Complete the following template for an argumentative essay. Write in full sentences.

Topic: Elderly people should not care for their children. Agree or disagree?

INTRODUCTION Nowdays, we live in a society with an age population in the world. Like other
PARAGRAPH foreigners, children under sixty years old have more expectations for a
healthy life after retirement than children under sixteen years old.
Thesis statement: Hence i strongly believe that instead of ignoring their child
to make their children more strong in the future,parents must take care of
their children if they don’t want their children future even worse.

COUNTER Main idea:

OPPOSING In contrast to my stand,I think it’s a good idea because their child will be
PARAGRAPH more independent.Their children also will will find their own money if they
want to buy thing that they want too such as gaming console,pc or
handphone.It also make your children can survive when they older.

BODY Main idea:

PARAGRAPH 1
The opposite view is indeed reasonable, but the times have changed. Today's
world is so immoral and corrupt, from homes to schools to social networking
sites, the media and websites are full of malicious, violent and vulgar
remarks. Corruption destroys the minds of young people. If children are not
given proper parenting responsibilities and discipline in the early stages of
their growth, they can easily fall prey to these evils. Support details in 3
sentences.

BODY Main idea:

PARAGRAPH 2 In the articles published by the National Library of Medicine, parenting may
be the most important public health problem facing our society. It is the
biggest variable related to childhood diseases and accidents. Teenage
pregnancy and substance abuse; absenteeism, school chaos and poor grades;
child abuse; unemployed youth delinquency; and mental illness. These are
serious in themselves, but they are even more important as harbingers of
adult and next generation problems.
Support details in 3 sentences. The importance of parenting stems from its
role as a buffer against adversity (such as poverty or adverse effects) or
mediator of damage (such as child abuse).

BODY Main idea:

PARAGRAPH 3 The level of motivation to maintain this complex and difficult task is even
greater. Most parents take care of their children and sometimes encounter
great difficulties. However, the motivation to raise and protect children is not
innate to human beings, but is formed based on past experience and current
conditions. We know that factors such as severe poverty and maternal
depression severely distort or disrupt the parenting process. However, in this
case, the quality and skills of parents become more and more important,
 because even in adversity, parents can protect their children from abuse or
suffering from internal and external pressures in the family. There is a wide
and complex social organization to deal with the difficulties of children and
families. However, these problems seem to be becoming more and more
serious, because fundamentally no measures have been taken to change the
majority of disadvantaged people

CONCLUSION In conclusion,I would like to restate my stand that parents should take care
their parents for their children future. It because my first reason is world is so
immoral and corrupt, from homes to schools to social networking sites, the
media and websites are full of malicious, violent and vulgar remarks.
Secondly public health problem facing our society and lastly is the level of
motivation to maintain this complex and difficult task is even greater and
lasty .