Krypton Software

- Include Gantt chart and workload matrix

- Instead of writing Berjaya Fitness System everywhere, use “Proposed System” wherever
appropriate
- Every Figures must have a caption below it
- Figure and captions should be centrally aligned
- I think, it won’t be wise to specify each and every hardware configuration here. Better mention
minimum hardware requirements
- Page no. 9: replace Economical with Economic
- Economic Feasibility: Mention the costs in $ not in NRs
- It would be better to add benefits as well
- Context diagram – avoid using double headed arrows
- Each diagram needs brief explanation
- Interface Design
o Insert block diagrams or wireframe diagrams first (without background images)
o Then include the screenshot designs
- Individual component (incomplete)
- For individual components (8. Requirement gathering),
a. Discuss the benefits and setbacks of the method chosen
b. Explain the process of conducting the chosen method and then create a list of questions for
gathering the information
- For individual components (9. Design)
a. Create data dictionary for 2 components of DFD
b. Level 1 DFD of any one process in Level 0 DFD
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- Your vision is too long. Generally, I have seen a vision with a single sentence only.
- Goal missing
- Your business overview seems more like problem statement. Write about the tasks and
activities carried out to develop the proposed project and how it will be operated
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- Use same formatting everywhere (font size, line spacing etc.)
- Gantt chart – minimize it by combining similar steps
- Add inline citation wherever required
- Economic feasibility: should be for at least 4 years not months
- Also, mention the currency (RM or $ )
- Apply numbering (1, 1.1., 1.1.1 etc.)
- Manage gaps between paragraphs
- Context diagram and DFD, processes should be represented by round-edge rectangle
- ER diagram – cardinality is required
- Every diagram needs a caption below it.
- Page no. 18, what does concept mean?
- For individual components (8. Requirement gathering),
c. Discuss the benefits and setbacks of the method chosen
d. Explain the process of conducting the chosen method and then create a list of questions for
gathering the information
- For individual components (9. Design)
c. Create data dictionary for 2 components of DFD
d. Level 1 DFD of any one process in Level 0 DFD