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Even though it's not mentioned, this film takes place in the

past day. Let 's say...2021. THE VAMPIRES IN THIS SCREENPLAY


DON'T LOOK GOTHIC. THEY LOOK NORMAL, WITHOUT ANY SORT OF
GOTHIC MAKEUP ON THEM. ALSO: The male vampires don't have
their hairs standing. They have their hair down. And the eyes
of the family are RED. Plus, their ears are pointy. Like a
bat’s ears. And no, they do not fucking shine and glitter in
the sunlight. Whoever thought that this screenplay would have
shiny and glittery vampires, I’m sorry, you have picked the
wrong screenplay. IMPORTANT NOTE: It is the author's intention
that this film will be animated, cause that's how the
author/writer of this story likes to work on his stories. And
it will also be presented in Black-And-White, but the main
details like RED, GREEN, ORANGE, ETC, will be presented in
THOSE COLORS.

Ivo Byrt’s
THE FANGS OF MY
FAMILY
CHAPTER THREE
An Original Screenplay Written for The Screen
By
Ivo Byrt

Based On The Stories:


“Marco”
“Javier”
“The Family Of The Red House”
&
“The Girl With The Red Eyes Who Lives On The House On
Front”
By
Ivo Byrt

Based On Characters Created By


Ivo Byrt
INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY. THE DAY LATER. AFTER SCHOOL.

MAGDALENA walks on her own to the exit of her school. She


walks to her locker to pick some notebooks up. Elizabeth
pushes her.

ELIZABETH
Watch where you're going you fucking
freak.

Elizabeth and her goons exit the school.

Magdalena is at her locker. She's putting some notebooks on


her locker. Then, FEDERICO approaches to her.

FEDERICO
Hey, Magda.

She doesn't answer.

FEDERICO
(tries again)
You're not gonna talk to me?

Magdalena still ignores him. If she would talk right now, she
would say: It's not that I'm not gonna talk to you. I don't
want to talk to you. What do you want?

FEDERICO
Look, i just wanted to say that I'm
sorry for what happened that night in
the forest, alright? I swear to God
that i don't know what i was
thinking--

MAGDALENA
You didn't know. You just didn't
fucking knew. Look at what happened
because of what you did.

FEDERICO
...I feel sorry for what happened.
Really. I really hope you could
forgive me...

MAGDALENA
A rapist never says sorry to the one
he had raped. He just enjoys it.

FEDERICO
I'm not a rapist. I swear to you that
i'm not a rapist.
She closes her locker door.

She begins to walk off faster. He follows her.

FEDERICO
I don't know what else you want me to
do---

MAGDALENA
(turns, angry)
You know what i want you to do, you
fucking imbecile?! I want the same
thing that happened to me to happen
to you! I want you to go out there
and just fucking get raped several
times without mercy and just fucking
die!

Federico is stunned by those words. Magdalena turns and walks


away.

cut to:

INT. THE CAKE PALACE - LATER THAT DAY

Magdalena is having a piece of Strawberry Cake on a plate. As


she finishes, she raises her hand to a waitress. The waitress
walks to her.

WAITRESS
Tell me, lady.

MAGDALENA
I'll ask for the bill please.

The WAITRESS, CARMEN (19), a brown skinned girl with Afro


hair, notices the girl and realizes it's Magdalena.

WAITRESS
I'll be damned. Magdalena?

Magdalena notices Carmen.

MAGDALENA
Carmen?

WAITRESS/CARMEN
Yeah, it's me.

MAGDALENA
Holy shit. What are you doing in
here?
CARMEN
I work in here. Surprised?

MAGDALENA
A lot. I didn't knew you work here.

CARMEN
All days of the week till Sunday. The
day we close. How are you???

MAGDALENA
I'm good, I'm good.

CARMEN
I basically work here as a waitress
here, which in French, means:
serveuse.

MAGDALENA
I thought you worked as a cook. Cause
you're good at it.

CARMEN
Well,

She turns and sees on the kitchen, a guy making a cake on an


expert way. He should be good to be on Master Chef or some
shit like that.

CARMEN
that place is already taken. But i
like being a waitress.

MAGDALENA
You do?

CARMEN
Yeah. I could get the chance to meet
a lot of good folks here. Want to
know how to do it??

MAGDALENA
You just go to their spots and talk
to them? That's all that it takes?

CARMEN
Close but no cigar. You deliver the
order, you hear their stuff, you get
to know them better. That's the
essence of the cake palace.

MAGDALENA
Wow. Interesting.
CARMEN
Hey, have you heard? A man was killed
last night. Did you heard anything
about it?

MAGDALENA
No, i haven't. What happened?

CARMEN
They found someone dead on the
street. With stab marks on him.
Brutal ones.

MAGDALENA
It must have been someone who's
obsessed with killing people.

CARMEN
Or
(in french)
"Quelque chose"

Magdalena looks at Carmen.

CARMEN
(normal)
It's "something" in French.

MAGDALENA
Huh.

CARMEN
Hey, you know what i think?

MAGDALENA
No, what do you think?

CARMEN
I think you should invite your family
here. I'm sure he'll love it.

MAGDALENA
Oh, sorry. He can't. He doesn't like
cakes or pies or anything like that.
He likes to spend his times at the
bar and shit like that.

CARMEN
Ah, i see. Maybe i can beg to them to
deliver a cake to your place.

MAGDALENA
That'll be great. Thank you. Ah, the
bill, i don't know if i have that
much of a cash.

CARMEN
Don't worry, it's on me.

MAGDALENA
What?

CARMEN
Just leave the plate here and you can
leave.

MAGDALENA
Really? I mean, would that be a
problem?

CARMEN
Not at all, and plus, we're best
friends. Friends are always helping
each other's asses, even in the bad
times.

MAGDALENA
Carmen, i don't know what to say.

CARMEN
Don't say anything.

CUSTOMER
Waitress!

CARMEN
Sorry. Got waitress things to do.

MAGDALENA
Alright. Go for it.

Carmen walks to the customer.

CARMEN
Yeah, sir?

CUSTOMER
Could you give me the account
please??? And can i ask this to
take???

CARMEN
Sure. Let me bring you the account
and I'll pack this to take.
CUSTOMER
Thank you so much.

Carmen takes a plate with a cake to the kitchen.

CUT TO:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. LATER.

Magdalena arrives home. As she walks to her room, she starts


to cough roughly. She covers her coughing with her hands. As
she finishes coughing, she looks at her hands: THEY'RE
SPLATTERED WITH A BIT OF BLOOD. HER OWN BLOOD.

As she walks direct into the bathroom, she then collapses on


the ground, passing out.

CUT TO:

INT. HOSPITAL - ROOM. LATER.

Magdalena is sitting on a hospital bed. Two doctors are in


front of her, almost far from her.

MAGDALENA
What's going on? Why am I here? What
happened to me?

DOCTOR #1
I'm so sorry, Mrs. Quintanilla.

MAGDALENA
For what?

DOCTOR #1
You've tested positive for the HIV
virus.

Magdalena looks at the doctors -- blankly.

MAGDALENA
What?

DOCTOR #2
The virus that causes AIDS.

MAGDALENA
Yeah, I know what it causes. I tested
positive?

DOCTOR #1
We're so sorry.

DOCTOR #2
Have you ever used intravenous drugs?
Have you ever participated in a
sexual activity without using
protection?

Beat.

Magdalena realizes. She's fucked.

MAGDALENA
Well, I did, yes.

DOCTOR #1
You were involved in a sexual
activity without protection?

MAGDALENA
Yeah. I was....

To hide the truth of the rape to the doctors, Magdalena


invents something.

MAGDALENA
I was drunk in a party. We made love
without protection. I just didn't
knew about the consequences.

Silence.

MAGDALENA
How much time...do I have left?

DOCTOR #1
Well, based on your conditions, we
estimate that you will live around 30
days, probably more than that,
probably less than that.

Magdalena looks at the window.

CUT TO:

INT. BUS. LATER THAT DAY.

Magdalena is on a bus that gets her home.

CUT TO:
INT. PARK. SAME.

MAGDALENA is at the bench, she's listening to some music at


her WALKMAN. LUNA approaches to her.

LUNA
Hey.

MAGDALENA notices her.

MAGDALENA
Hey.

LUNA can't help but notice the weird thing MAGDALENA is


holding on his hands.

LUNA
What is that thing?

MAGDALENA
This? It's just a Walkman.

LUNA
Walk...man?

MAGDALENA
Yeah, a Walkman.

LUNA
What does it do?

MAGDALENA
You just listen to music on it.

LUNA
There's music on it?

MAGDALENA
Yeah. There is. Here, come, sit with
me. Let me show you.

LUNA sits next to MAGDALENA. She puts the Walkman earphones on


Luna's ears. She's beginning to listen to some music. She is
stunned, amazed and entranced by the Walkman. MAGDALENA smiles
at this.

MAGDALENA (O.S)
So, when did you moved in here?

CUT TO:

INT. TOWN NEIGHBORHOOD. LATER.


MAGDALENA and LUNA are walking together on a neighborhood of
the town.

LUNA
A while ago.

MAGDALENA
A while ago?

LUNA
Mhm.

MAGDALENA
A while ago when?

LUNA
Let's say -- last month.

MAGDALENA
Huh. Alright. What was the reason why
you moved here?

LUNA
I don’t know. Maybe this was the
first and only place my parents
thought about. And you? Why did you
move here?

MAGDALENA
My Mom grew up here, unfortunately.

LUNA
Really?

MAGDALENA
A year ago.

CUT TO:

EXT. MAGDALENA’S SCHOOL. LATER.

The Two Girls are walking on another street, close to


MAGDALENA’S SCHOOL.

LUNA sees a photo on the wall. A big massive wallpaper of a


Halloween pumpkin, smiling on a macabre way to us. The
wallpaper has two titles. The title from up the pumpkin says:
HALLOWEEN SCHOOL BALL DANCE. Title from down the pumpkin says
OCTOBER 31, 1988. MAGDALENA realizes she’s watching the
wallpaper.

MAGDALENA
You want to go to that?

LUNA
I don’t know.

MAGDALENA
Trust me, you don’t want to go to
that.

LUNA
Why?

MAGDALENA
I don't know. I mean, what if you get
bored?

LUNA
Why would i get bored?

MAGDALENA
Have you ever been to a school dance
before?

LUNA
No. Why? You just go to school and
you start dancing in front of
everybody? Is that what it is?

MAGDALENA
No, basically it’s just this cheesy
school dance where people get dressed
in costumes and dance and talk about
stuff. It’s basically the same thing
every year.

MAGDALENA starts to walk off. So does LUNA.

LUNA
You should teach me how to dance one
day.

CUT TO:

EXT. STORE. LATER.

LUNA and MAGDALENA walk to the store.

INT. STORE. SAME.

MAGDALENA and LUNA enter the store.


MAGDALENA
Want anything from the store? You can
have anything from here. Of course,
everything in here is paid,
so......If you want anything, I can
pay it. I got cash.

LUNA looks around. She has never been in a store before.

She starts walking around, seeing if she can find something


MAGDALENA could buy to her.

LUNA
That's okay. I don't want anything.

MAGDALENA
Oh. Alright then. Wait here.

MAGDALENA is beginning to look for something, while LUNA just


waits.

LUNA then finds a newspaper and reads the cover:

WHO KILLED THE MAN ON THE FOREST?

Another newspaper says the next thing:

10 PM, IS IT SAFE TO GO OUTSIDE AT NIGHT?

While LUNA looks at the newspapers, MAGDALENA is finishing


paying her stuff.

MAGDALENA just paid for what she just bought: RED ORIGINAL
SKITTLES.

She approaches to LUNA, who's, still, looking at the


newspapers.

MAGDALENA
Do you really believe in that? What
do you think?

LUNA
I don't know what to believe in.

The two girls walk out.

cut to:

INT. TOWN STREET - MOMENTS LATER


MAGDALENA is eating her Skittles while LUNA walks alongside
her.

MAGDALENA
Want some?

LUNA
No. No, thank you.

MAGDALENA
Suit yourself.

LUNA then notices something on Magdalena's face. It looks like


a bruise. A big bad bruise. A bruise that was obviously made
by someone.

LUNA
What happened there?

MAGDALENA
It's -- it's nothing. Alright? It's
nothing, you don't have to worry
about it--

LUNA
MAGDALENA.

MAGDALENA
Yeah?

LUNA
Someone did that to you, right?

MAGDALENA needs to tell the truth now. She has been busted.

LUNA
Am i right? Did somebody did that to
you?

MAGDALENA sighs.

MAGDALENA
It's -- My dad.

LUNA
Your dad? What did he do to you?

MAGDALENA
I really don't want to talk about it-
-

LUNA stops right in front of her. MAGDALENA stops as well.


LUNA
What did he do to you? MAGDALENA,
answer me right now. I'm gonna keep
asking.

MAGDALENA sighs.

MAGDALENA
He -- He got drunk one night. He
arrived drunk. I was sleeping. He --
He arrived into the room. He told me
how much he loved me. And he just --
He grabbed me, pulled my hair, and
then he -- and then he -- he --

The tears don't take long in showing up. She begins to cry.
LUNA understands her pain. She comforts MAGDALENA. She
embraces and hugs and holds strongly on MAGDALENA.

LUNA
Hey. It's alright. You can cry if you
want.

MAGDALENA cries. LUNA lets her cry.

LUNA
That's it. That's it. Cry.

After a few moments, MAGDALENA stops crying. She sniffs and


cleans her tears.

LUNA
Why can't you just leave him?

MAGDALENA
You don't understand the things he
would do to me if i leave him. He's a
lot more stronger than me. He's
controlling me all the time. If i
ever leave him, he will search for me
and he will rape me and kill me.

LUNA understands it. She understands that MAGDALENA can't


escape her Dad that easily.

LUNA
Magdalena, listen to me.

MAGDALENA
What?

LUNA
I can help you.
MAGDALENA
Well, you can't.

LUNA
Why do you think i can't?

MAGDALENA
Well, you are a girl. If you try
defending me from him, he'll destroy
you in seconds.

LUNA
And do you think that because I'm a
woman i don't have the right to
defend you from him? There are lots
of things you don’t know about me.
Magda, you can say anything you want
about me, but i swear i’m more
stronger and capable than him. Trust
me.

MAGDALENA looks convinced.

MAGDALENA
Ok. You can help me.

They look at each other for a moment.

cut to:

INT. NEIGHBORHOOD. LATER.

LUNA and MAGDALENA arrive to their neighborhood.

MAGDALENA
What a smooth first date.

LUNA
Is that what this was?

MAGDALENA
Yeah.

LUNA
Wow.

MAGDALENA
What wow?

LUNA
I don't know. This is like -- my
first date ever. I haven't got any
dates before.

MAGDALENA
Do you even leave your house at
least?

LUNA
Sometimes, but i'm not that sociable
with people.

MAGDALENA
Huh. Well, if you can you can be
sociable with me. I have no problem
talking some things with you.

LUNA
Thanks.

They look at each other for a moment.

Then, LUNA slowly approaches her face to MAGDALENA --

-- and LUNA kisses her on the cheek. On a slow, delicate way.


She aparts, embarrassed.

LUNA
Sorry.

Magdalena smiles.

MAGDALENA
What for? There's nothing to forgive.

LUNA
Really?

MAGDALENA
Really. So, see you tomorrow?

LUNA
I guess. Yeah. So...bye i guess.

MAGDALENA
Yeah, Bye i guess.

The two girls walk to their houses. Then, MAGDALENA turns to


LUNA.

MAGDALENA
WE CAN GO!
LUNA turns.

LUNA
What?

MAGDALENA
The Halloween School Ball Dance! We
can go! I'll teach you how to dance!

A smile is formed on Luna's face.

LUNA
Really?

MAGDALENA
Really.

LUNA
Thanks.

MAGDALENA
No problem.

The two turn to the doors of their houses.

CUT TO:

INT. SCHOOL AUDITORIUM. THE NEXT DAY.

Inside A HUGE AUDITORIUM, we see all the kids from school,


from kindergarten to the eight graders. With the parents of
them. They're all gathered, and sitting on chairs, looking at
a policeman in front. The teachers, including Mr. Stoker, are
on the stage, sitting on chairs.

POLICEMAN
Ladies and gentlemen, thank you so
much for coming and assisted on this
small reunion. You might not know
this, but, if you do, last night
there was a terrible accident, where
one of your most youngest students
got attacked, decapitated and
dismembered.

There's a gasp between the students. They're all chatting.


MAGDALENA pays so much attention to this. Isidora lunges to
her.

ISIDORA
(whispering)
I really hope they catch this fucking
person. Whoever he or she is.

She lunges back to her position.

POLICEMAN
But, don't be alarmed, we're solving
this case. And, we're about to catch
whoever did it.. So, we're asking for
your cooperation. If you see
anything, unusual as we say, please
contact us. I can assure you that
there's nothing to fear. I promise
that everything will go back to be
the way it was. I can assure you
that. I promise that, and i'm not
sure when, but i promise you that
everything will go back to be normal.
I promise you that.

cut to:

INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY. LATER.

After school. All the students start to exit the school as


they walk on the hallway. MAGDALENA walks with her backpack.

ISIDORA
MAGDALENA! MAGDALENA!

She turns, to see Isidora running to her. Isidora stops


running as she stumbles on MAGDALENA.

MAGDALENA
Yeah?

ISIDORA
Listen, have you ever went to friend
reunions?

MAGDALENA
What? What do you mean by that?

ISIDORA
I mean, have you ever been in a
reunion with your friends in a place,
laughing and complaining about life?

MAGDALENA
No, i haven't. Why?

ISIDORA
Well, me and some friends and guys
from another School are going to make
a reunion at their apartment this
Saturday. And, I was wondering if you
would like to come.

MAGDALENA thinks.

MAGDALENA
It'll be on Saturday?

ISIDORA
Yeah, and it will be it'll Sunday
morning. Of course, if you have any
problem with that.

MAGDALENA
No, i don't.

ISIDORA
Great. So, you can come at that day?

MAGDALENA
Maybe, yeah. Sure.

ISIDORA
Great.

Isidora hands MAGDALENA a note with writing on it. She takes


it.

ISIDORA
That's the address.

MAGDALENA
Thank you.

ISIDORA
(smiles)
You're welcome.

Isidora starts walking off. So as MAGDALENA, who looks happy.


She walks off too.

Off screen laughing.

cut to:

INT. FRIENDS' APARTMENT - MAIN ROOM. SATURDAY. DUSK.

