ENGLISH FOR BUSINESS PRESENTATION

ASSIGNMENT 02

M.Rifqi Ramadhan
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I. Video Analysis (Writing)

In this personal assignment you are going to watch three business presentation videos. After
watching the videos, you will need to write a comparative analysis of the videos. Use the
tables provided below and give your opinion after you compare them.
There is no right or wrong answer here, as long as you have a clearly defined argument and
you explain your ideas with specific reference/ descriptions of the videos. You can also do
screen caps and include the photos if you need to reference specific images. However, the
images do not count towards your page count. This assignment should be no more than three
pages. The font should be in Times New Roman 12 pt, 1,5 spacing.

Video 01:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPMX8-OHjMQ

Video 02:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2PrLFHkLVk

Video 03:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvCIhn7_FXI

Comparison Table
Assessment Units Video 01 Video 02 Video 03
General
Organization:
Opening good but too He gives hook (ask The introduction
standard rhetorical question), starts by playing
still presenting his some music as the
self, then opening
 Anthony Youn presenter steps in.
MD's instrument
and icon
Middle/Body In every single He asks rethorical He began the
section, she questions about presentation by
chronologically tells supplements, tells showing the
the audience and the fact that fruits environment some
causallt even plays and vegetables less output effects, then
the slide nutrients nowadays he explained about
Next, he discusses tesla technology and
how to stop the how it operates.
minus of each
supplement
Closing/Ending She concludes that He said there was a He closed it
AIA Protector is review of his presentation by
important. Then presentation on his saying thank you to
have the icon and webpage, the audience
tool to end the encouraging him to
presentation. buy his product and
giving some
discount.

Voice:
Tempo: speed Normal Normal Normal to quick
Volume: loudness Normal (Not really Normal (Not really Normal (Not really
loud) loud) loud)
Expressiveness She has less He is expressive Has a great
expressive expression control
Pitch/Intonation There is not much He explain with a He has good
Variety variety, little bit tone of intonation variety
voice

Language:
Clarity: Articulation Very clear Clear Not really clear
Delivery: Fluency fluent Not really fluent but He is fluent enough
ok
Accuracy: Structure, Neatly structured The signposting not The structure not
Vocabulary really clear really obvious

Manner:
Audience contact Great Nice , he might do He do eye contact to
 eye contact all the audience
Interest Pretty good but Nice Yes he got it since
basic the first time he
entered the stage
Assurance/confidenc Pretty good Confidence enough He was nervous it
e will be seen by the
repetition in some
word

Body Language:
Stance and posture She was look He was look He stood in one
professional professional position from the
beginning until the
end of the
presentation
Hands She used body He used body He used body
language language language
Facial expression She seemed enjoy He could enjoy He look serious and
the stage and no during the friendly by laughing
worry presentation

Visual aids:
Number Clear Simple showed some videos
and some pictures
Design Elegant Simple Nice quality
Relevance with the Good Nice Relevant
main theme
Frequency of usage She has a strong He could show the A little bit
transition between slide on time and
the slide show and has a pretty
the material transition
clarification.

Conclusion:
1. Which ideo would you like to watch again? Tell the reasons why.
I would like to watch the second video, "Do Supplements work?" "Because of Dr. Anthony
Youn. This is so he can describe information in a straightforward manner and there is a video
that makes the viewer understand what he is about to say. During the presentation, he still has
a happy smile and he wants to show us what is expressed in his body language
2. Which video is the most memorable to you? Tell the reasons why.
The first video is the most unforgettable for me because, even without subtitles, it allows me
to hear what the narrator means. She's not really a native speaker, but her accent and her talk
time make me easily understand. She also reminds me of myself but can't speak as fluently as
a native speaker.
3. Which video is the least appealing/attractive to you? Tell the reasons why.
The third video is the least attractive in my point of view, because he looks awkward and
doesn't really grasp the content he conveys, even if the material is fascinating. By watching
the way he talked haltingly, we may infer this. Lastly, I can't get his point clearly as a layman
because of the way he talked rapidly.