Sir Riaz CSP Tips for ESSAY Writing

Lecture # 6 26/08/2019

FPSC observations about Essay Writing (Paper 2007)

1. Lack of objective judgments

OR lack of objectivity
OR lack of judgment arrived through argumentation
OR Lack of Argumentation
2. Forms of Discourse
a) Narration
b) Descriptions
c) Exposition
d) Argumentations
a) Narration:
Definition “A story in a series is called narration”
Sir Riaz Tips: Narration only to Brain storming and making outlines. Its
mean what will I first do and what I do next.
Which to write first and which to write next, that is narration. Ajwa
Story. In simple words narration means everything should be in proper
order or in sequence form are called Narration. McDonald Story (a
friend which was in sick)
 b) Description:
Completely described the Idea. Its mean that there will nothing remain
in your idea.
Sir Riaz Tips: Paragraph should belong to Body of the Essay.
c) Exposition:
Not write irrelevant but write relevant to the point. It mean write
relevantly and clearly.
Sir Riaz Tips very Important: If a sentence of Introduction OR
Whole Introduction. If a sentence of a Body paragraph OR Whole
paragraph. If a sentence of Conclusion OR Whole conclusion,
frustrate the Checker or Examiner and he think that What the
Candidate has written and give Zero marks.
d) Arguments:
Arguments mean to write logically OR to give reason.

+ =Arguments
Statement Reason
“Lack of education cause Terrorism” Now prove to it Reason.

+ No reason =Sweeping Statement

Statement
Pushtoo ( Pa Buso ke Obo bozay)

No reason + Reason =Sweeping Statement

“Debate on Peace and Islam”

i) One person starts Debate on Peace directly and not give any
reason about Peace so that is irrelevant.
 ii) Another person starts Debate on Peace and he gives Reason
and includes in his speech the Taif incident so that is
relevant.
Sir Riaz Tips: For Arguments you ask 4 Questions from your self
How, Why, What, Where so the arguments will be complete,
through these Asked Questions and remember.
Sir Riaz Tips: Statement of Arguments will not be rewrite
otherwise it will be counted in Repetition.
3. Lack of Organization:
i) Every paragraph should be link with another paragraph.
ii) And every paragraph should be link with the Main topic.
Sir Riaz Tips: Use vocabulary at inter level. And how much you
write simple that much Clarity will come in Essay.
4. Basic Structure of Essay (Paper 2008)

Basic Structure of
Essay

Introduction Conclusion
(2,3,5) (2,3,5)
Body
(1,2,3,5,6)
 Sir Riaz Tips: The rules of Introduction are different from Body. The
rules of conclusion are different from Body.
5. Clarity:
There should be Clarity in Essay.
Sir Riaz Tips: There is no Heading in Essay. No arguments should
be use in Introduction and Conclusion.
6. Paragraph writing: Ingredients of Paragraph writing
i) Opening statement
ii) Arguments
iii) Linkage with topic/ Little
iv) Linkage in sentences Organization

Basic Features of Essay Structure

Feature of different parts of Essay

1) INTRODUCTION features:
i) Narration ( Forms of Discourse) (2)
ii) Organization (3)
iii) Clarity (5)
2) BODY features:
i) Objective of Arguments (1)
ii) Forms of discourse( Narration, Description, exposition,
arguments) (2)
iii) Organization (3)
iv) Clarity (5)
v) Paragraph writing (6)
3) CONCLUSION features:
i) Narration ( Forms of discourse) (2)
ii) Organization (3)
iii) Clarity (5)
Sir Riaz Tips:
 No addition in Precise Writing from your own side, only write that
idea which given in the passage.
 When writing the precise so no background should be use which
you prepare in your mind Only write the idea which given in the
passage.
 You cannot explain your title by your own ideas.
 First Line must be Link directly with the Title/ Topic in the
precise.
 First understand the Demand of topic in Essay Paper then write
Outline, If you not understand the Demand of Topic then the
Outline which You/I make that will be serious blinder.

Essay Types

Uni Concept Essay Mutiple Concept Essay

(Just Single demand in (the demand is complex and
topic) more then one demand is
required)

Uni Concept Essay

 Terrorism
 WOT
 Economic Crisis
 Energy Crisis
 Water Crisis
 Climate Crisis
 Global Crisis
 Lecture # 7 27/08/2019

Very Important Question

“THE QUESTIONS THAT YOU WILL BE ASKING FROM YOUSELF IN
EXAMINATION HALL WHILE ATTEMPTING ENGLISH ESSAY”
A) For Uni Concepts Essay
To make an Outline (See all past paper and find Uni concepts and make
Outline Paper 2000 to 2019)
B) For Multiple Concepts Essay
1) What is Demand of the Topic?
2) Which and How many concepts are in the topic?
3) Dissect/ explain the concepts to identify the topics?
4) Encircle the concepts Dissected/ Explain and make the correlation
between the concepts Dissected/ Explain in the topic?
5) Apply Narration to Circle Drawn? (To make narration of Encircled
drawn)
 GENERAL FRAME WORK OUTLINE FOR UNI CONCEPT ESSAY

