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Vocabulary:
-Obesity (n): overweight
Obese (adj): very fat = overweight
Ex: obese children have very bad health conditions.
-trend (n)
-trendy (adj)
Outline:
Intro:
Topic: Obesity = overweight in children
Answer: there are some (two main reasons) reasons leading to
obesity in children.
Body:
- Paragraph 1: Reason 1 fast food (unhealthy eating habit/diet)
- Paragraph 2: Reason 2 lazy, do not do exercise, watch TV
(unhealthy lifestyle)
Conclusion:
Repeat the answer in the intro.
Sample: (easy)
First of all, it is clear that children really like eating fast foods, and
it is the main reason of overweight/ obesity. Most children and
kids love eating hot dogs, hamburgers, and fried chicken. Also, the
young students enjoy drinking coke. These fast foods are not good
for their health because they have a lot of cholesterol. Moreover,
children do not like eating vegetables. In short, I think that children
become overweight because they have an unhealthy diet.
Sample:
In recent years, it is true that obesity has become
really/extremely popular with children and teenagers in many
countries, especially in developed nations. In my opinion, there are
two/some main reasons leading to this problem/issue.
No one can deny that nowadays fast foods is the main reason
why children become overweight. Firstly, I think that fast foods
such as fried chicken, hot dog, hamburger, and pizza are very fatty.
Also, when children eat fast foods, they will have an unhealthy diet
because they do not eat vegetables. Moreover, many busy parents
do not have enough time to cook healthy meals; therefore, they
often order unhealthy fast foods for their kids. As a result, the
children get fat easily.
Another important reason is that today young generations are
very lazy, and they do not have a lot of physical and outdoor
activities. For example, young students like playing video and
online games. They rarely go out to do exercises or play sports.
Also,/In addition, after school they just sit and watch films and
cartoons. In short, I completetly believe that these habits are very
unhealthy.