Sitting on the ground, there's MAGDALENA. With Isidora and her


friends, Adriano, Balta, Juan, who’s the youngest of the
group, of 13 years old, and Alvaro. They're all 14. They're
laughing and they're all drinking Coca-Colas.

JUAN
Jesus, that's so funny.

ALVARO
So, MAGDALENA, right?

MAGDALENA
Yeah, that's me.

ALVARO
You know, Isidora here has been
telling us a lot about you.

MAGDALENA
Really?

JUAN
Yeah.

ADRIANO
Ok, a serious question right now. If
you guys could be the owners of the
world, what would you guys do with
it??

SILENCE; no one answers.

ADRIANO
Come on, guys, this is a life and
death question. MAGDALENA, quick,
what would you do with it??

MAGDALENA doesn't know what to answer. She's stuttering.

MAGDALENA
I don't know. Nothing?

ADRIANO
Exactly! That's it! That's the whole
fucking answer to it! Nothing.
Instead of buying all the world's
most expensive cars, we're just going
to spend our time, looking at the
sky, wondering what the holy fuck did
we did wrong.

ALVARO
True.

JUAN
You know who we should share the
world with? A girl. All I'm saying is
that really is a girl what we need in
our lives. A girl who loves us by who
we are. I mean, we're all friends in
here. We're trusted. Every secret you
tell, it's hidden with and to us. So,
MAGDALENA, you can trust in us. Every
secret you tell to us, we'll keep it
hidden.

MAGDALENA is on silence. She's thinking "probably what they're


saying is true".

LATER:

They all continue laughing and talking.

MAGDALENA
Shut up!

JUAN
Come on, Magda. You have to say it.

MAGDALENA
I won't!

ISIDORA
Guys, leave her alone.

ADRIANO
Not until she tells us. Now, do you
talked to a girl or not?

Silence. Then, MAGDALENA explains out of his mouth.

MAGDALENA
Ok, fine. Yes, I've been talking to a
girl all this time.

JUAN
Good! That's all we wanted to hear!

ADRIANO
And is she...is she pretty?

ISIDORA
Oh shut up Adriano!

ADRIANO
What?
MAGDALENA
Yeah, she's pretty and all.

ISIDORA
I bet she's more prettier than
Adriano's mom.

They all laugh. Adriano throws an empty Coca-Cola can to


Isidora.

ADRIANO
Fuck all of you!

cut to:

INT. ISIDORA'S APARTMENT - BUNK-BED ROOM. NIGHT.

In a bunk bed, Juan is sleeping up and MAGDALENA is sleeping


down. On the second bunk bed, the one that's next to them,
ISIDORA is sleeping up, while Balta is sleeping down.

CUT TO:

INT. ALVARO'S CAR. MORNING.

Alvaro is driving to MAGDALENA's neighborhood. MAGDALENA is in


the front seat. The bloody hand mark that used to be on her
cheek is now washed off.

ALVARO
Here it is, right?

MAGDALENA
Yeah.

The Car stops.

ALVARO
Alright, so i guess i'll see you next
time.

MAGDALENA
Yeah. Next time.

ALVARO
Just in case.

MAGDALENA
What?

ALVARO
If in Halloween, you don't have
anywhere, or anyone, to put you some
makeup -- Well, Juan is a good kid on
putting make ups on, so....

MAGDALENA
That would be great, yeah.

ALVARO
Also, you can introduce us to that
girl you were talking about.

MAGDALENA
Sure.

ALVARO
Alright. Good. That's it. See you on
Halloween?

MAGDALENA
On Halloween. You got it.

MAGDALENA gets out of the car. MAGDALENA walks to her house,


and the car drives away.

CUT TO:

INT. CLASSROOM. THE DAY LATER - MORNING.

Javier is writing on his notebook. He is writing a poem. We


can clearly see what he's writing:

Your skin is white like milk


Your eyes are the deepest red eyes
I've ever seen
Your face drives me crazy, all of
your expressions say a lot of things
You've got that kind of smile
It makes a man like me go crazy
You've got those kind of eyes
Shining bright like the night
You've got that taste in your mouth
So tasty, so wild
I hope we will survive this dark
night as we go through
And if we're alone in the dark, can
you let me take a bite of you?
Marco looks at it. BULLY #1 sees Javier writing something on a
note.

CUT TO:

INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY. LATER.

Recess. Javier is walking around. BULLY #1 pushes him, he's


with his goon.

BULLY #1
Well, well, well, how is it going you
fucking fairy?

Javier turns to him.

JAVIER
Jesus fucking Christ. What is it now?
You're gonna call me a faggot again?
Like those other 1 billion times you
did before?

BULLY #1
I saw you writing something on Rivas'
class, what was it?

Beat.

JAVIER
That's none of your fucking business.

As he turns, BULLY #1 makes him turn back to him.

BULLY #1
I'm not finished in here, faggot.

JAVIER
You see? Now that's 1 billion and one
times now that you've called me a
faggot.
(returning to the main
theme)
Leave me alone.

BULLY #2
Want us to leave you alone? Give me
what you just wrote on Rivas' class?

Javier refuses. He makes The bully to let go of him.

JAVIER
Fuck you, man. Why don't you just go
fuck your mom with a 18-inch strap on
and go fuck yourself? For once, do
everyone here a favor and go fuck
yourself, please!

Javier turns. BULLY #1 doesn't want the things to end like


this.

BULLY #1
What was it that you wrote on Rivas'
class? Was it a poem? Owww, what is
it? You have a boyfriend now? Did you
sucked his dick? Did he suck your
dick?

JAVIER
(not caring to look back)

Yeah, turns out that my boyfriend is called "Your fat fucking


Mom". Man, it felt good when i double-fucked her.

BULLY #1 is furious now. He walks faster to Marco.

BULLY #1
What the fuck did you said about my
Mom, you fucking disgusting faggot?
It's not my fault that you have no
parents! That's right! You're an
orphan!

Javier pushes Javier, who freezes and turns.

JAVIER
What did you said about my family,
you fucking retarded mongoloid?

BULLY #1
I said. that you are. a fucking.
orpha--

Then --

-- WHAM! He punches BULLY on the face! Everyone, including


BULLY #2, say "Ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh!". BULLY #1 and
Javier start to fight. Javier is winning. He beats, kicks and
punches the bully with all his strength! THE PRINCIPAL
approaches and breaks the fight. He holds on Javier and sends
him to his office. Javier resists, he wants to continue the
fight.

JAVIER
(to beaten up BULLY)
LOOK AT ME! I HAVE A FAMILY! I HAVE A
FAMILY AND THEY'LL KILL YOU! THEY'LL
KILL YOU YOU FUCKING BASTARD! I WILL
KILL YOU! I'LL -- LET ME GO YOU
FUCKING BITCH! I'LL FUCKING FUCK YOU
UP YOU FUCKING BROKEN CONDOM! FUCK
YOU!

He is sent to the principal's office.

CUT TO:

INT. VANIA'S ROOM - LATER.

Javier and Vania are kissing. With a romantic, sexual,


explicit, sensual and erotic passion. They moan as they kiss.

She touches his crotch. He touches her crotch. The couple


moans.

Vania kisses his neck. Javier moans.

JAVIER
(trying to catch his breath)
I can't fucking hold it anymore.

VANIA
What?

He throws her into the bed. He begins to kiss her. They kiss.
They kiss again and again, and again, and again, and again and
again, and again, and again, and again. Without stopping.

VANIA
Undress me. Please. I want you to see
my body.

JAVIER
With pleasure, Mistress.

Javier begins to undress her. He takes off all of Vania's


clothes. Now, she's fully naked, as her breasts and her crotch
is being visible for Javier and for the audience. Javier can't
believe what he's seeing.

JAVIER
It's so -- It's so...

He kisses her breasts. Vania moans, she moans harder the next
time.
Javier begins to undress himself. He is now fully naked. He
keeps kissing on Vania's breasts. He sucks on them. Then,
Javier begins to go down on Vania's body, giving kisses
everywhere he can on Vania's well-carved body.

Then, he sees her crotch. It's not hairy.

JAVIER
Whoa.

Then, he begins to give Vania some oral sex on her crotch. She
moans, harder the next time as Javier keeps doing the action.
A moment of Vania moaning like a wild girl and Javier doing
the action.

VANIA
Stop -- Stop --

Javier wonders, he stops. He is upset.

JAVIER
I'm sorry. I -- I probably did
something wrong, right?

VANIA
No, i wanted to say: Stop teasing me
and just do it already.

Javier looks convinced. He kisses Vania as he goes atop of


her.

We slowly turn to the window, as we can hear both Javier and


Vania moaning. It is clear that Javier entered Vania. He is
now penetrating her (OFF SCREEN).

The windows are covered with pieces of newspapers. Then, the


NIGHT slowly turns into the day.

And as soon as the day arrives, the moaning stops. Silence


emerges.

We slowly turn back to see --

-- JAVIER AND VANIA, sleeping together. Their naked bodies are


being covered by the sheets.

Javier slowly wakes up as he groans. He looks around, then he


rests his head on the pillow. He sees Vania sleeping next to
him. He caresses her face. Then, he looks at the clock on the
furniture next to the bed: IT'S 8:49 AM. He rushes out of the
bed.

JAVIER
Shit!

CUT TO:

EXT. SCHOOL. LATER.

Javier arrives at the school, wearing his normal everyday


clothes.

Javier walks on the outside of the school, smiling


uncontrollably. He enters the school.

CUT TO:

INT. HOSPITAL TREATING ROOM. LATER.

Javier is with his Grandma, who's still sleeping on the bed.


Javier is sitting on a chair next to the bed.

JAVIER
Hey, Grandma. It's me, again. How are
you?

Even though Grandma is still asleep, and doesn't react to the


conversation, Javier still talks to her.

JAVIER
You've been doing good? You got the
chance to meet a lot of people here?
Maybe a couple of doctors, nurses,
maybe other patients, maybe? No? It's
good that you're doing good, you
know.

Javier is not sure if he should say the next thing. But he


needs to say it anyway. So, here he goes:

JAVIER
"Sometimes I rise up from the bed to
see you -- and you're not there.
What's going on? You're hiding
something from me, aren't you? 'cause
if you are, i need you to tell me
what it is so i could know, alright?
Help your poor sick old grandmother
here for a little while, alright?"
That's what you told me the other
day, at lunch. You wanted to know
what I did at night. Well,
(sighs)
I'm telling you now.
He is now ready to tell what his night job is.

JAVIER
Grandma, all i need you to do is
believe me. I know that what i am
about to tell you will sound weird to
you, but it's the truth.
(beat; silence)
Grandpa, I -- I provide blood for a
family of vampires that's living next
door to us.

Silence.

JAVIER
You didn't heard? I said: I provide
blood for a family of vampires that's
living next door to us. I know that
sounds completely weird, but it's
true. They treated me like a son. I
even started to consider them my
family. Even though they kill people
to survive. Do you believe me now?

Suddenly, the beeping machine starts to beep faster, and


faster, and faster, until --

-- IT GOES FLAT LINE! BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!

JAVIER
Grandma? Grandma?

He rises and shakes her up. He's not waking up. Oh shit.

Javier, startled, scared, rises up from the chair and runs


outside of the room.

JAVIER
Help! Help! Somebody help!

A NURSE approaches.

NURSE
What is it?

JAVIER
It's my grandpa--

Suddenly, all the sounds become inaudible. ANGLE: AS WE'RE


NEXT TO GRANDMA, WE SEE SOME DOCTORS RUNNING TO HER, TRYING TO
BRING HER BACK. ALL WE CAN HEAR IS THE BEEPING MACHINE,
SAYING: BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!
CUT TO:

INT. TAVERNER'S HILL CEMETERY. DUSK.

Javier is the only one there. He's on a black suit with a


white shirt and a black tie. He sees how they're putting his
Grandpa's grave down. His face? Saddened. He is destroyed. An
emotional, sad, melancholic music begins to sound as a
background music. It should sound beautiful and heartbreaking.
But what the hell, it's part of the soundtrack anyways.

CUT TO:

INT. NEIGHBORHOOD. LATER.

Javier, still on his suit, walks on the neighborhood. He


enters his own house.

CUT TO:

INT. JAVIER'S HOUSE - DINING ROOM. MINUTES LATER.

As JAVIER, still on his suit, is sitting on the chair, he has


his hands on his eyes. He is crying.

CUT TO:

INT. THE RED HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. A FEW NIGHTS LATER. HALLOWEEN
NIGHT.

Luna, dressing up in a female Mil-Tec shirt, alongside some


blue jeans and black boots, walks to the door of the house.

VANIA
Hey, where do you think you are you
going, missy?

LUNA
Um, let's just say I'm going out on a
date.

VANIA
A date?

MATEO
What the fuck?

VANIA
A date with who?
LUNA
Someone special. Someone you will
really like. Bye.

She leaves the house. Vania and Mateo are left there,
confused.

CUT TO:

EXT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE. HALLOWEEN NIGHT.

LUNA knocks on the door.

She patiently waits for a moment.

Then, the door opens. She smiles, but her smile quickly fades
away when she sees Bastian, who opened the door. He grins at
her.

BASTIAN
Yes? May i help you?

LUNA
Hi -- Uh -- I was just looking for
your daughter MAGDALENA.

BASTIAN
And why would that be?

LUNA
I -- I'm going out with her -- The
Halloween School Ball Dance?

He can't stop grinning and smiling at her.

BASTIAN
You want to ask my daughter out?

LUNA
Yeah, is she here?

MAGDALENA (O.S)
I'm coming!

Bastian enters back into the house.

FRONT-FRAMING: WE SEE LUNA'S FACE, THAT CHANGES FROM A RELIEVED FACE TO AN


AMAZED FACE. SHE LOOKS AT US AND SEES SOMETHING THAT AMAZES HER, STUNS HER,
SOMETHING THAT MAKES HER FALL IN LOVE INSTANTLY:
SHE SEES MAGDALENA, ON A CUTE Little Red Riding Hood Halloween
costume. she walks to LUNA.

MAGDALENA
Hi.

LUNA
Hi. Uh, ready to go?

MAGDALENA
Sure.

MAGDALENA and LUNA walk off.

CUT TO:

INT. STREET. MINUTES LATER.

LUNA and MAGDALENA walk together, they talk with each other.

JUAN (O.S)
OK. Alright, wait, hold on.

CUT TO:

INT. FRIENDS' APARTMENT - MAIN ROOM. LATER.

JUAN is putting some make-up on Luna's face. Luna has her eyes
closed.

JUAN
Look up, up. There we go. That's it.
And, done.

He's done. He's finished. He opens a small mirror to make Luna


look at herself. He hands it to Luna.

JUAN
What do you think?

But the problem is that: Luna can't look at her face in the
small mirror. She is a vampire. Vampires can't look at
themselves on the mirrors.

Luna has a SKULL MAKEUP on her Face. A beautiful skull makeup.

Luna closes the small mirror and hands it back to JUAN.

JUAN
Well, how is it? Is it good?

LUNA
(pretending she saw herself
on the small mirror)
It's very pretty. How did you learn
to do this?

JUAN
I don't know. I guess my talent is
being so good at doing something like
makeup. I guess. You like it?

LUNA
It's amazing. Yeah.

MAGDALENA (ON BATHROOM)


I'm definitely not going like this!

JUAN walks to the bathroom. Luna looks at him, going there.


JUAN tries to open the door of the bathroom, but it's locked.

JUAN
You even locked the fucking door?

MAGDALENA
Don't open it. I look ridiculous.

JUAN
How the fuck do you expect me to open
the door if the door's fucking
locked?!

Luna walks around. She rests her back on a wall. ADRIANO,


nervous, awkwardly approaches to her.

ADRIANO
Hi.

Luna gets to notice him.

LUNA
Hi.

ADRIANO
You're -- Magdalena's friend, right?

LUNA
That's me.

JUAN
(turns to adriano)
Jesus Christ, Adriano!

ADRIANO
What?
JUAN
Stop trying to flirt with her! It
won't work!

MAGDALENA (ON BATHROOM)


Is Adriano flirting with her?!

LUNA
(to adriano)
You were trying to flirt with me?

ADRIANO
(to luna)
What?! No!

JUAN
Aren't you supposed to -- You know
what? Get the fuck away from her. Go
see if there are any kids at the
door.

ADRIANO
I don't think kids come on apartments
on Halloween night.

JUAN
Yes, they do! Go check if there are
any.

Adriano sighs.

He walks to the front door. Luna lets out a tender chuckle.


She looks at the bathroom door. JUAN turns and keeps knocking
on the bathroom door.

JUAN
Come on, Magda! Come on, have you
ever seen the EVIL DEAD films? You
saw how those guys had zombie makeups
to look like it was completely real?

MAGDALENA finally opens the door. Luna looks. Then, LUNA'S


FACE, THAT CHANGES FROM A NORMAL FACE TO AN AMAZED FACE. SHE
LOOKS AT US AND SEES SOMETHING THAT AMAZES HER, STUNS HER,
SOMETHING THAT MAKES HER FALL IN LOVE INSTANTLY:

She sees MAGDALENA, with a Little Red Riding Hood costume, and
zombie makeup on her face.

MAGDALENA
Yes, i saw them, alright? I saw the
films. I don't think the EVIL DEAD
guys wore makeup like the one I'm
wearing right now. I don't think
those guys ever wore makeup like this
in their entire life.

JUAN
Trust me. They did.

MAGDALENA
I look ridiculous.

JUAN
You look great.
(turns to luna)
Right?

LUNA
Yeah. Yeah, she looks -- She looks
great.

MAGDALENA smiles. A blush can be noticed on her face. And on


Luna's face too. ISIDORA, with a Michael Myers mask and suit,
walks to the trio.

ISIDORA
Are we ready to go?

They all nod.

ISIDORA
Alright then. Let's go.

JUAN, Isidora, MAGDALENA and Luna walk to the main door.

JUAN
(to the others in the
apartment)
See you guys later!

The foursome finally exits the apartment.

CUT TO:

INT. CRAWFORD'S APARTMENT - BEDROOM. SAME.

CRAWFORD and DON are kissing passionately and erotically while


lying on Crawford's bed.

INT. CRAWFORD'S APARTMENT - HALLWAY. MINUTES LATER.

Exiting the emergency stairs, Mateo walks faster to Crawford's


door. He walks with such fiery anger and fury on his red eyes.
As he arrives to Crawford's door, he knocks on it three times.
No answer. He knocks on it three times again, and no answer.
Then -- HE STRONGLY BANGS ON IT SEVERAL TIMES. HE KICKS IT AND
STRONGLY PUNCHES ON IT SEVERAL TIMES.

An OLD MAN, probably on his 70s, exits his own door.

