go at the concert and family in
Reus. I’m know what returnet on Tarragona.
Is sport a good way of improving our health?
I think what taking a sport is a good way of improving our health becouse it does iprove our body as
well as a wide range at sports how, football, boxing, running, crossing, etc. from my point of view, is
more important practise a sport. Wherever is not necessarily does sport every day but sometimes.
there is doit for our health you now I just do is!

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