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2 5 paragraph argumentative essay 4 Yes
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1 Introductory Paragraph
General information Childbirth is common and normal for every
woman. Childbirth is usually accompanied
by intense pain and anxiety for the mother.
Many methods used to reduce pain, provide
comfort, and relieve anxiety at a normal
birth, one of these methods was water birth.
Thesis statement (claim/thesis/stance) Childbirth through water birth is becoming
known and mothers are being widely chosen
for childbirth; including several celebrities
like Andien also chose the method.
2 Body Paragraph 1
Argument Water birth method development
Evidence Cited from the “water birth” paper by doctor
Otamar during the talk show on august 2007
- First introduced by a Russian
researcher named Igor Tjarkovsky in
the Uni-Soviet country of the 1960’s
- Frederick’s obstetrician made sure
babies born with methods water birth
were easier to adjust from the
atmosphere in the womb to the
“outside world” as weel as
minimally traumatic
- Michael Odent continued Frederick’s
idea until at the end of 1990,
thousands of mothers were noted for
giving birth by method of water birth
at the Odent clinic.
- The water birth the spread to
countries like Europe, USA, Canada,
Australia and New Zeland.
- Since 1995, it has been noted that
some 39 countries have used water
birth method with 19.000 mothers.
3 Body Paragraph 2
Argument Water benefits for mothers and babies
 Evidence - Water is shooting and comfort the
mother
- Warm water will increase maternal
energy in the birth process
- Water loses mothers weight a little
so that mothers can move freely
- Warm water also increases the
contraction of the uterus efficiently
- Warm water increases the flow of
blood, making the uterus’s muscles
much better, less pain for the mother
and more oxygen for the baby
- Warm water can reduce the release
of stress hormones and release
endorphins
- Water causes perineum to become
more elastic and relaxed
- Water provides a ‘personal’ feeling
that releases all anxiety and fear
- For baby, warm water (37⁰C)
provides an environment such as the
uterus
4 Body Paragraph 3
Argument Strengths and weaknesses water birth
method
Evidence Pros:
- Less the pain
- It’s easier to move during birth
because the body feels lighter
- Accelerated birth process
- Reducing episiotomy measures.
(Chineze M, 2000)
Cons:
- The risk of infection
- The umbilical cord can be severed
before a baby is expelled from the
water by quickly lifting the baby
- A baby’s body temperature can be
too high or too low
- It’s always possibility of baby’s
breathing water
- A baby’s risk of drowning, though it
is very rare
 - At risk of pneumonia, although not
medically established
- At risk of aspiration syndrome
meconium. (Momdadi.com, diakses
6 November 2020)
5 Concluding Paragraph
The conclusion is that a water birth method
is widely known and chosen by many
mothers for the birth of their children. These
water birth methods offer multiple benefits
to mothers and babies. One of its advantages
is that of reducing pain and of providing
comfort during childbirth.
 “Water Birth: Comfortably Given Birth”

Childbirth is common and normal for every woman. Childbirth is usually accompanied by
intense pain and anxiety for the mother. Many methods used to reduce pain, provide comfort, and
relieve anxiety at a normal birth, one of these methods was water birth. This method of birth uses
warm water, where it is known that some humans are very comfortable and respond to water. The
human body also consists of most of the water. Method of water birth known in Indonesia since
October 2006. Childbirth through water birth is becoming known and mothers are being widely
chosen for childbirth; including several celebrities like Andien also chose the method.

The water birth first introduced by a Russian researcher named Igor Tjarkovsky in the Uni-
Soviet country of the 1960’s. Igor argued that childbirth in water has more to offer than normal
childbirth. This method of childbirth was then developed in France by Frederick Leboyer,
Frederick’s obstetrician made sure babies born with methods water birth were easier to adjust from
the atmosphere in the womb to the “outside world” as well as minimally traumatic. Michael Odent
continued Frederick’s idea until at the end of 1990, thousands of mothers were noted for giving
birth by method of water birth at the Odent clinic. The water birth the spread to countries like
Europe, USA, Canada, Australia and New Zeland. Since 1995, it has been noted that some 39
countries have used water birth method with 19.000 mothers.

The theory behind childbirth in water is that babies sits in comfortable amnion fluid in their
mother’s uterus for nine months and gives birth in an environment more or less the same as the
uterus is thought to make the baby feel comfort and reduce mothers stress level. Water is used as a
medium in childbirth because it can benefit the mother and the baby in a variety of ways. Water is
shooting and comfort the mother, warm water will increase maternal energy in the birth process,
water loses mothers weight a little so that mothers can move freely. Warm water also increases the
contraction of the uterus efficiently, warm water increases the flow of blood, making the uterus’s
muscles much better, less pain for the mother and more oxygen for the baby, warm water can reduce
the release of stress hormones and release endorphins. Water also causes perineum to become more
elastic and relaxed, water provides a ‘personal’ feeling that releases all anxiety and fear, and for
baby warm water (37⁰C) provides an environment such as the uterus.