1. INTRODUCTION
2. EXPLANATION OF THE CONCEPT
3. HISTORICAL BACK GROUND
( use the subheading but time concern)
i.
ii.
iii.
iv.
v.
4. CAUSES
i. O
ii. 0
iii. 0
iv. 0
v. 0
vi. 0
Sir Riaz Tips: First Brain storming, Causes should be divided so you
get more points easily and look it from different angles like External and
Internal Point of view, you should look it from
i. Political issue
ii. Religious issue
iii. Economic issue
iv. Social issue
v. Geo graphic issue
Then remove all these divided point and not write in outline.
 5. IMPACTS
i. 0
ii. 0
iii. 0
iv. 0
v. 0
Sir Riaz Tips: First Brain storming, Causes should be divided so you
get more points easily and look it from different angles like External and
Internal Point of view, you should look it from
i. Political issue
ii. Religious issue
iii. Economic issue
iv. Social issue
v. Geo graphic issue
Then remove all these divided point and not write in outline.
6. REMEDIES
i. 0
ii. 0
iii. 0
iv. 0
v. 0
7. CONCLUSION
Sir Riaz Tips:
 Every point should be discussed separately in the paragraph. And
Every point Subheading should be discussed in separate paragraph.
 Principle of Proportionate : it mean you should give place to every
point in the body of essay.
 Give maximum time to the Actual demand of the Topic
 If there are more powerful arguments, so use that and there are
some 2 or 3 causes and that are not powerful so leave that
 There will be no subheading in the Introduction and Conclusion in
Both Uni Concept and Multiple Concepts
Lecture # 8 28//8/2019
WAR ON TERROR
1.

INTRODUCTION
2. EXPLANATION OF THE CONCEPT
3. WHAT HAS CAUSE W.O.T
i. 9/11
ii. Alqiada
Sir Riaz Tips:
 When you are in Examination Hall not apply General Frame work
Blindly but make in mind the demand of topic and make some
Twist/ Harmonium.
 When you have the material then it’s ok otherwise it will count in
repetition ( Historical background)
 My every heading and sub heading should be link with the main
topic with harmonium.
4. IMPACTS OF W.O.T
i. National
ii. Regional
iii. Global
5. HOW TO MAKE WOT MORE SUCCESSFUL
6. CONCLUSION
Sir Riaz Tips:
 You should think about additional aspects of the topic
 Not write additional aspects blindly but see the G.F.W that there is
similarity in G.F.W and additional aspects if there are similarity in
 the Additional aspects and G.F.W then not use these additional
aspects.
 Add these additional aspects If not disturb the narration, If disturb
then not add.
 If there is subheading of heading and that are strong, so write that
in subheading and if weak then write in single line.
 Keep time management in your mind while attempting the essay.
 Write outline in Rough and the remove it after convert into the
Neat.
 According to the Principle of Proportionality give 70% of time to
the correlation of the two concepts and actual Demand
 Correlation is the actual demand of Essay
Lecture # 9 29/08/2019
Sir Riaz Tips:
 The main objective of English Essay is Demand of the topic
 If there are use OR in the topic, so then you will support one side
and give little bit touch to other, but more focus on One side of the
topic
 Attempt that topic on which you have more arguments
 Not attempt complex essay which make hurdle for you while
making outline like Quotation Essay
 When seating in the Examination Hall, so when you did the Brain
storming, then give a review to all Compulsory and Optional
Subject which will be help in point making and get more 4 to 5
points
Note: You should get that points which complete the demand of
Topic.
 Study that book which help you in the preparation of Exam paper.
 FRAM WORK FOR MULTIPLE CONCEPTS ESSAY’S

“W .O.
T HAS COTRIBUTED TO HUMAN RIGHT VIOLATION”

INTRODUCTION

TERRORISM

W.O.T (explain military

approach)

CRITICISM on WOT
I.II.III.IV.V.VI.VII.VIII

TALKING ABOUT
HR violation
i.
ii.
iii.
iv.
v.
vi.

REMEDIES

CONCLUSION
How to start Preparation for CSS
IMPORTANT NOTE BY SIR RIAZ FOR CSS PREPARATION
i. Not study 4 to 5 subject.
ii. Study two subject one Optional and one Compulsory
iii. Give time to English 1 to 2 hours
a. 1 hour for vocabulary
b. 1 hour for Precise and English Essay
c. Should study past paper for Every subject
d. Next day first revise the previous day work and then start new work
e. Give 30 minutes for Pushtoo after full cover the subject
f. Give more focus to that subject which Covered
iv. Revise each subject after covered all these subject in 2 hours
v. In Pushtoo Paper first attempt Pushto to English Paragraph