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It is true that it has become harder for most children to concentrate on their lessons in school.

This essay will outline a number of reasons for this problem and suggest a number of possible
solutions to help tackle it.
There are two significant reasons as to why many students have a lack of concentration in
school. Firstly, a major factor could be the impact of high-tech equipment such as laptop,
tablet and smartphone. When students feel bored during the lecture or face the high pressure
of learning, they tend to turn to their smartphone for entertainment. As a result, they will get
distracted when playing games or chatting. Secondly, children spend almost all their time
studying in schools; therefore, they always try to save as much as they can. Consequently,
some pupils skip their meals, particularly breakfast, to get a small amount of time for
studying. This in turn affects the physical health of them including concentration ability.
However, these issues can be addressed effectively if certain steps are taken by parents and
teachers. Firstly, both families and schools need to work together to control students who use
electronic devices during class. For example, teachers should impose a policy to restrict and
give a punishment with parent’s permission. Secondly, teachers should create more
interesting lectures by applying technologies, which can contribute to stimulating children’s
concentration.
In conclusion, there are two main reasons as to why many students pay less attention to their
lessons at school. Nevertheless, there are some measures that can be taken to deal with the
problems.

The second reason is that an impact of high-tech equipment such as laptop, tablet,
smartphone etc. As youngsters have to study constantly many hours, they yearn for an
entertainment to relieve the high pressure of learning and distract lessons by playing
games or chatting through smart devices.

Furthermore, both families and schools need to work together to control pupils who use
electronic devices during class. For examples, teachers should impose a policy to restrict and
give a punishment with parent’s permission

since children have much more workload to study in schools in a limited time frame, they
always try to save time as much as they can. For example, most of the pupils skip their meals,
particularly breakfast to get a few amount of time for studying. This habit would negatively
affect the physical health status of them, which will reduce the concentration ability.

electronic devices can play a major role in distracting students. When feeling bored during
lecture, students turn to their smartphones for distraction. They use these devices to access
materials unrelated to their study like mobile games or to send messages through social
networking application.

Tailoring teaching styles combined with applying technologies to deliver interesting lectures
also contribute a part of stimulating children’s concentration.

Frequent appreciation and prizes should be awarded to the students for their performance. E-
learning and flexible class should be introduced. More practical aspects than theoretical
aspects of education should be introduced.

imposing ban on the use of smartphones in classrooms can deter students from being
distracted during lessons. If they do not check their phone from time to time, they can
immerse themselves in the lessons. T
I believe the most obvious solution is that parents should control their children in the use of
technological devices such as iPad, computers and smartphones, which helps to avoid
physical and psychological health issues to a greater extent.

In conclusion, there are two main reasons why many students pay less attention on their
lesson at school, and both parents and teachers should solve this issue properly.

There are many reasons behind the lack of concentration by children in schools

However, these issues can be addressed effectively if certain steps are taken by parents and
teachers.

It is true that it has become harder for most children to concentrate on their lessons in school.
This essay will outline a number of reasons for this problem and suggest a number of possible
solutions to help tackle it.
There are two significant reasons as to why many students have a lack of concentration in
school. A major factor could be the impact of high-tech equipment such as laptop, tablet and
smartphone. When students feel bored during the lecture or face the high pressure of learning,
they tend to turn to their smartphone for entertainment. As a result, they will get distracted
when playing games or chatting. Another point to consider here is that children are
overloaded in learning. Students are given too much homework; therefore, they always try to
save as much time as they can to finish it. For instance, some pupils skip their meals,
particularly breakfast, to get a small amount of time for studying. This in turn affects the
physical health of them including concentration ability.
However, these issues can be addressed effectively if certain steps are taken by parents and
teachers. Firstly, both families and schools need to work together to control students who use
electronic devices during class. For example, teachers should impose a policy to restrict and
give a punishment with parent’s permission. Secondly, teachers should create more
interesting lectures by applying technologies, which can contribute to stimulating children’s
concentration. Besides, they should only give enough assignments to students.
In conclusion, there are two main reasons as to why many students pay less attention to their
lessons at school. Nevertheless, there are some measures that can be taken to deal with the
problems.

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there are several reasons for authorities to decide to import food. Firstly, importing food is
considered as the most effective way to diversify the number of goods on the countries’
domestic markets. This will lead to various choices for consumers, and certainly encourages a
well-being life for people. Secondly, many foreign products mean that domestic markets will be
really competitive that will force local manufacturers to improve their production practices to
compete with others. As the result, customers will benefits from numerous high-quality goods on
the markets.

- more jobs opportunities


Conclusion: importing food should be encouraged because of many significant benefits it brings
to countries’ citizens.

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- Furthermore, food importation can have negative environmental impacts due to the large
amounts of carbon emissions released from the transportation of products all around the
world via planes, trucks, and ships. By reducing food imports, countries can play their part
in helping to protect the environment, rather than contributing to environmental issues such
as climate change.

- imported food does not have the same quality and freshness as locally produced food and
crops. If food is imported from a long distance, the food value degrades and in some cases,
toxic chemicals are used to preserve the imported food. Thus the local production of foods
would ensure better food quality and sound health of citizens.

- preservative -> affect people heath

most people argue that a country must produce its own food for the entire nation

It is thought by some people that the government should focus on producing


all kinds of food for their citizens and importing as little as possible to
ensure food sufficiency. While I agree that food should be produced
locally, I believe that it is necessary to import food from other countries.
On the one hand, the primary reason why a country should produce its own
food is that it will create more jobs for local people. In other words, there will
be more job opportunities for local people in farming and food processing
industries due to the increase in domestic production. This in turn reduces the
unemployment rate in a country. Another reason for my belief is that every
culture has its own special food and national delicacy. If a country  produces all
the food, they can increase the cultural value. This could lead to an increase in
the positive image of a nation in the eyes of international friends.
On the other hand, it is true that imported food offers consumers more choices.
Due to the act of importing food, people from different countries are able to
enjoy a wide range of food that may be non-existent in their home countries.
For example, it is effortless for Vietnamese people to savour foreign cuisine
such as sushi and sashimi from Japan or kimchi from South Korea, which enrich
people’s daily life. Another benefit from food 
  

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