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Shane Taylor - Argumentative Essay 75 Assessment Points
Shane Taylor - Argumentative Essay 75 Assessment Points
Mr.Niko
Senior Seminar
The surf wax that you choose to use while surfing can be a hard decision
waxes that you have to choose from at about every surf shop that you go to. So I got to
thinking to myself, is surf wax safe for our ocean? After a little bit of research I found out
that many of the top leading brands use harmful paraffin based waxes that are slowly
killing our oceans each stick of wax at a time! What is paraffin? Paraffin is a petroleum
byproduct which emits little amounts of dioxins which is a very toxic chemical. These
and living! Some ways that we can protect our oceans is by replacing toxic surf wax with
organic wax! There are many different types of ingredients that we can use to replace
the toxic ones with, such as beeswax, soy wax, etc. The organic wax that I am going to
be producing is going to be a blend of beeswax and soy wax with organic Plumeria sap
locally found on Maui. There are even ways that you can make the wax look more fun
by adding natural colors with materials commonly found at home such as black beans
(blue) red cabbage (purple) and avocado skins (pink). One other substitute for toxic wax
is by using traction pads on your surfboard. If you decide to use traction pads on your
board this will totally eliminate the need for wax and it will not cause any harm to the
ocean.
Almost all of the top leading surf waxes contain paraffin. This petroleum based
wax will eventually fall off of your surfboard and end up affecting our delicate ecosystem
and reefs. Paraffin wax is formed when crude oil is separated into its individual
components which starts to look like a grayish black sludge. That substance is then
bleached with 100% strength bleach to get its white color. That bleaching phase then
creates dioxins for example “when you use every day house bleach that is only 10%
bleach”. This means that these products that are used in top leading brand waxes are
horrible for our ocean ecosystems which are killing our delicate marine life and that is
also creating coral bleaching. Coral bleaching is a major issue that almost all of our
oceans are facing right now, with 50% of our coral reefs dead and our world is facing
big issues! If all of our reefs die there would be a domino effect that would harm almost
every ecosystem on the planet! So we need to stop polluting our oceans with chemically
filled waxes and use stuff that is organic and does not affect the ocean! There are even
many tutorials on how to make your own wax at home, so it can be cheaper than buying
As surfers we need to make every effort to lesson our negative impact on the ocean, not
only so we can surf in a happy healthy ocean but so the next generation can enjoy it
nicer than we did! By the research we have collected we can easily say that leading surf
wax is not safe for the ocean. We need to do everything we can to try to get these
companies to stop using harmful ingredients in their waxes, and start using all organic
materials. Materials such as Beeswax and soy wax, as well as non bleaching the wax.
That is why i am trying my hardest to get my community to stop using toxic wax and
start using clean swell surf wax made from all organic materials and local ingredients