OLD MAN
God damn you. God damn you. What the
hell is your problem?

MATEO
What do you mean what's my problem
you fucking old bastard? I'm here to
see a friend you sick old fuck.

The OLD MAN is taken aback by those words. He doesn't defend


himself, he just lets those words sink in.

OLD MAN
Oh. Alright then.

He walks back to his own place. Crawford opens his door. He


realizes about the guy knocking on his door.

CRAWFORD
Mateo?

Mateo looks at him.

CUT TO:

INT. CRAWFORD'S APARTMENT - MAIN ROOM. SECONDS LATER.

Crawford lets Mateo in. Crawford closes the door behind him.
Mateo just enters into the apartment and begins to walk
around.

CRAWFORD
What are you doing here?

MATEO
I just wanted to say hello. I wanted
to see how you were, that's all.

CRAWFORD
Well, i'm fine here. I'm fine. And
you? How are you?

MATEO
I'm good, you know. I've never felt
better.
CRAWFORD
Alright.
(silence)
Listen, i think you've arrived on a
very bad time, because --

MATEO
Why?

CRAWFORD
Because i've --

Crawford notices his boyfriend, Don, exiting the room. He is


wearing his boxers and Crawford's jacket. Nothing else. Mateo
notices it too.

MATEO
Ah, i see why.

DON
Who is this guy?

CRAWFORD
Nobody, he's just a friend --

MATEO
(looks back at Crawford)
Just a friend? After what we've done
together you just consider me as a
friend?

DON
Ford, what is he talking about?

MATEO
Yeah Ford, explain to him what am i
talking about.

Crawford stutters.

CRAWFORD
Look, Mateo. Whatever happened
between us was just an accident. That
was just some thing from the past.
I'm with someone else now. I just
want you to understand that --

MATEO
Yeah, yeah --

CRAWFORD
-- I'm with somebody else. And I
really hope that we, well, we --
MATEO
I know --

CRAWFORD
-- we can still be friends, you know.

MATEO
I know. I know. I understand.

CRAWFORD
Good. Thank you. It's good you
understand. I didn't wanted to hurt
you.

MATEO
You didn't. You didn't. In fact, you
know something?

CRAWFORD
Sure, what is it?

MATEO
You just broke something.

CRAWFORD
Really? I did? And what's that?

MATEO
My fucking heart.

Then, MATEO PUTS HIS HAND ON CRAWFORD'S CHEST! CRAWFORD


SCREAMS AS MATEO EXTRACTS SOMETHING FROM CRAWFORD'S CHEST --
HIS OWN BLOODY BEATING HEART!

Don watches, horrified.

DON
Oh God. What the fuck?!

Crawford keeps screaming, grunting and exclaiming in pain and


in agony. Mateo proceeds to take a bite from Crawford's heart.
Then, he throws it somewhere else. Mateo grabs Crawford by the
hair and walks to Crawford's own room. He places Crawford on
the place where the door closes. Mateo uses the door to SMASH
CRAWFORD'S HEAD SEVERAL TIMES! MATEO SMASHES THE HEAD SO
STRONGLY, SO SADISTICALLY, SO VIOLENTLY. He smashes the door
until CRAWFORD'S HEAD BREAKS IN HALF! CRAWFORD'S HEAD IS
SMASHED OPEN IN HALF, ONLY LEAVING HIS MOUTH IN HALF WITH THE
REST OF HIS BODY!

Mateo pants. Don cries.

DON
Why would -- Why the fuck would you
do that?! Oh God. Oh God.

Mateo doesn't answer. Don walks to the bedroom. He begins to


be both horrified and disgusted by seeing his boyfriend's dead
corpse whose face is smashed and cut in half in a gory graphic
way.

DON
Oh God. Oh fuck. Fuck. Fuck!

MATEO
I know, right? Fuck. Fuck fuck.
Fucking fuckity fuck fuck.
Motherfucking fucking fucking fucky
fuck fuck. Fuck, fuck, FUCK! FUCKING
FUCK!

He slowly turns to Don. MATEO smiles to him. But Don is


terrified and horrified. I think he just shit his pants out of
so much extreme fear.

CUT TO:

INT. CRAWFORD'S APARTMENT - BATHROOM. MINUTES LATER.

Mateo is washing his face. We see wet splattered blood falling


to the washer. As he finishes washing his face, he walks out
of the bathroom.

INT. CRAWFORD'S APARTMENT - MAIN ROOM. SECONDS LATER.

On the ground, we see DON'S DEAD BODY. He has his two eyes
torn from his face.

We slowly turn up to see --

-- Mateo, who walks out of the bathroom. He walks to a phone


that's on the wall. He dials the police number. The call
dials. Then, Mateo lets go of the phone, and lets it hanging.

ON PHONE
Taverner's Hill Police Department,
what is your emergency?

Mateo doesn't pay much attention to it. He just walks to the


main door. He exits Crawford's apartment.

CUT TO:
EXT. SCHOOL. LATER.

LUNA, JUAN, ISIDORA and MAGDALENA arrive at the school.

INT. SCHOOL GYM. SECONDS LATER.

All the disguised school kids are surrounded on the school


gym, where there’s the song TRANSMISSION by JOY DIVISION
sounding on the loudspeakers. Everyone is dancing, talking,
and chatting, all at the same time. IT’S THE HALLOWEEN BALL
DANCE.

LUNA is stunned. She is amazed. She has never been to a school


dance before.

MAGDALENA
Do you like it?

LUNA
Uh-huh! It's pretty! So this is what
a school party looks like, huh?

MAGDALENA
Come on, let's dance.

MAGDALENA and LUNA step into the crowd, into the dance floor.
MAGDALENA begins to be teaching LUNA how to dance. After a
moment of teaching LUNA how to dance, she begins to dance
well, she dances well to the rhythm of the song.

MAGDALENA
There you go. You got it. Don't let
go to that feeling.

MAGDALENA dances with her. The two dance happily and freely at
the rhythm of the song.

On the speakers, we hear the voice of Ian Curtis of Joy


Division.

JOY DIVISION
Dance, dance, dance, dance, dance, to
the radio
Dance, dance, dance, dance, dance, to
the radio
Dance, dance, dance, dance, dance, to
the radio
Dance, dance, dance, dance, dance, to
the radio

A moment of MAGDALENA and LUNA as they dance together,


laughing.
LUNA seems to be enjoying this. She hasn't felt this good in
her entire life.

CUT TO:

LATER:

Some are dancing, some are talking to each other, some are
sitting their asses on the seats.

Magdalena is looking for some drinks for her and for Luna.
Then, as she grabs two glasses with fruit punch, she turns to
Luna, and sees something that horrifies her:

She sees Federico approaching to her and trying to talk with


her. Luna obviously denies his enchantments towards her. She
sees Federico, trying to talk to Luna, trying to flirt with
Luna, trying to do everything with Luna.

Magdalena sees this as her chance. Her chance to stop this


once and for all. She leaves the drinks she prepared for her
and for Luna on a table.
She walks faster to the scene.

On Luna, she's having the worst time of her life. And why?
Because a rapist is talking to her.

FEDERICO
What's your name?

But Luna doesn't answer. She is strictly annoyed.

FEDERICO
Not talking, huh?

Luna tries to walk away, but Federico stops her.

Then, finally, Magdalena comes to the rescue. She aparts Luna


away from Federico.

MAGDALENA
(annoyed)
What the fuck do you think you're
doing, you fucking rapist?!

Federico is stunned and surprised to see Magdalena.

FEDERICO
Magdalena? What the fuck are you
doing here? What are you doing with
this girl? Is she your girlfriend or
something?
MAGDALENA
No! She's...She's my friend!
(to luna)
Come on, let's go.

The two try to walk out of the party, but Federico stops them.

FEDERICO
Where do you two think you're going?

MAGDALENA
What do you think we are going to,
asshole? We're going out.

As the two try to get out of Federico's way, he stops them.


They get annoyed. Magdalena and Federico start to argue. Luna
and Magdalena try to get out of his way again, and again, and
again. Until, on the last try:

FEDERICO
Me and my friends are gonna lead you
to the exit of this party, how about
that? It can be our little secret.

Says Federico, almost in a


convincing, seductive way.

MAGDALENA
You know what? Here's my secret to
you: Fuck you, Federico!

Magdalena immediately kicks Federico on the balls.


The same place that he used to penetrate Magdalena on that
night on the forest. Luna gets shocked and stunned. Federico
grunts in pain. He gets on his knees, both of his hands on his
crotch, looking down. Magdalena grabs Luna by the hand. They
walk out.

They walk out of the party.

INT. FOREST. LATER.

LUNA and MAGDALENA walk together on the forest.

LUNA
Sure you know there's a shortcut in
here?

MAGDALENA
Trust me, we're good. Don't be
scared.
They keep walking.

LUNA
You didn't mean it seriously, right?

MAGDALENA
Didn't meant what seriously?

LUNA
What you've said earlier. To that
guy.

MAGDALENA
What did i said to that guy?

LUNA
You know, that "friends" thing.

MAGDALENA
What "friends" thing?

Silence.

LUNA
Forget about it.

They keep on walking.

LUNA
Man, that guy. That guy was an
asshole. He couldn't leave us alone.
But you gave him a lesson.

MAGDALENA
Yeah, i guess i did.

The two chuckle.

Then, they hear some sounds. Some laughing noises. They turn
and see ELIZABETH AND HER GOONS WALKING, LAUGHING. They spot
MAGDALENA and LUNA.

ELIZABETH
Well, well, well. Look what we have
here. It's MAGDALENA. And she's with
a girl.

The goons begin to surround the two girls. There's no way out
for them.

MAGDALENA
What do you want now?
Elizabeth pushes MAGDALENA. LUNA pushes Elizabeth.

LUNA
Leave her the fuck alone!

ELIZABETH
Owww, look at this guys! She is
defending her girlfriend! Probably
because she is stronger than this
piece of shit!

MAGDALENA pushes Elizabeth again.

MAGDALENA
Fuck you.

Elizabeth punches MAGDALENA in the face. All of Elizabeth's


goons say "Oooooohhhhhhh". MAGDALENA yells and exclaims in
pain. She falls to the ground. LUNA gets on her knees, and
tries to comfort MAGDALENA.

ELIZABETH
Say "fuck you" one more time, and
I'll make everyone here to knock your
fucking teeth out.

LUNA then rises and slaps Elizabeth in the face. All of


Elizabeth's goons say "Oooooohhhhhhh". Elizabeth also slaps
LUNA on the face.

ELIZABETH
What's the matter you little bitch?
Did that hurt? Do you want to call
daddy to get you?

Then, LUNA grabs THE SAME HAND THAT ELIZABETH USED TO SLAP HER
AND BREAKS IT. ELIZABETH SCREAMS LIKE HELL!

MAGDALENA notices. She is confused but at the same time,


amazed.

LUNA
Owwww, what's the matter you little
bitch? Did that hurt? Do you want to
call daddy to get you?

ELIZABETH
She broke my hand! My fucking hand!

LUNA
Get the fuck out of here before i
knock your fucking teeth out, you
fucking dumb bitch!
Elizabeth pants and grunts in pain.

ELIZABETH
Let's go!

GUILLERMO
Are you sure--?

ELIZABETH
Yes, i'm sure! Let's go right now!

Elizabeth and her goons run away. LUNA pants, she walks off.

LUNA
Let's go, MAGDALENA.

MAGDALENA walks off too.

LATER:

The two are walking together. MAGDALENA still can't believe


what she just saw.

MAGDALENA
How did you do that?

LUNA
Did what?

MAGDALENA
You know, you broke her fucking arm.
How did you do it?

LUNA seems like this is the perfect time to confess her true
nature to her.

LUNA
There are a lot of things that you
don't know about me, MAGDALENA.

MAGDALENA
Oh yeah? Like what? What, are you a
vampire or something?

LUNA stops. MAGDALENA stops, wondering and confused.

MAGDALENA
What? What is it? Is there something
wrong?
LUNA doesn't want to talk. If she talks about it, it might
sound weird to MAGDALENA, and she (MAGDALENA) will think that
LUNA is crazy or something.

LUNA
I don't know. But, can we please,
just, not talk about it? Please.

MAGDALENA
Look, if you don't want to talk about
it, we don't have to talk about it.

LUNA
Good, I don't want to talk about it.

MAGDALENA
Fine.

CUT TO:

INT. STORE. LATER.

MAGDALENA & LUNA are on the store. They're walking around.

MAGDALENA
Sure you don't want anything?

LUNA
I'm OK, thank you.

MAGDALENA looks around. Then, she stops her eyes on THE


CASHIER, who has the appearance of a criminal. He attends a
buyer. MAGDALENA walks to LUNA.

MAGDALENA
Can i ask you something?

LUNA
Sure.

MAGDALENA
You see the cashier? The one over
there?

LUNA turns and sees the cashier.

LUNA
Yeah.

MAGDALENA
He used to be a criminal. He robbed
here. Once.
LUNA
((stunned))
What? Shut up.

MAGDALENA nods.

MAGDALENA
It's true.

LUNA
When?

MAGDALENA
A long time ago.

LUNA
Really? what did he stole from here?

MAGDALENA
From what i remember, he stole the
money from the register. I heard that
a week after the robbery, he got
arrested. Now he's back here. As the
cashier. Attending someone. Probably
he's here because he's forced to work
here or something.

LUNA
Whoa.

MAGDALENA then grabs a bag of Red Original Skittles. The Two


Girls walk to the cashier.

CUT TO:

EXT. STORE. LATER.

THE TWO GIRLS start to walk out the STORE.

MAGDALENA
Want some?

LUNA
No thanks. I'm not hungry.

MAGDALENA
I just forgot you're not supposed to
eat those kinds of stuff.

LUNA
Thanks for the offer though.
They keep walking.

MAGDALENA
There's a park nearby. You want to
sit on the swingers?

LUNA
Sure.

They approach to the swingers. LUNA starts to swing while


MAGDALENA starts eating the Skittles.

INT. THE RED HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. LATER.

All the lights are out. Darkness.

LUNA enters inside the house. She closes the door.

MATEO
Now i guess it's the time to talk.

The kitchen light goes on. MATEO turns it ON. He looks at LUNA
with a disappointment face.

LUNA
What is it?

MATEO
(shows written note to her)
What is this?

LUNA looks at her, watches with beat and fear. She freezes.

MATEO
You made a promise to me LUNA. What
does this note says?

LUNA
MATEO --

MATEO
What does this note says?

LUNA
I'll be back at 11 PM.

MATEO
You know what time is it, don't you?
It's like 3 in the morning. You
promised to me, in this note, that
you would be here at 11 PM. You've
been outside for 5 hours. You know
how i felt? I almost called the cops.

LUNA walks to her room.

MATEO
Oh, so you're gonna do it like this?
(follows her)
No apologies for making your bullshit
note--?

She is about to close her door.

MATEO
Hey, hey. Don't--

As LUNA closes it, MATEO OPENS IT WITH SO MUCH FURY INSIDE OF


HIM. It opens.

MATEO
DON'T CLOSE THIS DOOR ON ME!

LUNA turns, mad at MATEO.

MATEO
We need to talk, LUNA. You've done
something so serious. Why did you
left the house without telling?

LUNA
I did told you.

MATEO
Yeah, but with real words. Why didn't
you told me personally? What were you
doing outside? What did you went out
to do? Huh? You went to see that girl
again?

LUNA
She didn't saw me.

MATEO
You did saw her. You went somewhere
with her?

LUNA
No, just me.

MATEO
Really? Cause i can ask her right
now. I can knock her door and ask her
if she went with you.
He's about to walk out the house, when--

LUNA
Ok, i did.

MATEO turns back at her.

MATEO
You realize what you just did? You
made me worried. If you didn't
appeared by the night -- I was about
to call the cops. You know what would
have happened if i called the cops? I
would put the family at risk! And if
we are at risk, we're all fucked! All
i ask of you is that you do exactly
what i say, but you know something?
YOU CAN'T EVEN DO A THING LIKE THAT!

MATEO takes from his pocket, THE DOLLARS LUNA HAS BEEN
COLLECTING FROM HER VICTIMS.

MATEO
What is this?

LUNA looks at THE DOLLARS, she freezes again. She asks to


herself, how did he got them?

MATEO
You're gonna tell me what this is all
about? Where did this money came
from?

LUNA
It's just savings.

MATEO
Savings? What, you work now?

VANIA
What's going on in here?!

MATEO
Ask her! She's been out for like
hours!

VANIA
LUNA, why would you do something like
that?

MATEO
In her words, she visited a friend.
VANIA
LUNA, you know we have rules--

LUNA
Look i don't want to live under your
fucking rules! OK?! Why don't you
just give me the money and leave me
alone?!

MATEO
Where did you get this money?!

MATEO looks at her. Then, he comes to realize something really


fucked-up:

MATEO
Oh my God. Oh my God. What have you
been doing outside? How did you got
this money?

LUNA
It doesn't matter!

MATEO
ANSWER MY QUESTION! Where did you got
the money? Someone else gave it to
you? Did that "friend" gave it to
you?

LUNA
Nobody gave me that money, alright?!.

MATEO walks to his room.

MATEO
I'm keeping this. From now on, you're
grounded! You're not seeing her
again!

LUNA
You're not my father, you idiot! You
can't even look like Dad! YOU'RE NOT
LIKE HIM, ALRIGHT?! He's gone! OUR
PARENTS ARE DEAD! WE HAVE NO FAMILY!

VANIA
LUNA! STOP IT! STOP IT NOW!

MARCO
GUYS! CUT IT OUT! CUT IT THE FUCK
OUT!

The baby starts to cry.


VINKO
Oh, goddamn it.

Vinko runs to the main bedroom, where he starts to comfort the


baby.

MATEO
ALRIGHT, ENOUGH!

He SLAPS THE LIVING HELL OUT OF LUNA! VANIA GASPS! LUNA


freezes. MATEO pants strongly. LUNA then turns back at MATEO,
with RED EYES OF FURY.

The two brothers begin to have this massive fight.

LUNA closes the door.

LUNA
YOU FUCKING IDIOT! YOU'RE NOT LIKE
DAD AND YOU WILL NEVER BE LIKE HIM,
YOU FUCKING PIECE OF FUCKING SHIT!

MATEO....OPENS IT WITH ALL HIS FURY AND WITH ALL HIS INNER-
DEMONS INSIDE HIM! He enters inside the room.

MATEO
WHAT DID YOU JUST SAID?!
(slaps her)
You piece of shit!

VANIA
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST, YOU GUYS! STOP!