Water birth has a lot of advantages, some advantages it’s earned is less the pain, easier to
move during birth because the body feels lighter, accelerated birth process, and reducing
episiotomy measures. But behind the advantages of water birth, there was also a weakness. The
weakness of this method is like the risk of infection, the umbilical cord can be severed before a
baby is expelled from the water by quickly lifting the baby, a baby’s body temperature can be too
high or too low, it’s always possibility of baby’s breathing water, a baby’s risk of drowning, though
it is very rare, at risk of pneumonia, although not medically established, and at risk of aspiration
syndrome meconium. Accordingly, the method of water birth could be employed only by an
experienced doctor and midwife.

Despite the risks of water birth methods, the first time it appeared in Indonesia the water
birth method had become a media highlight in a short time. Doctor Otamar as a doctor who first
helped birth by using the water birth method and Mrs. Liz as the first patient, a lot in law to attend
the seminar and talk show as a source. Since that time water birth methods began to be known in
Indonesia. Many hospitals also use water birth methods in Jakarta and Bali. Because a lot of talk
in social media, many mothers are becoming acquainted with and choose the water birth method
for their children. This method is also chosen because of the many advantages of the water birth
method made for mothers and babies. One of its advantages is that of reducing pain and providing
comfort during childbirth.
 References

Veradiani, Anny. 2008. Water Birth (Kajian tentang pengambilan keputusan dan pencitraannya
pada 3 ibu yang melahirkan dengan metode Water Birth di RS SamMarie Family
Healthcare). FISIP UI: Jakarta Selatan.

Chineze M, Mandish K. A Retrospective Comparison of Water Births and Conventional Vaginal

Deliveries. EJOGRB. 2000; 15-20

“Kelebihan dan Kekurangan Water Birth” dalam

http://momdadi.com/momdadi/kelebihandankekurangan-waterbirth/ (Diakses tanggal 06
November 2020)
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Childbirth is usually accompanied by intense pain and anxiety for the mother. Many methods used to reduce pain, provide comfort,
and relieve anxiety at a normal birth, one of these methods was water birth.This method of birth uses warm water, where it is known
that some humans are very comfortable and respond to water.The human body also consists of most of the water.Method of water
birth known in Indonesia since October 2006.Childbirth through water birth is becoming known and mothers are being widely
chosen for childbirth; including several celebrities like Andien also chose the method.The water birth first introduced by a Russian
researcher named Igor
Tjarkovsky in the Uni-Soviet country of the 1960’s.Igor argued that childbirth in water has more to offer than normal childbirth. This
method of childbirth was then developed in France by Frederick Leboyer, Frederick’s obstetrician made sure babies born with
methods water birth were easier to adjust from the atmospherein the womb to the “outside world” as well as minimally
traumatic.Michael Odent continued Frederick’s idea until at the end of 1990, thousands of mothers were noted for giving birth by
method of water birth at the Odent clinic. The water birth the spread to countries like Europe, USA, Canada, Australia and New
Zeland. Since 1995, it has been noted that some 39 countries have used water birth method with 19.000 mothers.The theory behind
childbirth in water is that babies sits in comfortable amnion fluid in their mother’s uterus for nine months and gives birth in an
environment more or less the same as the uterus is thought to make the baby feel comfort and reduce mothers stress level.Water is
used as a medium in childbirth because it can benefit the mother and the baby in a variety of ways.Water is shooting and comfort
the mother, warm water will increase maternal energy in the birth process, water loses mothers weight a little so that mothers can
move freely.Warm water also increases the contraction of the uterus efficiently, warm water increases the flow of blood, making the
uterus’s muscles much better, less pain for the mother and more oxygen for the baby, warm water can reduce the release of stress
hormones and release endorphins.Water also causes perineum to become more elastic and relaxed, water provides a ‘personal’
feeling that releases all anxiety and fear, and for baby warm water (37?C) provides an Water birth has a lot of advantages, some
advantages it’s earned is less the pain, easier to move during birth because the body feels lighter, accelerated birth process, and
reducing episiotomy measures.But behind the advantages of water birth, there was also a weakness.The weakness of this method
is like the risk of infection, the umbilical cord can be severed before a baby is expelled from the water by quickly lifting the baby, a
baby’s body temperature can be too high or too low, it’s always possibility of baby’s breathing water, a baby’s risk of drowning,
though it is very rare, atrisk of pneumonia, although not medically established, and at risk of aspiration syndrome meconium.
Accordingly, the method of water birth could be employed only by an experienced doctor and midwife. Despite the risks of water
birth methods, the first time it appeared in Indonesia the water birth method had become a media highlight in a short time. Doctor
Otamar as a doctor who first helped birth by using the water birth method and Mrs.Liz as the first patient, a lot in law to attend the
seminar and talk show as a source.
Since that time water birth methods began to be known in Indonesia.Many hospitals also use water birth methods in Jakarta and Bali.
Because a lot of talk in social media, many mothers are becoming acquainted with and choose the water birth method for their
children. This method is also chosen because of the many advantages of the water birth method made for mothers and babies. One of
its advantages is that of reducing pain and providing comfort during childbirth.

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