Professional Documents
Culture Documents
The exercises in this worksheet ask the students to evaluate several subject lines, to
read and evaluate a sample/model memo and to write their own memo. These activities
may be done individually or by group.
For each group of subject lines provided, encircle the letter of the best subject line.
Explain the reason for your choice by comparing it with others that you did not choose.
The exercise in this worksheet ask the students to evaluate and revise openings and
closings in business letters, and to write their own business letters.
For numbers 1 and 2, indicate which of the following entries represents an effective
direct opening. For number 3, revise the opening to make it more direct. Add information if
necessary.
(1)
A. Yes, the Enterprise Cruise Club is planning a 15-day Caribbean cruise beginning
September 20.
B. This will acknowledge receipt of your letter pf December 2 in which you ask about
our Caribbean cruise schedule.
(2)
B. The plywood wallboard panels that you requested were shipped today by Jolly-
Bee Cargo Express and should reach you by November 28.
(3)
B. At this time, the Star Wars umbrella we are offering is available in the colors
green and blue.
Worksheet 3: Email
Tight: _____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
Wordy:
Over a period of time, the course of the months of December 2014 and January
2015, I completely revamped the inventory system at my workplace, which ended
up resulting in a total final savings of a large amount of money, roughly around
$15,000. This also made it considerably easier for people, not only myself, but also
my co-workers at the store, to perform tasks around the office efficiently under the
new arrangements.
Tight:
Dec-Jan 2014: ________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
2. Provide specific and relevant details rather than vague and trivial ones.
Talk about how many people you trained or supervised, how much
money you budgeted or raised, and what aspects of a project you
handled. For the exercise that follows, state why concrete details are
more effective.
Vague details:
Sales Manager, The Naga Chronicle, Naga City, 2014-15. Supervised staff: promoted
sales.
Concrete details:
Sales Manager, The Naga Chronicle, Naga City, 2014-15. Supervised 25-member
sales staff; recruited, interviewed, and selected staff members; assigned tasks and
configured work schedules; recommended top performers for promotion.
Motivated staff to increase sales by 5% over the previous year.
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