He fights her. He gets her up, trying to make her fight. VANIA
tries to stop the battle. Chaos erupts on the house.

MATEO
Fight back! I said fight back!

LUNA, sick of all this, then forces MATEO and the two exit the
room. LUNA holds him and he walks backwards faster being
pushed by LUNA, who now STRANGLES HIM AS MATEO FACES HIS BACK
ON THE WALL. She strongly grunts, MATEO tries to exit her
nonstop force.

LUNA
I CAN FUCKING KILL YOU, DID YOU KNOW
THAT?!

MATEO
STOP! LET ME GO!

LUNA
--KILL YOU! KILL--!

She can't talk. MATEO starts to get weak. Like he can't move.
Then, LUNA THROWS HIM TO THE GROUND. He falls, he grunts. He
coughs wildly.

And LUNA? She feels strong, fearless, with a grim


determination through her action, though she knows she fucked
up. She turns at his brother, coughing and grunting weakly on
the ground. She OUTSIDE. Vania is left there, shocked. She
runs to his little brother.

VANIA
Mateo! Mateo, are you alright? Are
you okay?

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK (OFF SCREEN)

CUT TO:

EXT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE. SAME.

MAGDALENA, still wearing her skull makeup, knocks on the door


of Magdalena's house.

LUNA
MAGDALENA, are you here? MAGDALENA?

No answer. Luna sighs. She then decides to crawl up the house.

INT. MAGDALENA'S ROOM. SAME.

MAGDALENA, with the zombie makeup washed off of her face,


sleeps on the night.

Luna crawls up outside of the house and, on the window, sees


MAGDALENA sleeping. Luna taps on the glass.

LUNA
MAGDALENA...!

No answer. She tries again, but no answer.

As she realizes the window is open, she opens it.

LUNA
MAGDALENA?

But no answer whatsoever.

Luna then sighs and enters the room. She closes the window.
MAGDALENA briskly wakes up. Luna climbs on bed in front of
MAGDALENA.

MAGDALENA
(surprised)
Luna? What are you doing here...?

Luna shushes MAGDALENA...

...and kisses her. MAGDALENA is surprised. Luna kisses her


again. And again and again and again and again and again. Luna
kisses Magdalena's neck. MAGDALENA gasps, but at the same
time, she moans. That gasp she made is combined with a moan.
MAGDALENA gives up. She gives up to endless pleasure. She lies
on the bed. Luna is atop of her. Luna kisses MAGDALENA on her
mouth and on Magdalena's neck, making MAGDALENA to moan
uncontrollably.

MAGDALENA wants to say something, but she's afraid she would


mess up the sexual tension or something.

LUNA
MAGDALENA?

MAGDALENA
Yeah? What is it?

LUNA
DO you -- Do you --

MAGDALENA thinks that she herself knows what Luna is about to


say. Something like "Do you like me?". But, instead:

LUNA
Do you -- Do you feel uncomfortable
right now?

MAGDALENA
Why? Why should i feel uncomfortable?
Is there a reason of why i should
feel uncomfortable right now?

LUNA
No, nothing. Just -- forget what i
said.

MAGDALENA
Oh. OK then.

LUNA begins to kiss MAGDALENA's neck. So softly, so slowly, in


such a delicate manner. MAGDALENA reacts to this with her eyes
closed, making moaning sounds.
MAGDALENA
Oh. Oh. Ah.

LUNA
I love those sounds, keep making
them.

MAGDALENA
Okay.

As Luna keeps kissing her neck, MAGDALENA keeps moaning.

LUNA stops. MAGDALENA wonders.

MAGDALENA
What is it? Why did you stopped? Is
there something wrong?

LUNA
No, it's nothing, it's just -- I'm
kind of nervous about it.

MAGDALENA thinks about what she just said. MAGDALENA takes her
face cheeks with her hands.

MAGDALENA
It's alright.

MAGDALENA kisses her on the lips. Again, and again, and again,
and again, and again and again, and again, and again, and
again.

LUNA
(stops, and looks at
MAGDALENA)
Want me to continue?

MAGDALENA thinks about it for a second.

MAGDALENA
Sure.

They kiss. They kiss again and again, and again, and again,
and again and again, and again, and again, and again. Without
stopping. Then, LUNA begins to undress MAGDALENA. Magdalena's
breasts are visible for LUNA and for the public. LUNA begins
to suck on them, making MAGDALENA to moan. She moans wildly
this time. The pleasure is unavoidable for her. MAGDALENA is
now fully naked. Luna begins to undress herself. Luna is now
also naked. Now there's two naked girls on a bed. LUNA begins
to go down on Magdalena's body, giving kisses everywhere she
can on Magdalena's well-carved body.
Then, Luna begins to touch and do fingering on Magdalena's
private part. MAGDALENA grunts in pain for a while.

LUNA
It's alright. It begins to hurt
first, but then you start to feel the
pleasure of it.

Luna keeps doing it. MAGDALENA begins to moan in pleasure.


Luna then begins to do oral sex on MAGDALENA, as she moans.

We slowly turn to the window. As we hear how MAGDALENA is


doing nothing but moaning.

Then, after a few seconds of moaning -- we slowly turn back to


the scene, where we see --

-- the after sex scene. MAGDALENA is sleeping naked on the


bed, while a naked Luna is lying atop of her. Their bodies are
being covered by the sheets.

Luna can't sleep. She doesn't feel like in the mood for
sleeping. We already know the reason why.

She looks at MAGDALENA and kisses her on the mouth. MAGDALENA


wakes up. She smiles when she sees Luna.

MAGDALENA
Hey.

They kiss on the mouth.

SECONDS LATER:

Luna is lying on the right side of the bed. MAGDALENA is lying


on the left side of the bed. Their privates are being covered
by the sheets. Their breasts are visible to the audience.

LUNA
Is this your first time with a woman?

MAGDALENA nods, upset.

LUNA
Hey, it's alright. There's always
first times and last times. Actually,
I'm gld i was your first time.

MAGDALENA
(smiles)
Yeah?
LUNA
Yeah. You never had relationships
before?

MAGDALENA
I had a boyfriend once, but he ended
up cheating on me.

LUNA
How?

MAGDALENA
He slept with my best friend.

LUNA
What a fucking prick.

MAGDALENA chuckles.

LUNA
Do you feel uncomfortable with all of
this?

MAGDALENA
No, it's fine.

Silence.

MAGDALENA
How did you do it?

LUNA
DO what?

MAGDALENA
You know...How did you entered into
my room? This house has two floors.
How did you do it?

Beat. LUNA doesn't want to talk (about it). If she talks about
it, it might sound weird to MAGDALENA, and she (MAGDALENA)
will think that LUNA is crazy or something.

LUNA
I don't know. I don't know what is
it, but i have to tell you something.

MAGDALENA
Alright.

LUNA takes a moment. She inhales and exhales. She sighs.

LUNA
My family, and Me, we're -- We are --

MAGDALENA
What? You guys are what?? What are
you guys, really.

LUNA
((looks at her))
I-I don't know. I don't know who we
are. I don't even know what we are.
I'll be asking myself those questions
for the rest of my life.

MAGDALENA
This -- This might sound ridiculous
but --

Fuck it. She has to ask her anyway. Even if it sounds


ridiculous and awkward and weird and fucked-up. She has to do
it. Fuck it.

MAGDALENA
Are you guys -- like -- vampires?

LUNA freezes.

LUNA
Do we kill to survive? We do. Do we
murder mercilessly? We do. Did we
lived forever? We did. Can i climb
walls like a fucking spider? I can.

MAGDALENA
So, all those missing people. All
those people found dead in the past -
-

Yep. It was them. All of it. LUNA looks down, sadly nods.

LUNA
For a very long time I've been
wanting to be someone else. I tried
to be someone else. But i couldn't
be. I tried to help people, but when
i do i end up killing them.

MAGDALENA can't believe what she's hearing. Is this all true?

MAGDALENA
Your teeth. Let me see them.

LUNA
Why?
MAGDALENA
So i can know that what you're saying
is true.

LUNA
What I'm saying is true.

MAGDALENA
Really? It is?

LUNA
Yeah.

MAGDALENA
Then, let me see your teeth.

LUNA sighs. She opens her mouth in a grotesque way. She shows
her fangs to MAGDALENA. MAGDALENA tries to look at the fangs.
Then, as she sees the fangs on Luna's teeth, MAGDALENA gasps.

MAGDALENA
Jesus Christ. Jesus. Fucking. Christ.
Are those real?

LUNA
They are.

MAGDALENA
Holy shit. SO, what you're saying is
--

LUNA
It's true, all of it.

MAGDALENA understands now what LUNA is now.

MAGDALENA
Oh. Wow.

LUNA
Oh. Wow.

MAGDALENA
...I mean...Holy fucking shit...

LUNA
...Yeah...Holy fucking shit...Want me
to go?

MAGDALENA
No, no, no. Stay. Please. I don't
want you to go.
LUNA
Okay. Are you afraid of me?

MAGDALENA
No. In fact, if i was, i would
already tell you right now.

LUNA
Alright.

There's an uncomfortable silence filling up the scene.

LATER:

Luna is dressing up. She turns and sees MAGDALENA, sleeping on


the bed, with her entire naked body covered by the sheets.
Luna smiles at the sight of this. Luna walks to the window,
opens it, and jumps out of the house.

CUT TO:

LATER - MORNING:

MAGDALENA, sleeping, slowly moves on the bed. She then slowly


wakes up. She looks around. Her hair, like the blankets, is
messy. Messy from all the action that happened last night. She
looks around, wondering where Luna left. Then, she realizes
she's naked. She blushes. She sighs as she looks up. She
covers her face with her right hand.

CUT TO:

INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY. DAY.

MAGDALENA walks by herself on the school hallway. She can't


stop smiling. She's smiling uncontrollably. MAGDALENA walks
happy. ISIDORA walks with her.

Isidora

Hey, Magda.

MAGDALENA
Hey.

Isidora notices that she is smiling without any control.

Isidora

Why are you smiling??? What're you so happy about???


She stands in front of Magda.

ISIDORA
What happened???
(Beat)
What?

MAGDALENA sighs, relieved and in happiness.

Isidora

Magdalena. What happened?

MAGDALENA
Nothing, nothing. It's just...

Isidora

It's just what? What happened?

Then...

ISIDORA already realizes.

ISIDORA
Wait, so you....did it?

Magdalena doesn't say anything. She just nods.

Isidora

Wait, hold on a second, so YOU and THE GIRL...just...did


it????

MAGDALENA nods. She looks around to make sure nobody is


listening to them.

MAGDALENA
You want to know what she did to me?

She whispers something to Isidora's ear. After she finishes,


she aparts.

ISIDORA laughs.

ISIDORA
That's fuckin great, girl. Congrats.

MAGDALENA
But don't tell anybody. I don't want
them to know.

ISIDORA
Trust me, everything you say
(Zips her mouth; clicks
tongue)
It's a secret.

MAGDALENA
(smiles)
Thank you. Thanks, Isi.

They start walking together.

Isidora

I'm so proud of you.

cut to:

INT. THE CAKE PALACE - LATER THAT DAY.

Magdalena is sitting as she's eating Strawberry Cake at The


Cake Palace. Carmen approaches her.

CARMEN
Hey.

MAGDALENA
(looks at her)
Hey.

CARMEN
Long time no see.

MAGDALENA
Long time no see.

CARMEN
What's wrong?

MAGDALENA
What do you mean?

CARMEN
Nothing, it's just...you
look...happy. Why's that?

MAGDALENA
Oh yeah, happy.

She chuckles. She looks somewhere else, she blushes.

MAGDALENA
Truth is that that i now feel a lot
more happier than i felt before.

CARMEN
Really? And why is that? Why do you
feel happy?

MAGDALENA
(lunges at her)
See, i met this girl. This
mysterious-looking girl who happens
to be the most amazing girl you can
ever meet. She is literally the best
thing that has ever happened to me.

Carmen is more than happy to hear those news. She is happy to


hear that her dear friend is finally happy after a long long
time of pain and suffering.

CARMEN
Whoa. So you're happy with her?

MAGDALENA
A lot.

CARMEN
You really deserve to be happy. And
this girl, did you...you know...made
love to her?

MAGDALENA
(sighs in happiness,
relieved)
We had the most amazing sex. Like,
every night when i'm with her, when
we got nothing else to do, we go to
one of our houses and we really hit
it off. She's really good in bed.

Carmen laughs at such a provocative and controversial comment.

CARMEN
(laughs)
Jesus Christ.

MAGDALENA
Yeah. Jesus Christ.

CARMEN
I have to admit it. I think i'm
jealous of you. I mean, you met a
girl for like, what, months ago, and
every night, you decide to destroy
your bed?

MAGDALENA
Well, we don't do scissoring, yet. We
haven't arrived to that part yet. She
basically ate up my vagina. The next
thing i expect is for us to eat each
other's vaginas.

Carmen then cracks up laughing. Magdalena smiles.

CARMEN
Yep. I feel like i'm 100% jealous of
you.
(taps her arm)
Congratulations, man. I'm so happy
for you. Have you told anyone else?

MAGDALENA
Just Isidora. Nobody else. Promise
you're not gonna tell anyone else.

CARMEN
Trust me. It's a secret.

MAGDALENA
Thank you.

CARMEN
You're welcome.

cut to:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. SAME.

She enters the house and sees her father, sleeping and snoring
on the couch with the TV on. She just leaves her stuff on the
ground and walks out of the house, closing the door. But where
is she going? Does she have an appointment with someone that
she knows?

INT. LUNA'S ROOM. SAME.

The curtains are closed. Sealed with cardboards and pieces of


newspapers.

LUNA is sleeping on her bed like an angel, with her face with
her closed eyes on the wall. She is sleeping comfortable.
Then, A HAND RISES on THE WINDOW. It taps on the window.
Knocking is emitted from her own window. She briskly wakes up.
She realizes about the knocking outside her window. She
wonders. Who can it be??

She approaches to the window and removes a tiny piece of


newspaper, only to see --

-- MAGDALENA, outside her room, knocking on her window. LUNA


thinks about this for a moment.

MAGDALENA
LUNA, are you there?

She unlocks the window and opens it. She covers herself from
the sunlight. Luckily, no sight of sunlight is hitting her.

As the window is open, the two girls look at each other.

MAGDALENA
Hi.

LUNA
What are you doing here?

MAGDALENA
I thought i could spend some time in
here. With you.

LUNA
Why? What is it?

MAGDALENA
I don't know. But i just need to
spend some time in here. Can i do
that? Please?

LUNA can't say no to her, right?

LUNA
Ok, get in.

LUNA helps MAGDALENA to get inside.

MAGDALENA
Get inside, I'll undress.

LUNA
Ok.

LUNA climbs onto bed. MAGDALENA takes her shoes, socks,


jacket, shirt, panties and pants off. She basically undresses
herself until she is barefoot and fully naked. She climbs on
bed with LUNA.

LUNA, eye-opening, confused, wondering, a bit shocked, only


hears how MAGDALENA climbs onto bed with her.

MAGDALENA looks at her side of the bed, LUNA does the same.
They're not looking at each other. An awkward, uncomfortable
silence fills the scene.

LUNA
Why did you come here?

MAGDALENA
My Dad was sleeping. I thought i
could spend some time in here to not
get bored.

LUNA
What will happen when he wakes up and
realizes you didn't arrived?

MAGDALENA
I'll figure it out. It's ok. I won't
tell him anything.

LUNA
Wait...

She realizes about something important. Something that makes


her blush and something that makes her feel uncomfortable,
something that also shocks her.

LUNA
You took off your clothes?

MAGDALENA
Mm-hm.

LUNA
Like, all of them?

MAGDALENA
I'm sorry. I know it's embarrassing.
I can leave, if you want.

LUNA
No, no, no. Stay. Please, I want you
to stay with me.

MAGDALENA
Ok.
Silence.

LUNA
Why did you took of all your clothes?

MAGDALENA
Why did you think i did it?

LUNA
The heat of the sun?

MAGDALENA
No. Not really. Do you want to know
why i really did it?

LUNA
Alright. Tell me.

MAGDALENA
I did it because you're the only
person i can share my body with.
You're the only person who i can show
my body to. You saw my body, so now
it's yours. All yours. That's why i
did it.

Luna flushes from such a comment like that.

LUNA
Wow.

MAGDALENA
Yeah.
Wow.
LUNA
I mean, holy shit. Nobody has ever
said something like that to me.

MAGDALENA
Is it too embarrassing?

LUNA
No, it’s fine. It actually feels good
to hear that from you.

MAGDALENA smiles. Then, she closes her eyes and gets


comfortable on the bed. She feels it. The experience of being
dead and sleep on the day. She doesn't let go of that
experience and that nice feeling.

MAGDALENA
So this is what it feels like.
LUNA
What?

MAGDALENA
Sleep on the day. Feel dead on the
day. This is what it feels like.

LUNA
Yeah. This is what it feels like. Are
you uncomfortable now?

MAGDALENA
Why?

LUNA
You know -- Two girls sleeping with
each other.

MAGDALENA thinks about this for a moment.

MAGDALENA
Truth?

LUNA
Truth.

MAGDALENA
No.

LUNA
No?

MAGDALENA
No. And you? Do you feel
uncomfortable?

LUNA
Truth?

MAGDALENA
Truth.

LUNA
No.

MAGDALENA
No?

LUNA
(admits it)
Well, a little bit.

MAGDALENA
It's ok to feel uncomfortable. It
happens sometimes.

LUNA
So it's ok for me to feel
uncomfortable?

MAGDALENA
Yeah.

LUNA
Good.

Silence.

LUNA
I don't want to sleep.

MAGDALENA
Why?

LUNA
What if i have nightmares and i push
you out of bed?

MAGDALENA
Do you have nightmares?

LUNA nods.

MAGDALENA
It's alright if you have nightmares.
We all do.

LUNA
You -- You have nightmares too?

MAGDALENA
Yeah. Like all humans do.

Silence.

MAGDALENA
LUNA, do you - like me?

LUNA thinks about this for a moment. Uhhhhh.

LUNA
Uh, hello. We just had sex.

MAGDALENA
I mean, did you liked me before we
had sex?
LUNA
What is that supposed to mean??

MAGDALENA
Do you -- like me as more than just
friends?? Were you in love with me
before we made love to each other?
Did you liked me as more than just
close friends?

LUNA
I -- I don't know.

MAGDALENA
Oh. You know something? You know,
it's ok if you don't like me. I
understand that. I understand if you
don’t want to be friends with me
anymore. I can take that. So you
don’t have to be so busy about
everything--

LUNA
No no no no. I - I did.

