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Judul artikel:

Risk factor differences of Nasal Septum Mladina Type III Classification with Maxialiaris
Rhinosinusitis and Ethomoidalis Rhinosinusitis occurences

Penulis dan tahun terbit:

Shelly Tjahayadewi1 , Muhammad Sukron2 , Siti Thomas Zulaikhah3*
05, May, 2020

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Pendahuluan Ada
The deviation of the nasal
septum is a deformed and
balanced anatomical form of
the septum in the middle
between bone and cartilage
growth [1]. A study conducted
in RSUP Dr. Wahidin
Sudirohusodo, amounting to
94% positive sample deviation
septum [2]. The deviation of the
septum often raises complaints
such as nasal obstruction, pain
in the head, the smell is
disturbed, and if it clogs a
heavy ostium sinus, the airflow
can be interrupted and at-risk
cause rhinosinusitis
1. Masalah Penelitian √ Paragraf 1 baris 3 Cukup
jelas
The deviation of the septum dalam
often raises complaints such as menyam
nasal obstruction, pain in the paikan
head, the smell is disturbed, subjek
and if it clogs a heavy ostium
sinus, the airflow can be
interrupted and at-risk cause
rhinosinusitis

2. Besar masalah √ Paragraf 1 baris ke 4 Cukup

jelas
“Rhinosinusitis has several dalam
symptoms including nasal menyam
congestion, congestion, nasal paikan
discharge, pain in the area subjek
around the face, and decreased
smell power”
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3. Urut-urutan atau √ Paragraph 1 Kalimat sudah

baris 9-14 cukup jelas
kronologi timbulnya untuk dipahami
masalah “Based on the
2012 data of the
European Position
Paper on
Rhinosinusitis and
Nasal Polyps
(EPOS), the
prevalence of
chronic
Rhinosinusitis was
10.9% [7]. In
America,
according to the
Centers for
Disease Control
and Prevention
(CDC) of 2009-
2012, there were
11.7 million visits
of chronic
rhinosinusitis
patients and 29.4
million patients
(12.3%) diagnosed
with rhinosinusitis
[8]. In addition, in
RS Dr. Kariadi
Semarang in 2006,
recorded 1,152
cases of
Rhinosinusitis,
336 noted as a
new case.”
4. Upaya penyelesaian √ Paragraph 1 Kalimat sudah
baris 24-28 cukup jelas
dengan penelitian yang untuk dipahami
masih harus
“The study
dibuktikan involved two
kebenarannya research students
who had
conducted
previous research
in September
2016-March 2017.
First, Muthia
conducted
research in 2017
with the title of
risk factor
 deviation of the
nasal septum type
III classification of
Mladina in the
incidence of
maxosinusitis and
second Defry
research in 2017
with the title of
risk factor
deviation septum
The nasal
classification of
Mladina type III
on the incidence
of Ethmoidalis
rhinosinusitis.”
5. Rumusan masalah X
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6. Tujuan Penelitian/ √ Paragraf Kalimat sudah

1(introduction) jelas untuk
review baris 29-30 dipahami

this research is
conducted with the
aim to determine
the risk factors of
nasal septum
classification of
Mladina type III in
the incidence of
Maxosinusitis and
Rhinosinusitis
Ethmoidalis.

7. Manfaat penelitian/ X
review

√ Paragraf 9 Mudah
dipahami dan
Pembahasan/Kesimpulan “The case of 24 mudah
nasal septum ditemukan
deviation (54.5%)
and the control of
nasal septum
deviation as much
as 20 patients
(45.5%) ...
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