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Topic: Nowadays, the number of overweight children is increasing

in developed countries. This trend is causing worries for society. In


you opinion, what are the causes of obesity?

Vocabulary:
-Obesity (n): overweight
Obese (adj): very fat = overweight
Ex: obese children have very bad health conditions.
-trend (n)
-trendy (adj)

Outline:
Intro:
Topic: Obesity = overweight in children
Answer: there are some (two main reasons) reasons leading to
obesity in children.
Body:
- Paragraph 1: Reason 1  fast food (unhealthy eating habit/diet)
- Paragraph 2: Reason 2  lazy, do not do exercise, watch TV
(unhealthy lifestyle)
Conclusion:
Repeat the answer in the intro.

Sample: (easy)

In recent years, it is true that overweight/obesity in children has


become really popular in many developed nations. In my opinion,
there are two main reasons leading to this problem.

First of all, it is clear that children really like eating fast foods, and
it is the main reason of overweight/ obesity. Most children and
kids love eating hot dogs, hamburgers, and fried chicken. Also, the
young students enjoy drinking coke. These fast foods are not good
for their health because they have a lot of cholesterol. Moreover,
children do not like eating vegetables. In short, I think that children
become overweight because they have an unhealthy diet.

Another reason is that nowadays/ (today) children are very lazy,


and they do not want to do exercises; they do not want to do
physical activities and sports. For example, children and teenagers
only like( are interested in) watching movies and playing games.
They spend many hours sitting in front of the TV and computer. It is
a very bad habit, and it is not good for their health. As a result,
young generations can get/become fat easily.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that there are two main reasons


leading to overweight in children: unhealthy eating habit and
unhealthy lifestyle.

Sample:
In recent years, it is true that obesity has become
really/extremely popular with children and teenagers in many
countries, especially in developed nations. In my opinion, there are
two/some main reasons leading to this problem/issue.

No one can deny that nowadays fast foods is the main reason
why children become overweight. Firstly, I think that fast foods
such as fried chicken, hot dog, hamburger, and pizza are very fatty.
Also, when children eat fast foods, they will have an unhealthy diet
because they do not eat vegetables. Moreover, many busy parents
do not have enough time to cook healthy meals; therefore, they
often order unhealthy fast foods for their kids. As a result, the
children get fat easily.
Another important reason is that today young generations are
very lazy, and they do not have a lot of physical and outdoor
activities. For example, young students like playing video and
online games. They rarely go out to do exercises or play sports.
Also,/In addition, after school they just sit and watch films and
cartoons. In short, I completetly believe that these habits are very
unhealthy.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that there are two main reasons


causing obesity in young generations. [:unhealthy eating habit and
unhealthy lifestyle.]

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