MAGDALENA
What?

LUNA
I did liked you.

MAGDALENA
Really?

LUNA
Yeah. Like, a lot.

MAGDALENA smiles. Truth is that nobody else has felt the same
thing about her. Not a boy or a girl from her school has felt
the same thing about her. And now, a girl who belongs to a
murderous family feels love for her. She feels happy because
of it. And now, since she's hearing those wonderful happy
news, she can only express her happiness with a single:

MAGDALENA
Wow.

CUT TO:

LATER:
LUNA is sleeping comfortable. MAGDALENA looks at her sleep,
she grabs her hand. Then, a sleeping LUNA grabs her hand.
MAGDALENA smiles at her. She then puts her arm around her. She
still looks at her. She starts sleeping. They’re sleeping
comfortable. Like an angel and a devil.

Then, we’re focusing on LUNA’s face, she’s probably having


another nightmare. We can notice it by her eyes, moving
around, even though they’re closed.

LUNA'S DREAM:

WE SUDDENLY SEE FLASHES OF A DREAM, OF A VISION...OR OF A


NIGHTMARE:

We hear LUNA QUIETLY BREATHING as we see -- A GIRL, sleeping


on bed, comfortable. Someone slept next to her, that spot is
empty, marked on the bed.

Then, a HAND reaches on the BED.

Then, TWO DEMONIC EYES STARE AT US FROM THE DARKNESS OF THE


NIGHT. THE TWO EYES ARE BATHED IN RED, RED LIKE BLOOD, RED
LIKE HELL, RED LIKE FURY. A WILD RED COLOR ON THE TWO EYES.

Suddenly, THE GIRL, who is MAGDALENA, wakes up and sees the


figure. She asks "WHAT'S WRONG?". THE FIGURE doesn't answer
and lunges at her, AND BEGINS TO ATTACK HER.

THE FIGURE starts BITING MAGDALENA'S NECK AND EVERYWHERE THE


FIGURE CAN AS THE GIRL CAN'T HELP SCREAMING IN PAIN! THE GIRL
PRESSES HER HAND ON THE BED SHEET OUT OF SO MUCH PAIN DUE TO
THE WOUNDS THE FIGURE IS GIVING TO HER.

THE GIRL has TEARS STREAMING DOWN HER FACE. A look for
SADNESS, FEAR AND UNSPEAKABLE PAIN.

Then, THE FIGURE is REVEALED: LUNA HERSELF!

BACK TO SCENE:

INT. LUNA'S ROOM. SAME.

We see MAGDALENA’s face, looking at LUNA. Like, being a


guardian to her.

Then, MAGDALENA leans in, and - kisses LUNA on the mouth. She
aparts. LUNA reacts to this. And seems to be getting calm from
her nightmare. A sweet moment.

cut to:
LATER:
MAGDALENA, dressed up, finishes a letter for LUNA. As she's
fully finished with the letter, she leaves it on the
furniture. MAGDALENA unlocks the window, and as she is about
to exit, she watches LUNA one more time. MAGDALENA smiles.
Then, she exits.

cut to:

LATER:
Night.

LUNA wakes up. She rises from the bed, and notices MAGDALENA
is gone. She then notices the note on the furniture next to
her bed.

She takes the note and sees it.

HAD TO LEAVE
COULDN'T STAY FOR MUCH LONGER
MY DAD WOULD HAVE KILLED ME IF I
STAYED FOR MUCH LONGER
DO YOU WANT TO GO OUT TONIGHT?
MAYBE VISIT SOME SITE WE HAVEN'T
VISITED YET?
WHEREVER YOU WANT TO GO TONIGHT, I'LL
BE MORE THAN HAPPY TO COME WITH YOU.
- (YOUR) LOVE, MAGDALENA

LUNA smiles. She puts the note on her heart with her hands.

CUT TO:

INT. WOODS. MIDNIGHT.

LUNA and MAGDALENA run on THE WOODS. MAGDALENA runs faster


than LUNA.

MAGDALENA
Come on!

LUNA
Where are we going?

MAGDALENA
You'll find out.

As the two keep running, MAGDALENA stops as she sees something


on front. LUNA stops next to her.

MAGDALENA
Look. There it is.

LUNA looks on front of them: A BIG ABANDONED HOUSE.

LUNA
Whoa. What are we gonna find there? A
corpse? A chest with gold?

MAGDALENA
I don't know.

They walk to it.

LUNA
I'll be your girlfriend if it's a
chest with gold.

INT. ABANDONED HOUSE IN THE WOODS. SAME.

The Two Girls enter the house.

LUNA
Whoa.

MAGDALENA grabs her flashlight and begins illuminating around


the place. She grabs another, for LUNA.

MAGDALENA
I brought one for you.

LUNA
Thanks.

She receives it. They illuminate the place together.

LUNA
This place looks insane. HELLO!

No answer. MAGDALENA grabs a rock and throws it somewhere,


emitting a strong sound.

By the way: The place looks abandoned, empty, desolated,


isolated, like the perfect scenario of the typical horror
movie with the haunted house. The place looks destroyed, it
looks like if it was burned down. But if it was burned down,
the trees surrounding it, the woods, would have been burned
out anyways. Will they find a ghost inside of the house? Maybe
a serial killer? Or a corpse? Maybe a chest full of gold
inside? It's not up to us to guess it. It's up to these two
girls to do it.

They walk around.


MAGDALENA
If there's any evil spirit in here
who wants to kill us, clap your
hands!

No answer.

LUNA
Let's look around.

The Two Girls keep looking around. They search in everywhere


they can.

ON MAGDALENA:

She enters a BIG ROOM that used to be a DINING ROOM. The


windows are now all covered with wood. There's grass and
plants from outside, about to fill the room with the green
beauty.

She spots an old vinyl player, resting on a spot. The thing


looks old. Like it's not gonna work to play another song.

Then, she walks to a door that leads to:

THE BASEMENT.

She walks downstairs. She illuminated the dark, lonely, empty,


desolate basement.

MAGDALENA
No, nothing in here.

ON LUNA:

She walks upstairs. On those rotten, almost broken stairs. She


passes by the bathroom, a room that also is destroyed. She
enters the big bedroom. Then, she stops and looks at the
bedroom for as long as she can.

ON MAGDALENA:

She keeps looking.

MAGDALENA
Did you found anything?! A gold chest
maybe!
She notices that the girl who was with her this whole time
doesn't answer to her.

MAGDALENA
LUNA?

No answer.

MAGDALENA
LUNA?? LUNA?

We see how she walks upstairs, and we're left there, on the
dark. MAGDALENA keeps yelling her name.

ON LUNA:

MAGDALENA arrives to the second floor. To the bedroom.

MAGDALENA
There you are. What are you doing?
What-?

Then, she looks at the thing LUNA has been looking for this
whole time:

We see A BODY OF A MAN, lying on the bed. The BODY rests


there. In that messy, dirty, messed up bed. The Man holds a
gun on his hand. The wall behind his head is a circle of blown
blood. There's a giant hole on the back of his head, meaning
he came to the house only to commit suicide.

The Two Girls are shocked. They're frozen. They don't know
what to do. Until:

MAGDALENA
What do you think that happened to
him?

LUNA
I don't know.

MAGDALENA approaches to the BODY, slowly. She notices the gun


on his hand. She takes it off. She holds it.

MAGDALENA
I bet this doesn't work anymore-

She pulls the trigger, AND A BULLET IS QUICKLY FIRED OUT OF


THE GUN! IT'S SHOT TO THE WINDOW!

MAGDALENA
SHIT - !
MAGDALENA is shocked. She lets go of the gun. It clatters on
the ground.

MAGDALENA
What a dumb stupid fucking bad idea.

LUNA
Let's bury him.

MAGDALENA
What?

LUNA
I want to bury him. On the outside.

MAGDALENA
Are you sure? We don't even know who
this guy is.

LUNA
I know. But he needs to be buried. He
can't be left here just like that. He
deserved to be buried.

cut to:

EXT. ABANDONED HOUSE IN THE WOODS. LATER.

The BODY of the Man is already buried on the ground. The two
girls approach to the burial site.

MAGDALENA
Think somebody will find him someday?

LUNA
I don't know. I'm not sure. Nobody
comes to this part of the woods.

LUNA grabs the man's ID CARD.

LUNA
It says here that the man is called
Roger Mendez. He was born in 1949. He
was born in Maryland. He lived on a
course of 40, 30 years. May you rest
in peace Roger.

She leaves the ID CARD on the burial spot. The Two Girls walk
back inside.

cut to:
INT. ABANDONED HOUSE IN THE WOODS. SAME.

The Two Girls are lying on the ground, their flashlights


illuminating one another. Their faces looks thoughtful.

MAGDALENA
It's not the first time you see a
dead person, right? Since you and
your family kill people.

LUNA
I've seen a lot of things, i don't
even know where to begin. And believe
me when i tell you this, all of those
things i saw are not good.

MAGDALENA
Bad?

LUNA
Terrible. Horrible. And you? It's not
the first time you see a dead body,
right?

MAGDALENA
I mean, i've seen them in the movies.
But in real life -- Jesus. How does
it feel?

LUNA
What?

MAGDALENA
To be dead. To live forever.

LUNA
I don't know. I guess you feel like
you're the owner of this entire
world. You get to see great events
that happen on the future life
without aging, or without getting
older, without aging, without dying.

MAGDALENA
And how does it feel to be dead?

LUNA
I don't know. I don't know what dead
people can feel. I don't even know if
they can even feel. But, when you
die, you just -- die. That's it. I
don't feel dead. I feel alive. And
when i feel alive, i feel that the
other people are just -- dead.

MAGDALENA
And when you're dead, you feel that
the other people are alive?

LUNA
Yeah.

Silence.

MAGDALENA
My Mom once said that she wished to
be dead when she was around with my
Dad. Can i tell you something? I
rather die than keep being his
daughter.

LUNA
I can only imagine.

CUT TO:

INT. STREET. MIDNIGHT.

MAGDALENA and LUNA walk together on a street, thoughtful about


the events that happened on the abandoned house.

LUNA
(sigh)
Why walking when we can go flying?

MAGDALENA
What?

LUNA carries MAGDALENA while MAGDALENA has her head looking


back.

MAGDALENA
What are you doing?

LUNA
We are gonna have a flying session.
Ready?

MAGDALENA
What?

Suddenly -- LUNA STARTS TO FLY WITH MAGDALENA.


ON MAGDALENA AND LUNA: LUNA is flying with MAGDALENA while
MAGDALENA is screaming. LUNA flies and jumps on the roofs of
the houses and on the buildings. MAGDALENA screams, but at the
same time, she enjoys this. She wildly enjoys flying, jumping
and floating with LUNA.

INT. NEIGHBORHOOD. MOMENTS LATER.

LUNA and MAGDALENA arrive with a jump to the neighborhood.


MAGDALENA pants.

LUNA
You're okay?

MAGDALENA
What the fuck just happened?

LUNA
You want to know what happened? You
just flew.

MAGDALENA
I did?

LUNA
Yeah, you did. You just fucking flew.

MAGDALENA aparts from LUNA, with her hair now messy.

LUNA
Sorry about the hair,--

Suddenly, like a lightning, like a speeding car, MAGDALENA


EMBRACES AND HUGS LUNA SO STRONGLY. LUNA is surprised. She
gasps.

MAGDALENA
I don't want to lose you. I'm losing
everyone.

LUNA hugs MAGDALENA.

LUNA
I don't want to lose you too. You're
like the best thing that has ever
happened to me.

MAGDALENA
Whoa.

LUNA
Whoa what?
MAGDALENA
You're like the first person who ever
said that to me.

LUNA
Really?

MAGDALENA
Yeah.

They apart. They look at each other. They smile to each other.

CUT TO:

INT. MAGDALENA'S ROOM. MIDNIGHT.

Magdalena and Luna are kissing each other. They're doing it


silently, in order to not wake up the adults in the house.

They're kissing wildly, with tongue and with a romantic


sensual erotic passion.

They start to undress each other until the two of them are now
fully barefoot naked.

Magdalena throws Luna to her (Magdalena's) bed. Magdalena gets


atop of her.

Magdalena kisses Luna on the mouth repeated times. Then, she


kisses Luna's breast. Then, Magdalena goes down to kiss her
stomach.

We stay with Luna, as she begins to softly moan. It is implied


that Magdalena is giving her oral sex. Luna can't resist the
endless pleasure Magdalena is giving her.

MAGDALENA (O.S)
Did you liked it?

CUT TO:

LATER:

Magdalena is lying atop of Luna. The two are looking at each


other. Their eyes sparkle when they meet each other.

LUNA
I loved it. It was the best sex i
ever had in my life.

MAGDALENA
It wasn't just sex, it was love.

LUNA
Yeah. Love.

They kiss.

LUNA
You just made love to a vampire. How
do you feel?

MAGDALENA
Yeah, that sounds weird. But it feels
good. I never thought it would feel
this good.

LUNA
What is your dad gonna say about
this? I think he's gonna lose his
fucking mind when he sees this.

MAGDALENA
Don't worry, I'm not gonna tell him
anything. I promise that for as long
as i keep this a secret, you'll be
more safe from him.

Luna kisses her on the mouth, briefly.

LUNA
Thank you Magda.

MAGDALENA
You're welcome Luna.

LATER:
Magdalena watches how a fully naked
Luna begins to dress.

LUNA
Did we made any kind of noise?

MAGDALENA
My Dad didn't knocked on the door
while i was blowing you off, so that
means we're okay.

Luna then grabs her own shirt and tosses it to Magdalena.

MAGDALENA
(takes the shirt)
What's this for?
LUNA
Just in case. I mean...If you have a
memory of me. In case if i leave the
town, i want you to have a memory of
me, at least just one.

LATER:

Magdalena is sleeping on her bed, with her breasts lying on


the bed, and with the rest of her body being covered by the
messy sheets.

Luna is now wearing Magdalena's shirt.

Luna approaches to Magdalena and gives her a kiss on her


forehead. She smiles as she aparts.

Luna is now gone.

Magdalena is dreaming about something.

CUT TO:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - DINING ROOM. DAY. FLASHBACK.

MAGDALENA and Bastian are having lunch. Bastian is eating


perfectly normal while MAGDALENA isn't eating perfectly
normal. She is heartbroken.

MAGDALENA
I don't know. Do i look okay?

BASTIAN
That doesn't count as a yes or a no,
now answer me, you okay?

MAGDALENA doesn't even answer.

Bastian then throws her his empty glass, it crashes on her


plate.

BASTIAN
You fucking crybaby! What, are you
gonna still cry for that bitch--?!

MAGDALENA
(punches table)
DON'T YOU SWEAR AT HER YOU SHIT!
DON'T YOU EVER DARE TO SWEAR AT HER!
SHE WAS YOUR WIFE! MY MOTHER! THE
MOTHER OF THE BABY YOU CREATED! All
she did was worry all the time about
if the baby was gonna be born good or
not! And you know what's your part in
the play?! You just fucking drink all
the time! I wish that you knew all
the pain that i'm going through right
now. I just want you to understand
that my mother, your wife, is dead!!
SHE IS DEAD! AND YOU JUST DON'T FEEL
SHIT FOR IT!

Bastian is on silence. MAGDALENA pants, crying.

BASTIAN
What do you think i do?? You think i
care?? I do care. I care a lot for
her--

MAGDALENA
No you don't! You never cared! You
didn't even said "i love you" to her!
Not even for fucking once! You - YOU
FUCKING LIAR! YOU DISGUSTING LYING
PIECE OF SHI--!

She tries to hit him, but he catches her hand. She gasps. She
tries to let go, but Bastian doesn't let her go

MAGDALENA
Let me go. Let me go!

Let me go, right now you filthy piece of shit!

BASTIAN
You want me to let you go? Insult me
one more time. Hit me. Come on.

She knows that if she does it, she'll get her ass kicked.

BASTIAN
You want me to be honest with you?
Alright, i'll be honest with you. I
don't like you. At all. I hate you.
You want to know something?! I ALMOST
PAID FOR YOUR ABORTION! I thought
that if your mother had you it would
kill her! I COULD HAVE PAID YOUR
ABORTION SO I COULD NOT SEE YOUR UGLY
FUCKING FACE! EVERYDAY I WAKE UP AND
MY ONLY WISH IS FOR YOU TO DIE! SO
HOW'S THAT FOR HONESTY YOU LITTLE
FUCKING BITCH?! HUH?! HOW'S THAT FOR
HONESTY!?

Beat. Bastian is red. MAGDALENA is scared.

BASTIAN
SO HOW ABOUT YOU SHUT THE FUCK UP NOW
AND JUST -- Look, can we at least
have a normal family lunch-?

MAGDALENA
Family??? Family?!?!? YOU'RE NOT PART
OF THIS FAMILY!!!

BASTIAN
Magdalena, please...

MAGDALENA
YOU NEVER WERE PART OF THIS FAMILY!!!
You just wanted to have a child in
this family. That's why Mom is gone!!
She died because of your arrogance!!
It was your fault! If you didn't got
her pregnant, none of this would have
happened! THIS IS YOUR FAULT!

She begins to cry.

MAGDALENA
YOUR FUCKING FAULT! I already had a
family!!!! Until you arrived... I
already had a family!!! And you know
what you did?! You shredded it
apart!!! You destroyed my family! You
destroyed the thing that i cared for
in life! You---

She's running out of words.

MAGDALENA
You---

She ran out of words.

She walks out of the house.

BASTIAN
Yeah, go on! LEAVE! LEAVE LIKE YOUR
FUCKING MOTHER! LEAVE LIKE THAT
BITCH! I DON'T WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!

Bastian is left there. Instead, he starts to finish his food.


CUT BACK TO:

INT. MAGDALENA'S ROOM.

Magdalena wakes up from her dream.

CUT TO:

INT. THE RED HOUSE - DINING ROOM. SAME.

The family is drinking the blood from the bottles that Javier
brought. They're all sitting on the chairs in front of the
table.

Mateo is the first one to finish.

Mateo looks at Luna, who begins to finish her drinking. She


finishes drinking her blood. She looks at Mateo looking at
her.

LUNA
What?

MATEO
(shrugs)
I don't know. Is there something
supposed to be wrong at this exact
moment?

LUNA
(shrugs)
I don't know.

Silence.

MATEO
Hey, Lu....

LUNA
Mm-hm?

MATEO
I just wanted to apologize for how I
treated you the other night. That
wasn't me at the moment.

LUNA
Well then if it wasn't you, who was
it?

MATEO
I don't know. Someone evil. A
monster, maybe.

LUNA
Hmm.

