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Name/Student Id : Tengku Mhd Hafidz El Passa/2010861013

Major : Communitacion

Course : English For Communication

Report the Video : Cellphone Addiction, Tanner Welton, TEDxLangley ED

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qBbEXJ-Uqi0&t=130s&ab_channel=TEDxTalks

1. Topic Identification
Why are people so addicted to cellphone
2. Purpose Statement
To inform all people about very dangerous if you play too much cellphone.
3. Main Points
Social media that makes people addiction to cellphones, example every time you post
a photo in 10 second you got 4 likes well those 4 likes maybe small but it effects in
your mind at 10 second of your happines send to your brain saying “i want more” so
you post another photo just to see how many likes you get and next you check every
five minutes to see someone liked your photo. And this carried in every day life, if
you go to restaurat you see and two people aren’t date, they don’t even look each
other they are to busy their devices like screenshooting dinner and send it to social
media. And its like live in virtual world.
4. Organization
I will use step by step organizational pattern to identify about callphone addiction.
This will be effective because in this video Tanner Welton tells about why are people
so addicted to cellphone that can reach the point.
Rubrics Percentage of Informative Speech Rahmat Suradi (2010861015)

Grading Criteria Percentage Percentage earned and Comments


Topic Identification 10% 10%
The topic Identification given
informative speech according with
his content.
Purpose Statement 20% 18%
The purpose statement which he
made up to tell the thing what was
going on.
Main Idea 40% 37%
The informative speech that is made
to report to the public is still lacking
so there is no background to the
incident, it just goes to the main
topic
Organization 30% 27%
In my opinion I don't think he
explained what method he was going
to convey

Rubrics Percentage of Informative Speech Nabila Ulfa Rifanto (1710862041)


Grading Criteria Percentage Percentage Earned and Comments
Topic Identification 10% 7%
The topic Identification given
informative speech with his content
Purpose Studen 20% 18%
The purpose statement which to tell
something about what his like.
Main Idea 40% 36%
The informative speech that made is
report to public with goes to main
idea.
Organization 30% 27%
In my opinion organizing with his
content she was going to convey

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