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KMIS

by Fahriddin Yuldashov

Submission date: 02-Jan-2019 04:07PM (UT C+0000)


Submission ID: 97878495
File name: KMIS_1165573_1761720604.pdf
Word count: 4571
Character count: 28606
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Harvard Ref erencing
KMIS
ORIGINALITY REPORT

10 %
SIMILARIT Y INDEX
4%
INT ERNET SOURCES
2%
PUBLICAT IONS
10%
ST UDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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Submitted to BPP College of Professional
Studies Limited
9%
St udent Paper

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Submitted to University of Western Sydney
St udent Paper 1%

Exclude quotes Of f Exclude matches < 1%


Exclude bibliography On
KMIS
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Introduction: More coverage required on the scope
of the report. T he improvement could include
ref erences to specif ic details such as critical review
of AI based technologies and how companies can
address the challenges brought about by AI

/100
integration.

Strategic Importance of KM: A satisf actory


presentation overall. T here is a tendency to f ocus
on the tacit and explicit knowledge rather than
expanding this to achieving companies’ long-term
objectives.

Impact of AI based technologies: T here is a good


level of critical analysis provided. T his could be
f urther expanded to include more citations and
reviews f or improvement.

Address challenges f rom integrating AI: AI challenges


are discussed although how companies can address
them are lacking. Use of additional sources f ollowed
by a critical analysis would contribute to a higher
mark allocation.

Submission Structure: Structure is not in line with the


required report f ormat. Subtitles f ollowed by
numbered sections and subsections required. An
overall conclusion of the report could have been
included at the end of the report.

Ref erencing and Language: Some minor citation


errors are evident in citation and listing of sources in
the ref erence list section. Otherwise the context and
language is appropriate.

Presentation: Satisf actory coverage of the report.


Some spelling errors are visible on the presented
slides.

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Comment 1
T here are no requirements to state the questions.

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Comment 2
T ry to avoid the use of citation here.

Comment 3
more specif ic coverage needed.

Comment 4
grammar check

Comment 5
grammar check

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Comment 6
grammar check

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Comment 7
Are these adopted f rom other sources? If this is the case then those sources need to be cited.
Are these adopted f rom other sources? If this is the case then those sources need to be cited.

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Comment 8
More coverage on achieving long term objectives needed.

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Comment 9
peer reviewed material pref erred

Comment 10
source needed f or the points presented.

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Comment 11
published year to be presented in brackets.

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