MATEO
(sighs)
So, i know you're gonna get sad and
then mad at me.

LUNA
Why?

MATEO
We're leaving the town.

Beat. Luna freezes. She can't believe what she just heard.

LUNA
What?!

VANIA
We have to go away.

Luna still doesn't believe what she's saying.

MATEO
We will start a new life now. In
another town, or probably in another
city. I will give you tomorrow so you
can say goodbye to your girlfriend.

LUNA
Well, what about Javier? Isn't he
coming with us?

VANIA
I turned him.

LUNA
You what?

VANIA
I turned him. He's one of us now.

LUNA
Well, where the fuck is he?

VANIA
On his house, packing up clothes.

LUNA
Well, how the fuck did it happen?

CUT TO:

INT. THE RED HOUSE - VANIA'S ROOM. THE DAY BEFORE. FLASHBACK.

We see Javier and Vania, making love. She is sitting on his


lap while they kiss and fuck with passion.

Then, as the two of them are about to come to their climaxes,


Vania looks at Javier’s neck....
....and she STICKS HER FANGS ON MARCO’S NECK! The song erupts.
Javier’s feelings are a combination between the pleasure of
the climax and the pain of turning into a vampire.

They lie on the bed. Vania keeps feeding on his blood. Javier
then closes his eyes.

CUT BACK TO:

INT. THE RED HOUSE - DINING ROOM.

LUNA
Are you fucking kidding me, Vani?

VANIA
I'm sorry, alright? It was an
accident.

LUNA
(to mateo)
Well, can i bring Magdalena with me?
Please, she needs somewhere to stay.
She needs to stay somewhere where she
is not surrounded by grief or trauma.

MATEO
No, I'm sorry. We can't bring her
with us.

LUNA
Says who? Dad? Did Dad's spirit
transported into your soul?

MATEO
Luna, please. Behave.

LUNA
You see? You're just trying to act
like him. It doesn't even work for
you. It doesn't work.
MATEO
Alright. You want to know why we
can't bring her with us? She's a
distraction. She is distracting you
and probably turning you against us.

LUNA
Why the fuck would she do that to me?
She wouldn't do that.

MATEO
Look, we'll only bring Javier with
us, alright? We won't bring another
human into our family, alright? You
know why? We will not risk a human in
our getaway. Imagine if the police
end up searching for her. They’ll end
up searching for us. Is that too
clear enough for you, Luna?

Luna sighs.

LUNA
Well...Can I stay here?

MATEO
Lu...

LUNA
Please. I just....
(sighs)
I just want to be with her, alright?
She's everything that I love.

Mateo understands her pain.

MATEO
Staying is an option.
But this family remains united.

LUNA
The family, the family, the fucking
family. Look at us, we're not a real
family. You know what we are? A
family of freaks. A family of
monsters. We're not like the real
families out there.

MATEO
Oh yeah? And how are the real
families out there?
LUNA
They're....They're nice. They take
their dogs out for a walk. They have
birthdays, which we don't have.

MATEO
What else do they have that we don't
have?

LUNA
At least they're nicer with the
people outside. We are not nice to
the people outside.

Silence.

MATEO
Fuck, you're actually right about
that.

Silence.

CUT TO:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. THE NEXT NIGHT.

Bastian leaves the house. He goes to the bar. That's his


typical every-night routine.

INT. MAGDALENA'S ROOM. SAME.

MAGDALENA is thoughtful. She looks up.

Then --

-- THREE KNOCKS ON THE DOOR ARE EMITTED. She wonders.

cut to:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. SECONDS LATER.

MAGDALENA walks to the main door. He looks through the


peephole.

ANGLE: THROUGH THE PEEPHOLE. LUNA is standing right in front


of the main door.

MAGDALENA looks at her, surprised.

MAGDALENA opens the door. LUNA and MAGDALENA look at each


other.
MAGDALENA
Hi.

LUNA
Hey.

They smile to each other while an awkward silence fills the


scene.

LUNA
I've heard about what happened. To
your mother. I'm so sorry.

MAGDALENA
Yeah, thank you. I'm so sorry too.

LUNA
Yeah. I thought i could give you a
little visit so i could make you
happy, i guess. Do you like that
idea?

MAGDALENA
Yeah -- Well -- My Dad -- He's, Uh --
He's at the bar, he might get here
anytime soon, so -- If he sees you,
he will kill you and then he will
kill me -- So --

LUNA understands.

LUNA
Oh, uh -- Alright, i guess. I won't
bother you tonight --

As LUNA is about to walk off, MAGDALENA quickly regrets it.

MAGDALENA
Wait!

LUNA turns.

LUNA
What's wrong?

MAGDALENA
You can stay in here, for a while.

LUNA
Really?

MAGDALENA
Really.
LUNA
Alright.

MAGDALENA receives her. She lets LUNA in. LUNA walks around in
the house.

LUNA
I think i need to take a shower. I
must smell like garlic.

MAGDALENA
You can have some clothes of mine, if
you want.

LUNA
Really? You're giving me some of your
clothes?

MAGDALENA
Of course. Wait here.

MAGDALENA runs to her room. LUNA waits there. LUNA then looks
at a photo of LUNA WITH HER MOTHER, SMILING TO THE CAMERA.
LUNA smiles when she sees that photo, probably because it
reminded her of her past days and past moments with her
mother. MAGDALENA comes with some of her clothes.

MAGDALENA
Here. Here's the clothes.

LUNA
Why are you being so nice to me?

MAGDALENA
Because you're being nice to me.

LUNA smiles. She receives the clothes. She holds the clothes
on her hands.

LUNA
Where is the bathroom?

MAGDALENA
I'll guide you there.

The two girls walk to the bathroom.

INT. BATHROOM. MOMENTS LATER.

As we're inside of the bathroom, we see the curtain is closed.


And we hear nothing but LUNA taking a shower as she hums a
song. Probably a song that she and her mother used to sing
back in the old good days when her mother was still alive...or
still dead.

cut to:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. SAME.

MAGDALENA walks around, in despair. A little bit in panic.

MAGDALENA
(to herself)
This is crazy. Am I crazy?? No, this
is crazy. I have a girl in my house,
and she’s taking a shower. And i just
gave her some of my clothes. I mean,
who does that? No one does that.
Freaks do that. I mean, am i a freak?

We can hear that, inside the bathroom, LUNA stops showering


herself. The shower stops.

seconds later:

MAGDALENA sits on the ground. She sighs.

Then, LUNA exits the room, wearing MAGDALENA's clothes. She


has her hair damp due to the shower water. She walks to
MAGDALENA.

LUNA
Hey.

MAGDALENA
Hey.

LUNA sits in front of her.

MAGDALENA
(looks at the clock;
realizes about something
important)
Shit!

LUNA
What?

MAGDALENA
You have to go.

LUNA
Why?
MAGDALENA
My Dad! If he finds out that i have a
girl in here, he'll kill me and then
he'll kill you.

LUNA
Oh. Okay. I can leave if you want.

The two arise.

MAGDALENA
So, see you tomorrow??

LUNA
No. Tomorrow I can't.

MAGDALENA
Okay, another day?

LUNA
No. I can't.

MAGDALENA
Alright, I get what you're trying to
do. When?

LUNA
I can't. I just can't.

MAGDALENA
Why not? What's wrong?

Then, LUNA spits the news out:

LUNA
The police already know who me and my
family are. This town, they're all
searching for my family. And me.

MAGDALENA
LUNA, what's going on? What is it? Is
there something you want to tell me?

LUNA gets heartbroken.

LUNA
We have to leave the town.

By just hearing that, MAGDALENA gets worried.

MAGDALENA
What?
LUNA nods, saddened.

LUNA
Turns out we can't stay here for much
longer.

MAGDALENA
Well...Why can't you just hide in
here??

LUNA
Look, it's not up to you to decide!
Ok?

LUNA is worried. She's heartbroken too. She looks down.

LUNA
I'm sorry. But it's how things are
now. I wish i could change it all,
but i can't. I'm so sorry.

Tears stream down off of MAGDALENA's eyes. They land on the


floor.

MAGDALENA
That's it.

LUNA
What?

MAGDALENA
(looks at LUNA)
That's it. I'm done. I'm done having
to live here forever. I'm done trying
not to repeat the same routine every
single day. I'm done. I swear to God
that I'm done.

LUNA
MAGDALENA, what are you doing?

MAGDALENA
I'm done living in a world where the
weak always has to be treated like
shit. I don't want to live in that
world anymore. I want to change it.
So that's why, I'm gonna tell you
this. I'm running away with you.

LUNA
What?!

MAGDALENA
I'm running away with you. I'm sick
of still living here.

LUNA
But...But...Your...Your Dad...

MAGDALENA
My Dad? MY DAD?! MY FUCKING DAD?! I
never even worried my Dad. All he did
was sitting on that fucking couch and
drink beer without even caring for
me! Do you think that i will worry
him if i run away with you? No! I
won't worry him! Not even a single
fucking second!

LUNA
You know, you can run away with me,
but if they find out that we're
fugitives, if they find out you're
with me, we're both dead.

MAGDALENA
So what?! I'm already dead! I've been
dead ever since i was even born!
LUNA, please. I want you to get me
out of here. Please. Let me run away
with you.

LUNA suddenly starts to think her answer.

LUNA
Alright.

MAGDALENA
Alright?

LUNA
Yeah.
Alright.

MAGDALENA smiles. She laughs.

MAGDALENA
Alright? Really?

LUNA
Yeah. Really.

MAGDALENA
(just to make sure)
I can run away with you?
LUNA
Yeah, you can--

After she says can, MAGDALENA, like lightning, like a speeding


car, hugs LUNA with all her strength.

MAGDALENA
Thank you, thank you, thank you.

LUNA hugs her too as well. The two embrace with each other.

LUNA
I promise to you.
Everything will be alright from here
on now. I promise.

CUT TO:

INT. BAR. SAME.

BASTIAN walks in. He double taps on the table.

BASTIAN
Maestro!

BARTENDER
What will it be?

BASTIAN
Uhh, give me a good Jack Daniels.
Pale Ale.

THE BARTENDER goes to look at a beer for BASTIAN. The Town’s


Police Chief arrives at the bar. He walks to a sit, almost
tired. He sighs as he sits on the seat. Then, he watches
BASTIAN. The two exchange looks, almost uncomfortable ones.
THE BARTENDER gives him the beer.

BARTENDER
There you go.

BASTIAN
Thank you, I--
(searches on pockets;
realizes they're empty)
Oh man. I swear i had my money on my
pocket.

ANDRES stands up from his seat and walks to BASTIAN.

BASTIAN
I don't know what happened--
ANDRES
(puts dollar on table)
I'll pay it for him.

BASTIAN looks at ANDRES, surprised and stunned. THE BARTENDER


accepts the dollar.

ANDRES
(takes another dollar; puts
it on table)
And another one for me, same one he
asked, please.

BARTENDER
Coming right up, sir.

BARTENDER walks off to get the beer. BASTIAN looks at ANDRES,


BASTIAN looks shocked, stunned surprised, confused?

BASTIAN
Let me guess. Am i under arrest?

ANDRES
No. I just wanted to save you from
not having a bad night.

BASTIAN
Huh. Thanks.

ANDRES looks around.

ANDRES
God. What does someone do in a place
like this?

BASTIAN
I don't know. People come here to
clean the sadness of their faces,
they bitch about life, they complain
about today's modern world by
drinking just one beer that leaves
you drunk. By the way, why did you
paid me the beer?

ANDRES
What? I just saved your ass. You
saved mine by accepting our dinner
offering.

THE BARTENDER gives him the beer.

BASTIAN
So, what’s your case?
ANDRES
What?

BASTIAN
Why are you here?

ANDRES
I had my head on this case for as
long as i could remember. All these
killings, people gone missing. It
just -- It got me confused. Who would
have done it?

BASTIAN
You’ve been working on this killing
spree case for so long that now you
need a rest to make things out.

ANDRES
That’s right.

BASTIAN decides to keep on with the conversation.

BASTIAN
Jesus Mary and Joseph. What kind of
sick bastard would do such a thing?
Either it can be Jeffrey Dahmer,
Charles Manson, Freddy Krueger or
some other person trying to attract
the attention by making these things.

ANDRES
Yeah, maybe. Except the first two are
dead and the last one is a made up
character. What about you?

BASTIAN
Guess.

ANDRES
Rough day at the office? Because you
look like an office guy--

BASTIAN
School. Rough day at school. These
peers i'm working with. When they
become so bosy, they can’t always
shut up when i tell them to do. All
the time saying they rule and all.
(scoffs)
I mean, God. Anyway, thanks for the
beer.
ANDRES
Always treat your guests with honesty
and care. That's one of the words my
dad said to me.

BASTIAN
Funny. I never got to meet my dad so
well. I mean, he was so addicted to
work, he never got time to the
family. All i could do was staying in
home with daughter.

ANDRES
How is she? Your daughter?

BASTIAN
She's good. Yeah. She's doing fine.
Actually, uhh -- her mom passed away
a while ago.

ANDRES
I’m so sorry for that.

BASTIAN
I don't know how to help my daughter
to fight with this grief she has.
Good thing is that she’s starting to
go out, making new friends. When she
was around 14, she was very shy but
then, in time, she started to come
out of the house, she started to
reveal herselfto everybody.

ANDRES
She deserves that. She deserves to go
out, make some friends. My son is
like your daughter. He was shy, but
in time, he got friends.

BASTIAN
How old is he? Your son.

ANDRES
Christ. Old enough to know better the
things of the world. 14.

BASTIAN
Kids grow faster. In the first day,
they turn from cute little toddlers
to kids who don't want to be with
their parents anymore. Everything
changes.
ANDRES
They are who they are. They want to
change, then let's let them do it. We
can't ask them to be something else
when they want to be themselves. We
can't infantile them.

BASTIAN
Maybe they -- Maybe the teenagers
don't want to try being like adults.
Maybe the adults want to try being
like the teens. They want to be more
alive, they want to have more energy,
they want to dress well, they want to
have great music taste, they want to
listen better, play instruments
better, love better, look more young
and beautiful, not having to deal
with that adults are dealing with
these days: Age changing and death.

ANDRES
Change. That's change. It happens all
the time. First you're the king of
the world, later you're falling down
the hill. I mean, what else is there
to do?

BASTIAN nods.

BASTIAN
I can't believe i'm about to say
this, but i think i'm -- jealous of
my daughter. I mean, sure, she's
young, she's free to do whatever she
wants. I want that energy that she
has. I wish i could be more free to
do whatever i want.

ANDRES
You still can. Just leave it all like
that. Give everything a rest. Have
more time for your family. Take your
family to a vacation if you have to.
Accept. That's the word. There’s no
better word in this world than
family.

BASTIAN thinks. Then, Andres's WALKIE sounds.

ANDRES
Simon. Yeah, I’ll be right there.
He finishes his beer and stands up.

ANDRES
I’m sorry, i have to--

BASTIAN
--save the world?? Go on. I won’t
stop you.

ANDRES walks out. BASTIAN is left there, thoughtful.

BASTIAN
Family.

CUT TO:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. SAME.

ON A VINYL PLAYER, MAGDALENA puts a VINYL DISC. When she


finishes, it begins to play. Then, the song Love Will Tear Us
Apart (12" Remix) (The 1980 Martin Hannett Version) by JOY
DIVISION starts to play.

As the song starts and erupts, MAGDALENA begins to dance.

On the Vinyl, Ian Curtis starts to sing:

JOY DIVISION
When routine bites hard
And ambitions are low
And resentment rides high
But emotions won't grow

LUNA approaches to a dancing MAGDALENA. LUNA smiles. MAGDALENA


notices her. They exchange a happy look.

MAGDALENA walks to LUNA and grabs her arms.

MAGDALENA
Come on. Dance with me. Come on.
Dance.

LUNA starts to dance with MAGDALENA.

MAGDALENA
There you go.

The two girls are dancing.

JOY DIVISION
Is my timing that flawed?
Our respect run so dry?
Yet there's still this appeal
That we've kept through our lives

A moment of them as they keep dancing to the song.

JOY DIVISION
But love, love will tear us apart
again
Love, love will tear us apart again

As they keep dancing, they look at each other. They exchange a


long look for a moment.

Then, they approach to each other, and they hold on each


other. They embrace, they hug.

JOY DIVISION
Do you cry out in your sleep?
All my failings exposed
Gets a taste in my mouth
As desperation takes hold
And it's something so good
Just can't function no more?

LUNA is dancing while holding on MAGDALENA. The two are


dancing slowly.

JOY DIVISION
Love, love will tear us apart again
Love, love will tear us apart again
Love, love will tear us apart again
Love, love will tear us apart again

Then, LUNA looks at Magdalena's neck. She looks at it. Eyes


full of wild hunger. MAGDALENA reacts to this with wonder. She
doesn't dare to speak. LUNA looks and admires her lover's
neck.

The whole scene becomes inaudible as the music keeps sinking


in.

Then -- WHAM!! Like lightning, like a speeding car, like a


fast wild animal, LUNA STICKS HER FANGS ON MAGDALENA'S NECK.

JOY DIVISION
Love, love will tear us apart again

As LUNA does the action, MAGDALENA screams. But LUNA's hunger


can't stop. She doesn't separate her teeth from her. She
doesn't want to.

JOY DIVISION
Love, love will tear us apart again
Love, love will tear us apart again
Love, love will tear us apart again
Love, love will tear us apart again

Blood comes off the neck. Magdalena's clothes begin to get


stained with her own blood.

The two start to slowly get on their knees. Then, they lay
down to the ground.

MAGDALENA looks up. But for some reason she doesn't feel pain.
She feels some sort of relaxing ecstasy. She slowly closes her
eyes as the music fades off, echoing off.

FADE TO WHITE.

INT. MAGDALENA'S ROOM. SECONDS LATER.

LUNA puts MAGDALENA on her own bed. She covers her with the
sheets.

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - BATHROOM. SECONDS LATER.

Luna washes off the blood off her mouth.

INT. BASTIAN'S ROOM. SECONDS LATER.

LUNA enters the room. She decides to take a small nap on


Bastian's bed. She begins to take a nap.

CUT TO:

INT. BASTIAN'S CAR. SAME.

THROUGH THE CAR'S BACKSEAT - HOLD

We see BASTIAN driving to the house. Driving on the


neighborhood, on the streets, about to ARRIVE.

CUT TO:

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE/MAIN ROOM. SAME

VIEW THROUGH THE PEEPHOLE

BASTIAN walks to the door. A few seconds later, he is right


outside the door, a bit drunk. He picks his keys and begins to
open the door. He opens the door and he enters.
Then, he sees his room with the door open and THERE'S A FIGURE
LYING, SLEEPING ON HIS BED. He walks slowly to it.

