Professional Documents
Culture Documents
I was able to complete all of the goals that I set for myself last week on time. In addition to these
three goals I also did extra research on how to compose a professional proposal. I also put
together a detailed outline of what my final product will include.
Last journal I stated that my meeting with Ms. Ink was very beneficial as it brought many of the
finer details to my attention. After considering Ms. Ink’s comments and researching, I have
adapted my project to better suit the entire student body. I originally planned on only having Mini
School students administer this online tutoring service. However, my ultimate goal for this
project is to enhance education and help students build a healthy relationship with school.
Therefore, putting restrictions on who can volunteer to administer this school wide service would
be unfair and not comply with my goals. Instead, I plan to partner with an existing tutoring
service offered to the John Oliver community and propose my idea to them. I plan on presenting
my proposal to Ms. Eng, the teacher sponsor of the Math and Science Tutor Club near the end
of January.
What I need to move forward with my Capstone (time, space, materials, contacts):
Moving forward I will need to set aside at least 10 hours of my time to research and complete a
majority of my proposal. I will need to continue researching different online platforms, how to
ensure online safety for participants, etc. I will then need to summarize my findings and
professionally add them into my final product. I will also like to read a few professional proposals
online to help me understand what a proper and formal proposal is expected to include.
Time: minimum of 10 hours
Contacts: Ms. Ink and Mr. Edge
In addition to time management, I also found writing my proposal difficult. I have never written a
professional proposal before other than my IDS and Capstone proposal. However, my class
proposals differed from the proposal that I am currently composing because I have to create an
outline myself. I am also having trouble finding the tone and style I want to present my writing in.
I have not moved past this obstacle just yet, but I am reading a few professional proposals to
help me understand what I would like included in my final product.
The skills that I have learnt are related to writing. Because my final product is a professional
proposal, I have been doing lots of writing and rewriting. I am learning how to efficiently and
effectively express my thoughts. I am also learning more about style, tone and formality. I plan
to continue and learn more skills throughout the course of my project.