DEAR MR KILMER: TIPS TO CRITICALLY EXAMINE THE NOVEL

QUESTION

This write-up is based on the performances of my Form 5 pupils in the recent

examination. They answered this question, “Write about a character who
proves that determination helps to achieve his/her dream.”. Having only learnt
the novel Dear Mr Kilmer in January 2020 and they only did a few guided
practices and one test based on the novel, it is not surprising that some of
them had a few issues in answering the question recently.
 
Generally, my pupils did their best but as a teacher, it is my responsibility to
highlight certain weaknesses exhibited in their responses. The ways the
question should be examined and answered must also be explained to them.
It is my ultimate hope, the following comments, tips and guidelines will be
helpful to my pupils (as well pupils of other schools who also study Dear Mr
Kilmer).
 
 
 
TIPS ON TO HOW TO ANALYSE THE QUESTION CRITICALLY:
 

1.Read the question and underline the keywords. “Write about a character
who proves that determination helps to achieve his/her dream.”

2.All pupils chose Richard as the character; a perfect choice. Most pupils
were able to write about Richard’s determination. HOWEVER, MAJORITY
OF THE PUPILS FAILED TO UNDERSTAND THE WORD “DREAM”.

3.When you examine the keyword which is a noun, determine whether the
word is singular or plural. The word “DREAM” refers to Richard’s dream.

4.Then, ask yourself, “What does dream refer to?”. Dream in this context
refers to Richard’s vision, wish, desire, hope, expectation, intention, aim or
target.

5.Please understand that the question wants you to write about Richard who
is determined and because of his determination he can achieve his ONE
dream (vision, wish, desire, hope, expectation, intention, aim or target).

6.Therefore, if you include more than a dream in your response, it shows

your failure to read, examine and understand the question.
7.Before you decide which ONE DREAM you want to write about, please list
down Richard’s dreams (visions, wishes, desires, hopes, expectations,
intentions, aims or targets) that you know. For examples:

 Richard strongly wishes to always do the right thing in his life.

 Richard dreams of holding firm to his principle in life.

 Richard dreams of developing his talent to write poetry.

 Richards dreams or aims to befriend Hannah without any prejudice.

 Richard dreams or hopes to be determined in facing challenges in his life.

 Richard has a strong desire to support his friend, Hannah no matter what
happens.

8. Choose ONE of the above dreams and decide which incidents can be used
as pieces of evidence to support it.
 
9. The chosen dream should be the focus of your response. Highlight the
focus by repeating it whenever and wherever necessary.
 
10. Tie your content (point/idea), evidence and opinion to the focus of the
question. Refer to the model answer below.
 
11.  Plan well and write your response. Refer to the model answer below.
 
 
MODEL ANSWER:
 
The novel Dear Mr Kilmer is worth reading. The novel highlights many crucial
themes and determination is one of them. The main character, Richard
proves that determination helps him to achieve his dream, hope or wish
that is to do the right thing in life all the time.
 
Firstly, Richard’s determination helps him to save innocent wildlife. In
Chapter 1, Richard goes hunting with his father and brother, Gus. His father
expects Richard to get his first hunt with success. When they are near a
creek, a buck appears to drink water. It is about 50 feet from Richard. Richard
hesitantly raises his rifle and aims towards the buck. Richard believes in
doing the right thing that is not to shoot the buck, thus he purposely delays
in pulling the trigger and finally misses the shot. His determination to save
the buck’s life helps him to achieve his dream. Richard’s brother scolds him
and his father is disappointed for his failure to shoot the animal. In my opinion,
we must always try to do the right thing even though our action may not be
liked by others.
 
Secondly, we can see Richard’s success in doing the right thing that is to
support Hannah when she is down. One day, the tavern which belongs to the
Schermers is vandalised and Mrs Hansen asks her pupils to sign the
sympathy card which will be sent to Hannah. The card is passed around in
class but in the end nobody signs it except Richard. Richard’s determination
is clearly seen here as he does not care what his classmates would say or do
to him. All he cares is to do the right thing that is to sign the card and
comfort Hannah. Once again Richard proves his determination when he
offers to deliver the card personally to Hannah at her house. Richard has only
one dream or hope that is to express his sympathy to Hannah and her family.
In my opinion, it is important for us to be determined in doing the right thing
even though we have to face challenges.
 
Finally, Richard’s determination has helped him to achieve his dream of
doing the right thing when he rejects his role as a Doughboy. One day, Mrs
Hansen organises a patriotic programme to raise fund for war. By winning the
essay writing competition, both Richard and Hannah are the given the roles of
Doughboy and Lady Liberty respectively. However, the other pupils, together
with the members of the society are angry when Hannah is chosen for the
role. Finally, Hannah rejects her roles as she does not want to create any
more troubles. Richard is determined to defend Hannah up to the extent he is
willing to reject his role as a Doughboy. Richard wants to do the right thing
that is not to practise prejudice and support his friend Hannah no matter what
happens. Obviously his determination helps him to achieve what he wants
or dreams of. Personally, I believe, having strong determination is crucial in
achieving our dream as it will give us inner strength to face all the obstacles.
 
In conclusion, no doubt Richard is a determined character and it is his
determination helps him to achieve his dream or what he wishes to do in
his life.