INT. BASTIAN'S ROOM. SAME.

INSIDE THE ROOM.

BASTIAN slowly approaches the figure. He checks the figure,


unwraps the figure from the blankets and sees -- LUNA,
sleeping comfortable on the bed.

BASTIAN wonders. He stares at her, with confusion and a sense


of dread.

He walks back OUT OF THE ROOM.

Bastian HOLDS A KNIFE. He's slowly approaching LUNA. He emits


a loud wood noise. LUNA wakes up, wondering. Bastian realizes.

BASTIAN
How did you even get here?

LUNA
I -- I'm sorry. I -- I didn't know
this was your house.

BASTIAN
You're sorry? You come in here, you
break into my house, you sleep in my
bed, and then you say sorry? I don't
know if you copied it from some kid's
book or something. How did you get in
here? There's no broken windows --

LUNA
I came through the back door. I
really think i should go--

BASTIAN
It's ok, look.

He puts the knife on a furniture, trying to look not menacing.

BASTIAN
It's just me. Alright? It's ok. God,
You scared me, you know. You're on
your own right now?

LUNA
Yes.

BASTIAN
What are you doing here? By your own
plus.

LUNA
I don't know. I really think i should
get going--

As she's about to leave, BASTIAN blocks her way.

BASTIAN
I know about you, you know. About
what you do with my daughter.

She seems too frightened to answer.

BASTIAN
Tell me everything. What you two have
been doing lately.

LUNA
We just talk, walk, we just hang out.
It's nothing else, I swear.

BASTIAN
Hey hey hey, it's alright. You know
something? I was just like you. I ran
off house, hung out with other people
in secret. I guess we have something
in common. I think that makes us
even.

Bastian holds her hand. Luna doesn't even blush. She is more
than terrified.

LUNA
Let me go.

BASTIAN
I just need an answer. I just need to
know that what i think you've been
doing with her is true. You can just
tell me, you know. We can both keep
it a secret and just leave it all
like that.

He grabs her hand. She notices.

LUNA
What? What are you doing?

BASTIAN
What else have you been doing with my
daughter? All those times she went
out without my permission. Where did
you take her?

LUNA
Nowhere.

BASTIAN
What have you been doing with her?

The situation becomes serious, intense and menacing. LUNA,


despite being a part of a brutal vampire family, is scared.

BASTIAN
If you have something that you won’t
dare to tell me, you better tell me.
Are you hiding something from me??
Did you two do something??

LUNA
(shakes her head)
No.

BASTIAN
No, no, no. That’s ok. You can say
no. Classical answer. What is it
that’s between you two??? Do you have
desires for her or does she for
you??? Did you -- touched her or did
she touch you??

LUNA aparts Bastian's hand from her own hand. And Bastian
SLAPS HER. He forces her. She begins to scream. Now the
situation went from serious, intense and menacing, to more
serious, more intense, more menacing and more fucked up.

LUNA
LET ME GO!! LET ME GO!!

BASTIAN
Don't worry. It won't hurt much.

She struggles to release from Bastian, but he's the strongest


one in the room.

LUNA
Please!

BASTIAN
Do you know - that she is my little
girl--??

Before he can finish -- MAGDALENA, NOW AS A NEWLY TRANSFORMED


VAMPIRE, JUMPS TO BASTIAN, BITING HIM IN THE NECK!
LUNA watches, surprised, how Bastian is attacked by his own
daughter. MAGDALENA screams savagely while Bastian screams in
pain. Blood starts to spray out of his neck. They begin to
exit the room.

BASTIAN
AAH! AAARGH!

MAGDALENA attacks her father in a vicious, savage, wild,


violent and gruesome way.

BASTIAN
GET OFF ME! FUCKING GET THE FUCK OFF
OF ME!

But she can't. She's like a wild beast preying on its victim.
She's like a wild animal. Yelling and screaming, MAGDALENA and
her father land in the bathroom.

BASTIAN falls to the ground. MAGDALENA feeds on his neck. Like


a wild feral dangerous beast. One beast that is savage and
unknown. But dangerous and deadly. One beast whose innocence
was taken away years ago.

LUNA exits the room. She approaches slowly to the scene.

ON MAGDALENA --

She keeps feeding on Bastian's neck. Then, she stops. She


stands and looks at Bastian, who can barely speak. He coughs
blood. His bite mark fucked up. The ground begins to get
soaked with blood.

By the way, MAGDALENA has RED EYES. RED EYES OF BLOOD AND AN
EXTREME HELLISH FURY.

BASTIAN
Mag.....Magdalena....I think you
should send me to a hospital.

MAGDALENA leans in. It is obvious what she wants. She is not


going to send him to a hospital just like that.

BASTIAN
Please -- Please -- Why are you doing
this?

Bastian can barely speak. He's too hurt to say anything. He


begins to cry.

MAGDALENA
Are you going to cry? Really?
(mockingly:)
Ooooh, look at this. The little girl
is about to cry. Aww, she wants to
cry. Aww, does the little girl want
to hug her mommy? Or maybe her dead
wife? Owww, he can't because they're
both dead! What a little child she
is. Look at him, let's all make fun
of him. Great idea!
Hahahahahahahahaha!
(normal)
Oh, do you have something to say?!?
Come on, say it!!! Do you have
anything to say??
(beat)
Grow up.

BASTIAN
Please.

MAGDALENA
I don't think I ever warned you. I
don't think i ever told you of what
would happen if i decided to turn the
tables at you. You have no idea of
what I'm capable of doing to you. No
idea of the things I can do to you. I
can crush you, I can destroy you. I
can break you, tear you apart, turn
you into little pieces. And I won't
stop. I can take your heart out of
your chest and feast on it, and break
it till there's nothing left of it.
It will happen. One of these days,
when you least expect it, you will
see it. You will see, with your own
eyes, that moment coming to you. You
will ask for mercy, and you will see
how I tear it apart. When have you
ever cared about me?! Huh?! You make
jokes about me all the time! If I go
outside and something happens to me,
you won’t help me!!! You just stay
here and laugh every time!!! When?!?
If you cared about me, you wouldn’t
ask me to bring you beer all the
time. You got legs, you can grab it
by yourself. Lazy ass bastard!
(Getting emotional)
I can go out there, and I can never
go back. And let’s see how worried
you are. OK, let’s be honest here.
Why are you so jealous about
everything?

BASTIAN
I just wanted to get this family
together.

MAGDALENA
(mockingly)
Really? Oww. That's so sad.
(normal)
Well, guess what. This family is
dead. It has always been this way. My
mom, your wife, passed away a few
years ago!! And YOU DON’T EVEN
FUCKING CARE!! Now I think that’s
what you’ll do if something happens
to me: You’ll just say you don’t
care. You know something? You always
lied to me. You always lied to me,
you always told me lies after lies
after lies after more dumb fucking
lies! You may not realize it. I
remember every single one of them.
(mocking him)
Oh no, Magda. I just got a little
uncontrolled with my alcohol. I
promise it won't happen again. Oh
Magda, I love you. I care about you.
Oh please Magda, don't go. I don't
want to lose my little girl.

We've never heard MAGDALENA like this. Seriously. Never.

Bastian looks like he just got punched hard in his heart,


because he just received it.

MAGDALENA
Do you remember the names you called
me when you were angry? All the
punishments you made to me, and made
me did? Do you even remember that one
time, that one fucking time when you
told me that I was a mess and you
were very sorry I was born?? Do you
even remember? I think you don't, you
old stupid fucking asshole! You piece
of shit! How dare you?!

BASTIAN
I'm sorry...
MAGDALENA
This is the last straw. The last
mistake you've ever done in your
life, because you'll be dead in a
while later.

BASTIAN
MAGDALENA...

Then, he opens his mouth and doesn’t move anymore. MAGDALENA


approaches and takes his pulse. It’s not beating. Bastian is
dead. His eyes lifeless, his heart not beating, his hands and
feet not moving.

Then, MAGDALENA takes Bastian's head and --

-- TWISTS IT! She twists her father's head on a graphic way to


see.

She finally lets go, she pants.

LUNA
MAGDALENA?

A blood soaked MAGDALENA (who has been blood soaked since she
killed her dad) turns at LUNA.

MAGDALENA
LUNA.

They embrace. They hug. They hold on each other so strongly.


LUNA starts crying.

LUNA
He tried -- He tried to --

MAGDALENA
It's ok. I got you now. I know, I
know. It’s ok. It’s over. I got you
now. I got you.

LUNA
MAGDALENA...

MAGDALENA
It’s ok. It’s fine. It’s over. He is
not alive, not anymore.

The whole scene becomes inaudible. LUNA begins to cry.


MAGDALENA comforts her.

CUT TO:
INT. THE RED HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. SECONDS LATER.
Luna arrives with Magdalena to the house. Mateo notices this.

MATEO
Luna? Who is this? Is this your girlfriend? Luna, for fuck’s
sake, we talked about it! We accorded that we are not gonna
risk a human into our getaway!

LUNA
No, no, no! She’s not human anymore! Look! Look at her teeth!

Magdalena opens her mouth, to reveal her fangs. Mateo


realizes.

MATEO
Luna. What the fuck did you just do?

LUNA
I’m sorry. It was an accident.

MATEO
Look at what you’ve done. Now what? Do we have to bring her
with us? Is that your plan, huh?

MAGDALENA
I wanted her to do that to me!

All eyes lock on Magdalena.

MATEO
What?

MAGDALENA
I wanted your sister to bite me. I let her do that. I didn’t
fucking stopped her. I can actually be free now.

MATEO
But, what about your dad?

MAGDALENA
I killed him.

Mateo is shocked.

MATEO
You did what?
MAGDALENA
I had to. To save myself. To save Luna. To release me from
this shit-hole town. Please, just let me stay with you guys. I
promise I won't tell the police. I won’t tell anybody else
about you guys. Please.

Mateo thinks about this. He sighs.

MATEO
Alright. You can stay with us.

Magdalena smiles. She sighs in relief. So does Luna.

MAGDALENA
Thank you so much.

MATEO
Just...don’t do anything bad, alright?

LUNA
Alright.

Luna and Magdalena hug, happy.

ELIZABETH (o.s)

Come on! Move!

cut to:

INT. FOREST. ONE NIGHT LATER.

Elizabeth, with a cast on her broken arm, walks on the forest


with her goons. She walks with Sebastian, her sometimes
boyfriend. They finally arrive to:

INT. QUARRY. SAME.

It's the same quarry from the beginning. Wait a minute. Could
it be?

Elizabeth and her goons admire the place.

guillermo

Well, how about this?


cut to:

LATER:
Guillermo and Franco are smoking cigarettes.

ON THE GROUND, far from them, Sebastian and Elizabeth are


wildly kissing. They make out. But sex is not implied.

Franco drops his cigarette and walks to the forest.

FRANCO
I'm gonna go peeing. You guys can
keep smoking if you want.

GUILLERMO
Why can’t you just fucking piss on
the water?

FRANCO
What if somebody drinks it? Plus, I'm
not that pig! Fuck off!

Franco walks to the forest.

INT. FOREST. LATER.

Franco is peeing on a tree. As he's about to finish, SOMEBODY


GRABS HIS HEAD! HE GASPS! THE PERSON WHO GRABBED HIS HEAD --
SMASHES HIS FACE ON THE TREE! FRANCO GRUNTS AND YELLS IN PAIN!
THE PERSON KEEPS SMASHING HIS HEAD IN THE TREE IN A WAY SO
STRONG, SO VIOLENT, SO IN-HUMAN, SO MONSTROUS, SO EXTREME AND
SO BRUTAL!

FRANCO'S NOSE LOSES A SHITLOAD OF BLOOD, BEING SOILED BOTH ON


HIS FACE AND ON THE TREE.

FRANCO'S NOSE IS BROKEN. AS THE PERSON FINISHES BANGING HIS


HEAD ON THE TREE FOR SEVERAL BRUTAL FUCKING TIMES, THE PERSON
GRABS FRANCO BY THE HAIR AND THROWS HIM IN THE GROUND.

Franco is now weak. His nose is broken. His face splattered


with his own blood. He can only see stars now.

THE PERSON APPROACHES TO HIM: IT'S MAGDALENA HERSELF! NOW AS A


BRUTAL, MINDLESS MONSTRUOUS VAMPIRESS!

She grabs Franco by the hair and begins to suck on his blood.
He can barely move his mouth or make a sound out of his mouth.

cut to:
INT. QUARRY. SAME.

SEBASTIAN and ELIZABETH are still on the ground. They're still


making out.

guillermo

Look at them. They are like two pigs wallowing in the mud.

sebastian

(got to notice what guillermo said)

Hey, cut it the fuck out! Can't you see i'm working in here?

guillermo

Yeah, working doesn't mean eating your girlfriend in front of


your friends, you fuckwad! Speaking of fuckwad, where's
Franco? What, did he went to the forest or something?
(at the forest; yells)
FRANCO! STOP FUCKING MASTURBATING IN
THERE AND COME BACK! THE PIGS ARE
WALLOWING IN THE MUD!

ELIZABETH
Fuck you, Guillermo!

GUILLERMO
No, you know what? Fuck you both, I'm
gonna go looking for him.

We follow Guillermo as he walks on the forest. We begins to be


walking deep on the forest.

GUILLERMO
Franco? You here? Yeah, real funny.
Stop playing the quiet man and come
back here, you little shit-!

After a couple of minutes without finding


anything, Guillermo gives up and returns to the
water quarry.

Now we're back at the quarry, where Sebastian and Elizabeth


keep kissing while Guillermo is now smoking.

SEBASTIAN

What? You didn’t found him?

GUILLERMO
No, he probably ran away--

Then, out of the forest, RAYMOND, VICTOR and BRUCE approach.

VICTOR

What the fuck are you pair of fucking losers doing in here?

The group turns, surprised.

ELIZABETH
We should ask the same to you. What
the fuck are you doing in here?

BRUCE

We didn't ask you to make the same question you fucking bitch!
We asked you to answer our question!

sebastian

Hey! Don't talk like that to my girlfriend!

RAYMOND/VICTOR/BRUCE

Owwwwww.

raymond

Girlfriend? Really? You're really in love with this piece of


shit?

sebastian

Say that again.

raymond

Say what again?

sebastian

What you've just said?

raymond

What did i just said?

sebastian

You called my girlfriend a piece of shit, didn't you?

Silence.
Raymond

I did?

sebastian

Listen, you two fucking weirdos, you better get the fuck away
from our zone.

VICTOR

Fuck you, this is our zone!

bruce

Yeah! Or what?

raymond

Yeah, what are you and your bitch and this little faggot over
there gonna do to us?

Silence. The stare-down is beginning to get awkward.

raymond

I knew you fucking bastards didn't had the courage--

Then, JAVIER’S TWO BULLIES APPEAR.

BULLY #1

Well, well, fucking well. Look what we fucking have in here.

BULLY #2

It’s the losers club? More like the retards club.

ELIZABETH

Oh shut up, you loser!

BULLY #1

Did you heard that, Cris? The retard just spoke.

The two bullies laugh. The others are annoyed.

BULLY #1

Beat it you retards. This is our zone.

ELIZABETH
Oh yeah? Or what? WHat if we don’t want to leave---?

Then, another group approaches. It’s Seth, Ryan, Josh and


Travis.

TRAVIS

What the fuck is this? We have a bunch of faggots standing in


here.

The band of boys laugh. The others feel annoyed. Seth is


recording with the camera.

TRAVIS

Beat it, losers. This is our territory--

Then, SPLASH! A BODY IS THROWN TO THE WATER. ALL TEENAGERS


GASP AND EXCLAIM! They look at the body.

sebastian

WHat the fuck was that?

guillermo

More like what the fuck is that?

ELIZABETH
That's a body you dumb fuckwad.

sebastian

I'll go check it.

ELIZABETH
Baby, please be careful.

Sebastian walks to the body. He swims on the water. And


finally holds on the body: IT'S FRANCO’S FUCKED UP, TORN OFF,
BROKEN BODY. Sebastian gasps. He backs off slowly.

sebastian

Oh shit!

ELIZABETH
What? What is it? Who's that?

Then, the teenagers hear something on the woods. They gasp as


they begin to be scared.

WE SLOWLY TURN UP, TO THE TREES, TO SEE HOW BEAUTIFUL-LOOKING


THEY ARE.
Then, we start to hear --

-- SOME SCREAMS!
-- SCREAMS OF PAIN!

-- INHUMANE GRUNTING!
-- SCREAMS OF PAIN AND AGONY!

We hear some people tearing apart some kind of human flesh as


the three teenagers are beginning to scream like hell for
help. They scream in pain and in agony. As the screams ends,
we SLOWLY TURN DOWN, only to see --

-- TORN BODY PARTS! TORN LEGS, TORN ARMS, A TORN TORSO, A


DISMEMBERED CORPSE, A FACE RIPPED IN HALF, ETC! Turns out
these parts used to belong to the bullies and the band of
boys. The camera is still recording.

With the bodies, we see JAVIER, who's now a red-eyed VAMPIRE,


previously turned by Vania when they were having sex, Vania,
MATEO, LUNA, MARCO, VINKO and MAGDALENA. The group, with their
hands and mouths and faces splattered in blood, look at the
bodies. MAGDALENA looks at the dead, torn off, dismembered
bodies of her bullies.

Then, PAINFUL GRUNTING IS HEARD BY MAGDALENA. She turns down


to see --

-- ELIZABETH, with her two legs torn off, spitting blood out
of her mouth, tries to crawl away. Crying silently. Tears
streaming off her eyes.

Magdalena slowly approaches her. She puts her own foot on


Elizabeth's back. Elizabeth gasps. She stops crawling. She
cries.

Magdalena turns her. Their eyes meet with each other.

Elizabeth prays for her life to be saved.

ELIZABETH
(crying; weakly)
Please...Please, just....Just....Let
me go....please....take me to a
hospital....Stop, please, stop!!! I
beg you please!!! I don’t want to
die. Please. They came and killed my
friends!!! I don’t want to be the
next one! Please, I’m sorry. For
everything I did, I’m sorry. Just
have mercy on me, alright? At least
just once.
And Magdalena?

She just smiles. She smiles at the sight of this. She then
begins to laugh. She cracks up laughing. She thinks this is
funny. In fact, this looks like the funniest thing she has
ever seen in her life: Her bully dying in front of her.

Then, Magdalena takes Elizabeth's broken arm --

-- and RIPS IT OFF! Elizabeth screams in a ghoulish endless


pain.

