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Kaden Dickinson
Mrs. Wines
Comp 1 / ENG124
19 October 2020
Have you ever known someone with mental illness? How were they affected by it? This
reader-response book, Challenger Deep, really shows the temporary and permanent effects
mental illness give. Challenger Deep by Neal Shusterman focuses on Caden Bosch and his path
through his mental illnesses. The illness that the novel shines most of its light on is
Schizophrenia, by showing two worlds - one that is real, and one created by the depths of his
imagination, but also the following fear that haunts him. This is portrayed throughout the entire
reading, slowly closing in on itself while reaching the end. This path starts with Caden having
fear of a boy at school, leading to more random and ominous ideas in his head. The novel then
makes its way towards the ship, which is the best example of him confusing the real world with
fantasy. The ship also lies in the book’s climax, with the recovery of the illness.
Schizophrenia is defined by the Mayo Clinic as “...a serious mental disorder in which
hallucinations, delusions, and extremely disordered thinking and behavior that impairs daily
functioning, and can be disabling.” This idea or definition flows through the book and even into
the acknowledgments. Caden’s first symptoms of Schizophrenia are shown when he tells his dad
that he believes a boy at his school wants to kill him, with no rhyme or reason at all. You can tell
the illness is developing because he is interpreting reality abnormally and has extremely
disordered thinking. This mindset affects his daily functioning by being paranoid, yet he is
worse thoughts in his head. The first one that is seen is his thought of China having an
earthquake directly adjacent to him on the other side of the world because he thinks that him
thinking and processing so much information that it will cause an earthquake. “Could my
thoughts be magnified in the heat and pressure of the earth and come out the other side as an
earthquake?” (Shusterman 25). He is most likely just exaggerating that he thinks a lot or even too
much, but it also seems like he believes in his fiction. “I check the news in secret terror to see if
there was an earthquake in China,” (Shusterman 25). The other small example of Schizophrenia
developing is Caden’s disconnection from the world or his life. He doesn’t feel like he isn’t
himself anymore, or like he isn’t a part of it; he loses the sense of being there by his brain
wandering off, and not like the normal daydream. “I sit with my friends for lunch. And yet I
don’t. That is to say, I’m among them, but I don’t feel with them,” (Shusterman 48). He is
noticing how he is drifting off from his friends, and he uses unnatural phrases to describe his
time with them. This doesn’t just occur with his friends, but with his teachers and family. “We’re
concerned, and (the school) just want(s) to help you, if you’ll let us,” (Shusterman 77). The final
small example of building Schizophrenia found is excessive anxiety, which is a side effect of
worried. Am I worried? That’s not quite what I’m feeling today - but lately my emotions are so
liquid, they flow into one another without my noticing,” (Shusterman 67). There are countless
examples of anxiety disorder in Challenger Deep, but this example shows that Caden cannot tell
what he is feeling or have control over his emotions, with worrying without having anything to
worry about.
‘Pirate’ Ship. The ship is Caden’s imagination that we see throughout the novel, showing how
scattered Caden’s brain is during this illness. The first recognition that he is on a ship starts by
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showing the ship as more of a dream place, or at least seeming like it is. There is no relative
connection in my eyes until he and his family go to Vegas, and Caden, with his family, jumps off
the 4 story tower onto a mattress (Shusterman 40). Right before this excerpt, people are jumping
off the Crow’s Nest on the ship (Shusterman 25). This is the first example we get from the ship
that this fantasy world correlates to the real world. Thus, this world begins to intertwine itself
with Caden’s life. “‘It’s a tough thing to do, even when the sea is calm,’ I point out,”
(Shusterman 226). During Caden’s families’ visit to the mental hospital where he is being kept,
he makes a reference to the sea and how he’s having a hard time living in the hospital. Of course,
that could’ve just been a thought from his dream that randomly recollected back into his
thoughts, but two pages later the reader sees that it’s not just a coincidence. “‘I’m on deck with
Carlyle. He hands me his mop, and lets me do some of his dirty work’….’Yep.’ He closes his
laptop to give me his full attention. There are others in the rec room with us, but they’re mostly
just watching TV,” (Shusterman 227-228). This quote, coming from the same chapter, is a new
style of writing Shusterman performs that we haven’t seen in this novel yet. The actual narrative
overlapping between both worlds gives both a better understanding of how Caden is feeling at
this time, but also an even better understanding of the correlation between the events he is
experiencing in real life and on the ship. Although these occurrences become more frequent the
farther in the book you go, the most significant example of Schizophrenia portrayed through the
ship is when he finally reaches Challenger Deep, the deepest part in the Marina Trench. The
Captain tells him that all the treasures he could ever imagine are down there and that if he made
it then he, as would the Captain, would have glory and riches (Shusterman 267). It just happens
that the Captain is portraying Caden’s mental illness the entire time, and he was the one to tell
Caden to go down to the bottom of the trench, portrayed in the real world as his suicide attempt.
There, and only there is where Caden finds the origin of his Schizophrenia, an old play-captain
that he met in New York (Shusterman 292). The play-captain then states “‘Subway’s bad this
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time of day,’ he says. ‘It’s forever down there, (Shusterman 294). Once he recalls this memory,
he realizes that this was the cause of his Schizophrenia, and now that he knows what caused this
details, comments to his family, anxiety, but most importantly his other world. In the end, it
comes together like a puzzle, with pieces of the upcoming events that are given to the reader as
hints of the climax. Once the fantasy and real-world start intertwining, the book gets very
explicit about how his actions in the mental hospital affect what happens to him on the ship,
while the friends he knows in the mental hospital are shown clearly on the ship as well. Looking
back at the definition of Schizophrenia mentioned in the second paragraph, Caden’s trip through
his illness strikes deep in most if not all details covered in the definition. Hallucinations and
delusions showed with the boy at school, feeling like he isn’t part of this world anymore, and
even the ship - the biggest detail of Schizophrenia - fits these terms. His daily functioning is
often disabled somewhat because of his medications, as he mentions he feels numb often
(Shusterman 195). Finally, his disordered thinking. His mindset while going through
Schizophrenia is flawed as it worsens the deeper in the book. Every example mentioned conveys
a disordered mindset, and by the end of the book, he has no recollection of what is real and what
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