Knowledge Feedback Current

and Grade
Understanding

Understanding of Step 1 responses: Describe how you want to develop some of your employability skills throughout this B-
knowledge, skills, investigation.
and competencies
appropriate to the Step 1 responses: Describe the employability skills you need to develop
relevant industry. Step 1: Where appropriate, describe what the issue is and why you want to solve that issue.

 For example – “I have do not have enough strong and long-lasting wooden bowls to hold fruit in my
house. Therefore, I want to solve this issue by creating a strong and stable bowl that is large enough to
hold fruit.”
 Include this example also: “Safety is also an issue within the construction industry, and this is
something I will have to take into consideration when completing this practical investigation.”
 Another example might be: “Preparation is also an issue that landscapers run into regularly. Often
landscapers do not prepare appropriately, and this can make completing the job time-consuming and
expensive.”

Knowledge Feedback Current

and Grade
Understanding

Understanding and Step 2: Elaborate on the below questions: D+

explanation of
concepts and “d) What safety measures need to be taken to do this task safely?”
issues related to “e) What preparation needs to be done to complete the task?”
industry and work.

Step 2: Include images with your step-by-step process and include ‘in-text’ references when appropriate.

For your last step, include a comment about leaving a tarp down in case of paint splatter.

Investigation Feedback Current

and Analysis Grade

Analysis of the Step 2: Make the issues of your investigation clear. Some issues you might be investigating are: D+
relationships
between a range of  Not having enough strong, long-lasting bowls to hold fruit within your house.
work-related  Having too many shoes and no where to put them within your room.
issues, tasks, and
practices in the  Following safety measures within the construction industry.
workplace.
 Preparation before starting a job is a significant issue within the workplace.

Under dot-point “h) IMPORTANT: Make sure you conclude your investigation. Sum up your major findings in
one or two paragraph.” Make a statement about the relationship between the issues you have identified
(safety, preparation, no room for shoes) and your task and working industry.

Reflection and Feedback Current

Evaluation Grade

Reflection on a In the reflection section make sure to connect some of your responses to your chosen industry. E
range of learning
experiences Make a statement as to how you have developed some of your employability skills and industry skills
in/about an throughout this assignment.
industry, with self-
evaluation.
Practical Investigation
Overall
ADDITIONAL FEEDBACK
Grade
Make the sub-titles and questions a different font or colour to your responses.
Step 2: Separate the questions and your responses throughout multiple slides. D+
Use third person language (‘he’ – ‘she’ – ‘it’ – ‘they’).
Create a bibliography title for your bibliography page.
Leave ‘in-text’ references and paste the large reference on your bibliography page.
You need to complete the reflection section of this assignment.
Delete this *(investigate – provide information – In-text reference – reference information in your bibliography)* for your final copy.
You have not responded to some of my previous comments and instead just copy and pasted my feedback to your version –
please change this.
Well done on using in-text references.