Then, Magdalena grabs Elizabeth's other arm --

-- and RIPS IT OFF TOO! Elizabeth can't stop screaming in


pain. She just doesn't stop.

Magdalena takes Elizabeth's dismembered body --

-- and throws it to the quarry water. Elizabeth is now gone.


Magdalena looks at Elizabeth drowning on the water. Magdalena
smiles.

MATEO
Come on. We have to go.

The group begins to leave.

smash to black.

OVER BLACK:
A rain drop falls from the sky, and
lands on the ground. Then, another
one, lands on a house's roof. Then,
another one. Then, another one. Then,
another one. The rain strongly pours
on the ground. With some thunder and
light storm with it. The rain hits
hard on wherever it falls into, it
hits hard like rocks.

SMASH TO:

THE RAIN
is strongly pouring on us, and on the
dark night. Lightning is emerged. The
sky shines briefly in white as
thunder sounds are strongly emitted.
We slowly go down and see we're on a
deserted FOREST ROAD.

The DREADFUL, MOANING, HOWLING WIND is now BLOWING.


Then, HAZY, BLURRY GLOWS of RED AND BLUE are being illuminated
on the BACKGROUND, far from us. It's A COP CAR. It races
through the rainy night with all speed. The siren sounds out
loud. The COP CAR -- RACES on THE DESERTED FOREST ROAD.

cut to:

EXT. COP CAR. SAME.

As we follow the COP CAR, the RAIN FLIES TO US WITH SUCH FURY
AND SPEED, as the COP CAR expells water and dirt on its path.

INT. COP CAR. SAME.

THROUGH THE COP CAR WINDSHIELD,

the car's driving through a dark, rainy night. Rain strongly


pours and falls to the windshield. HEAVY BREATHING is heard.
THE DRIVER, who drives with a hell of a speed, BREATHS HARD
AND OUT LOUD. The RADIO starts to beep. Interference is
emitted. Voices are heard on the radio.

LUIS (on radio)

Andres! Andres -- Where are you? Tell me you're getting


closer!

The DRIVER, ANDRES, grabs THE RADIO WALKIE and starts to talk.

ANDRES
I'm right here Luis! Is the ambulance
there?

LUIS (on radio)

They already arrived. The others are on their way. Where are
you?

ANDRES
I don't -- I don't know. I'm in the
middle of fucking nowhere!

LUIS (on radio)

Please hurry up!

Then, he sees some floodlights on a crime scene, on a quarry.


It seems like he's getting closer to wherever he's going.

ANDRES
Hold on! I think i found you! I'm
close to the scene! I'm approaching!

cut to:

INT. QUARRY. SAME.

ANDRES arrives. THE COP CAR arrives to A CRIME SCENE on a


QUARRY.

INT. COP CAR. SAME.

THROUGH THE WINDSHIELD,


Andres pulls over the car next to an
ambulance. A group of people are
outside. Something's happening.

ANDRES
Jesus Christ.

He RUSHES OUT of the car, into --

INT. QUARRY. SAME.

ANDRES rushes out of the COP CAR, and runs to THE QUARRY with
the OTHER COP, his sidekick and partner: LUIS, 38 years old.

ANDRES runs front, then stops and pants. He gets shocked. The
lights flash on the scene. Andres walks around as he sees --

-- TORN BODY PARTS! TORN LEGS, TORN ARMS, A TORN TORSO, A


DISMEMBERED CORPSE, A FACE RIPPED IN HALF, ETC! Turns out
these parts used to belong to various teenagers.

ANDRES
(shocked)
Jesus, Mary and Joseph...

Then he turns.

ANDRES
Is that him? Is he alive? Please tell
me he's alive.

cut to:

UNDERWATER.

The lights flash on a blurry way. Then, A HAND -- floats on


us. A LIFE-LESS HAND of a TEENAGER.
Then, A BODY -- OF A TEENAGER floats on us. A LIFE-LESS
TEENAGER! Like 14 years-old.

Then, THE BODY is being dragged to the surface by a couple of


people. It's being PULLED OUT OF THE WATER.

ON THE SURFACE.
The BODY of the TEENAGER is being put
on a small boat as TWO PEOPLE start
taking the boat to the edge.

Andres and Luis are devastated, shocked, horrified by just


looking at this event.

luis

What do you think it happened? A wild creature?

No answer.

smash to black.

INT. SCHOOL GYM. THE NIGHT LATER.

It's the night of the senior prom. The school is full of


excitement. Everybody is there. Students and even the teachers
couldn't fail to come.

Sitting on a spot, there's FEDERICO with DENISE, a cute girl


on her 17s.

There's some classical 80s or 70s music sounding on


loudspeakers. Those kind of songs you use on every prom. But
it's not modern.

CUT TO:

OUTSIDE THE GYM - SAME:

Marco, Vania, Mateo, Luna and Magdalena are walking to the gym
entrance.

MAGDALENA
Alright, i'm going in.

LUNA
Sure you can do this? I can kill him
for you, if you want.

MAGDALENA
No, no, no, no. I need this. Please.
I need to kill him myself. Please.
LUNA
Alright, babe. Kill him with all your
strength.

MATEO
You guys! We don't have much time!

MAGDALENA
Right. Sorry.
(to luna)
I'll see you inside.

LUNA
Inside will be.

They give a brief kiss on the mouth. Everyone, except for


Magdalena, climb the walls of the gym. They rise up to the
rooftop.

Magdalena enters the gym.

INT. SCHOOL GYM. SAME.

Magdalena enters. She looks around to the crowd, to find


Federico.

Then, SPUD, another student, approaches to the stage. He walks


up to the microphone.

spud

Attention! If i please could have your attention! May i have


your attention please? Lower the music please...

The music pauses.

spud

Thank you. Now, we've got the winners of the night. It's
Denise Vergara and Federico Volpe.

Suddenly, the entire room EXPLODES into a huge round of


APPLAUSE.

Federico and Denise rise up from their seats. They walk to the
stage. They're both surrounded by smiling faces.

Magdalena looks at him go to the stage and feels disgust.

After a few moments of claps and happy smiling faces, Denise


and Federico arrive to the stage. They smile to the big-ass
crowd.
Suddenly, MAGDALENA APPEARS FROM THE CROWD AND RUNS TO THEM!
Federico's smile fades away. He turns his smiling face to a
worried face.

Magdalena runs to him and...

...STABS HER WHOLE FIST ON HIS GUTS! Everyone, the teachers,


the students, including Denise, scream!

Magdalena finally extracts something from his insides: HIS OWN


RED BLOODY BEATING HEART! It should be shown in a gruesome,
excruciating, graphic way, even though it's an animated film.

Magdalena throws it to the crowd. Federico expels his last


breath out of his mouth, as he falls to the ground. He dies.
Denise screams in sheer terror. Everyone else screams in sheer
terror.

Magdalena, without any remorse on her, walks to the


microphone.

MAGDALENA
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen!

Everyone stare to her with sheer terror on their faces and


expressions.

MAGDALENA
My name is Magdalena!

DENISE
We already know who you are, you
fucking bitch!

Magdalena slaps the living fucking shit out of her. Denise


grunts as she falls to the ground. Magdalena turns back to the
microphone.

MAGDALENA
Now, as i was saying, for those who
don't know me and obviously don't
want to, my name is Magdalena. And
tonight, i'm gonna bring you some
news.
(points at federico's dead
body)
This young man, Federico Volpe, is a
rapist. That night when we went to
camp, he put me to the ground...and
he raped me.

There's a horrified gasp from the audience.


MAGDALENA
Oh yes. Oh yes. He raped me. He raped
me in a moment where i was weak.
Where i couldn't defend myself
because he was the strongest one--

SPUD approaches.

spud

Alright, that's enough. Somebody call the police--

Magdalena steals the microphone off him.

MAGDALENA
It was in a forest. He raped me on a
forest. While all his other friends
held me down. And couldn't do
nothing...but laugh.

Federico's friends watch the scene.

MAGDALENA
That's right.

She points at them.

MAGDALENA
Those friends.

All eyes lock on Federico's friends.

federico's friend #1

That's not true! She's faking it! She's faking it all up!

Suddenly, MAGDALENA ERPUTS IN STRONG LAUGHTER. All eyes lock


on her. After a moment, she stops.

MAGDALENA
Look. I'm laughing. The same way you
guys did when your dearest friend
raped me.

Suddenly, the whole audience starts to boo, but not at


Federico's friends, but at her. She just killed somebody in
front of them.

MAGDALENA
Seriously? SERIOUSLY?! YOU'RE ON HIS
SIDE NOW!
(scoffs)
I thought you guys would help me on
this. But you really didn't. If it
was me who died in front of you, it
wouldn't matter anyway. I never
matter to you guys. To you guys, you
just consider me to be a failure!
Maybe you're right. Maybe that's what
i am. A dumb stupid fucking failure.
(then:)
Did you guys ever got the chance to
help me?

cut to:

QUICK FLASHBACKS OF MAGDALENA BEING BULLIED MERCILESSLY. FROM


BEING PUSHED DOWN THE STAIRS TO BE LOCKED INSIDE A CLOSET. BUT
NOBODY ELSE HELPED HER.

CUT BACK TO:

INT. SCHOOL GYM. SAME.

MAGDALENA
Everyone of you just didn't got the
chance to help me. You're all such
inconsiderate people! You know what i
would do if any one of you just dies?
I would laugh. That's right. I would
laugh to how free i am that i am
liberated from such a group of
douchebags and literal scumbags!

spud

Alright, that's it you fucking cunt. Give me back the


microphone!

MAGDALENA
(into the microphone, still)
One last thing. To you, Spud. To you,
Denise. To everyone in this room. I
haven't even said what i...what
we...are about to do to you.

spud

"We"? "We" who? Who is "We"?

MAGDALENA
My friends. My new family. You know
what we are about to do to you?
Then, the climax:

MAGDALENA
We're gonna kill everyone in this
room.

Suddenly, CRASHING DOWN FROM THE ROOF OF THE GYM, MARCO,


VANIA, LUNA, JAVIER and MATEO crash down and arrive to the
gym.

THey land on the floor, eyes red. Everyone looks at them. They
all scream.

Let The Prom Night Massacre begin:

Luna, Vania, Magdalena, Marco and Mateo (The Vampires)


violently attack as many prom night guests as they can. They
attack, torture and kill teachers and students in such a
merciless way.

A MONTAGE OF:
Every Vampire member viciously
attacking, killing, dismembering and
ripping the parts off of many humans.
They're basically killing every human
on the room.

This is shown in such a brutal, bloody, gory, grotesque,


extreme, horrifying, graphic, horrendous, disturbing and
terrifying way to see. It's enough to make the film itself to
get an NC-17 rating.

AS THE MONTAGE ENDS, we see Mateo using various glass bottles


of whiskey. He pours them on the ground. He then grabs a
lighter off his pocket and decides to turn the flames on.

The place is now on fire.

MAGDALENA, who's feeding on a dead person, suddenly rises up


and watches the chaos that she and her new family have formed.

She looks everywhere she can. The walls are now on fire. She
looks at the chaos. People screaming in sheer terror. Some are
running away and some are dying.

Magdalena smiles. For the first time in her life, she's


finally happy. Her school is now burning and she feels happy.

Luna approaches to her. And the two kiss while the place is on
flames.

We slowly PUSH BACK to reveal a grotesque, disturbing but


beautiful shot of two girls kissing on a fiery, hellish place.
fade to black.
INT. MARCO’S HOUSE - BEDROOM. MINUTES LATER.

We see GRANDPA sleeping on the bed of the bedroom. Then, out


of the shadows, Marco emerges. He’s got these blazing red
eyes.

MARCO
Hello, Alfonso. Guillermo Alfonso Byrt Vitalich. That’s your
real name, isn’t it? Grandpa, remember how you used to tell me
that you loved me? That you wouldn’t cause any sort of damage
to me? That you wouldn't hurt me? Well, look at me now. Look
at what you’ve done. Look at what you’ve turned me into. This
is all your fault. How could you? After all those fake
promises? After all those lies? After all that fucking rape
you caused to me? I can still feel it, you know. I can still
feel the pain.

He finally approaches to the sleeping Grandpa.

MARCO
You want to feel it? You want to feel pain? Ok. You’re gonna
feel it. And don’t worry. It’s gonna be just one small bite.
Then, you die.

He lunges to his Grandpa’s neck.

MARCO
Everything’s gonna be OK. I promise you that.

Then....Marco bites him on the neck. Grandpa gasps, as he


tries to wake up. He coughs blood.

As Marco finishes feeding on his Grandpa’s blood, he aparts


from his neck and looks at Grandpa. Then, he takes his
head....and STRONGLY RIPS IT OFF HIS BODY! He spits on the
head and throws it to the ground. Marco strongly steps on it
and the head explodes into a lake of blood and gore.

Marco turns to the door. He stops and looks up. He inhales and
exhales. He exits the room.

smash to:

INT. NEIGHBORHOOD. THE NEXT NIGHT.


Outside of THE RED HOUSE, we see Mateo and LUNA about to leave
the house.

INT. JAVIER HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. SAME.

Javier walks around his house. He walks by every room of his


own house.

JAVIER

(to vania)

Can I tell you something?

VANIA

Sure, what is it?

JAVIER

I don't need to come back. I needed to get out of here as soon


as possible.

Vania walks to him. Javier turns to her. They hold on each


other's cheeks.

vania

Sorry about the bite, i didn't mean to--

Javier

No, no, no, no, no. It's fine. It hurt, yeah. But at the same
time, it felt good.

Vania smiles. Javier kisses her forehead. Then, the two kiss
on the mouth.

vania

Promise me that you won't leave us. Or me.

Javier

I promise, with all my heart and soul, that i will never leave
you, and your family. I'm gonna be right here for you.

vania

Thank you, Javier.

Javier
For what?

vania

For being the best thing that has ever happened to me.

The two kiss again on the mouth.

INT. MAGDALENA'S HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. SAME.

MAGDALENA packs up her clothes in a bag. LUNA approaches to


her.

LUNA
Need help with that?

MAGDALENA
I'm okay. Thank you, though.

Silence.

LUNA
I don't know if this is gonna sound
cheesy to you.

MAGDALENA
Why cheesy?

LUNA
Look, i know i hurt you that night.
Alright?

MAGDALENA finishes packing up. She looks at LUNA.

MAGDALENA
You didn't hurt me. You released me.
You saved me. If i didn't met you, i
would have died. You set me free.

LUNA
I promise that when we're together, i
promise that i will protect you and i
will take care of you for as long as
i'm still breathing.

MAGDALENA smiles.

MAGDALENA
You know something? It doesn't matter
the place where i'm going. It matters
the people who i'm going with.
Then, a sweet moment: MAGDALENA approaches and KISSES LUNA ON
THE LIPS. LUNA GASPS. MAGDALENA backs off, embarrassed.

LUNA
(nervous laughter)
What -- What was that?

MAGDALENA
I don't know. A "thank you" kiss.

LUNA
Thank you? Thank you for what?

MAGDALENA
For releasing me. I've been trapped
in here for so long. And all i needed
was for someone to release me out of
this place. So, thank you.

Luna smiles. She kisses Magdalena on the mouth.

LUNA
You're welcome.

cut to:

INT. BASTIAN'S CAR. LATER.

Javier drives as Vania is on the front seat. On the backseat,


there's Mateo, Marco, Vinko, MAGDALENA and LUNA who are
sitting together.

MATEO
Where are we going?

Javier

I don’t know it yet. Maybe we need to see in our way. If we’re


chased, maybe we should go to a place where they don’t find
us.

MATEO
Just us?

Javier

Just us.

MAGDALENA rests her head on LUNA's shoulder, eyes closed.

MAGDALENA is now comfortable as LUNA looks at the window, with


a calm, solemn, thoughtful, but determinate look on her face.
Maybe she’s thinking a better future for the family and for
her and MAGDALENA. She rests her head on the window and she
closes her eyes as we slowly move to the window, seeing the
town passing by as the car still drives by the town.

EXT. TOWN. SAME.

The car passes by the sign: NOW LEAVING Taverner's Hill, come
back soon. The car drives away from the town.

INT. BASTIAN'S CAR. SAME.

Vania looks at the window. Javier puts his hand on her


shoulder. She reacts to this with a smile.

Javier, on the other hand, looks at front, with a determinate


look on his face. Where they are going is still a question.
But any danger that will threaten Javier new family, he's not
gonna do it alone. They're all gonna have to face that danger
that will threaten the family.

Marco is free now. He has his new family by his side now.

Javier is not gonna hunt for them. He's gonna hunt with them.

And where are they going? Well, i would like to call it "a
better place" and just leave it all like that.

Marco smiles. Eyes deep red. Looking forward. Without looking


back.

CUT TO:
INT. HOUSE - MAIN ROOM. NIGHT. 2 NIGHTS LATER.

Marco plays a vinyl on a vinyl player. It’s the song “LOVE


WILL TEAR US APART” By Joy Division.

He moves to the main room where he and Vania, and Luna and
Javier and Magdalena and Vinko start to dance. They start to
dance with each other.

They dance to their freedom.

- Magdalena dances with Luna


- Vania dances with Javier
- Marco dances alone
- Vinko dances alone
Now there’s a vampire family dancing. Except for Mateo, who’s
not dancing.
Mateo is watching this scenario. Then, he smiles. For some
reason, this scenario reminds him of his family, with his
parents, dancing. That’s why he’s smiling.

He just smiles.

CUT TO:
INT. HOUSE - ROOM #2. LATER - DAY.

MATEO arrives to the room. There’s a bed in there.

He lies on bed. He inhales and exhales. He closes his eyes.


Then, he starts to float. He stays there, floating.

We start to come closer to his eyes. Then, as we focus only on


the left eye...

...it slowly opens.

INT. HELL. UNKNOWN TIME.

NOTE: This scene occurs right after David died.

We see how DAVID is lying on the ground of a snowy forest. He


opens his eyes and looks at the sky. It’s a giant swirl
colored in orange and in red.

David rises. He looks around and wonders.

Then, he hears footsteps approaching him.

Maria.

She smiles at him. He smiles back. She approaches him.

MARIA
Such a merry, lovely day, isn’t it?

DAVID
I don’t know about that.

MARIA
You’re planning to lay there all day, without doing anything?
DAVID
I don’t know.

MARIA
Want to go with me?

DAVID
Where?

MARIA
You’ll see. Come on.

Maria extends her hand. David takes it. They both walk
together as they’re ready to spend the rest of their new
eternity in hell.

FADE TO RED.

CUE THE CREDITS.

END OF CHAPTER THREE

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