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1. How I started the story-telling?
I started with an imaginary information about Susan. I
told teacher that Susan is my friend. I also introduced
myself first with my name and class.
2. Did I use any FANBOYS? If yes, how many?
I used 5 FANBOYS (2 for and, 2 for but and 1 for so)
3. Did I use simple sentences only?
No, I used both simple sentences and
compound sentences
SIMPLE = ?
COMPOUND = ?
4. Did I use correct vocabulary to describe
the pictures?
Not really. For example, I should have said
‘aeroplane’ for picture 1, but I used
helicopter instead.
Hi, hmm I will told you what I saw from the picture. OK…
First, in the number one picture I saw Pak Abu was on
motorcycle at the rice field. He is alone only. He saw a
aeroplane go down at the back.