Royal University of Phnom Penh WS201

Institute of Foreign Languages KOE

Department of English

Name: Ly Sing
Class: A2.4
Narrative Essays
#Frist Draft
Topic: The influence of technology on my behavior and hobbies
In generals, technology are using around the world. Technology can make my life easier.
But technology is also make the (has an) influence on my behavior and hobbies. There are three
things that technology make the influence (affects) on my behavior and hobbies.
To begin with, the influence of technology on my behavior and hobbies is (that it) make
(makes) me lazy. Because in (-) technology it (-) has a lot of entertainment so it attract (attracts)
me to use it every time also at school and at home.
Next, the influence of technology on my behavior and hobbies is make my grade get low
on studying. I used to play game on technology a lot such as Desktop, Laptop, television and
mobile phone. When I study, I cannot pay attention about the lesson that I study.
Finally, the influence of technology on my behavior and hobbies is make my life
successful. Because technology can help me a lot such as researching, doing assignment,
contacting with family, friend and teacher. When I don’t know about the lesson or something
else that I want to know (,) I can use technology to research about it.
In summary, technology make (makes) a lot of influence on my behavior and hobbies
because of the reason that I mention above. So I suggested that everyone that is using technology
please use it in good ways to make your life better.
Editor: Eng Youhak