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Highlight the differences between Coca-Cola and Pepsi

  Coke or Pepsi: Two soft drinks that have been constantly battling for decades, 1.
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competing for the prime spot as the world's most popular soda. Some people inappropriate for
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    I4 believe5 there is a major difference between Coke and Pepsi, and to me, it opinion.
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seems clear that Coke is much better5. Coke has obviously6 been around much 11. do
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Pepsi has not
off of Coke, a cheap attempt to replicate the original Coca- Cola drink7 . I reduced the
6. How
sugarand why is
or caloric
think that is a shameful and useless endeavor of the Pepsi company, as anyone itcontent
obvious? of their
beverages.
with common sense can see that Coke is the original model of the perfect soft 7. Dr. Pepper is
older than Coca-
drink8. Cola. By the
writer’s logic,
Coca-Cola is a
    Another advantage of Coke is that it has a vast variety of types, from diet copycat too.
coke to cherry coke9. The Coca- Cola Company has created over 500 brands, all 8. This is a
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of them differing greatly, and serving the taste of all different kinds of people. essay. Stop
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This, to me, makes Coke the company with variety and creativity and one that persuade the
reader.
can always surprise its consumers. Pepsi, on the other hand,  is a dull, bland

company that has never made anything unique and probably never will10.

    We all know that both Coke and Pepsi aren't exactly the healthiest beverages,

but did you know that a Pepsi- Cola has more grams of sugar AND caffeine than
a Coca- Cola5? If you were to drink a Pepsi, not only would you get a horrible5 taste, but you

would also get 3 more grams of sugar! While Coke is making a global effort to reduce the

number of calories and amount of sugar in their beverages, Pepsi seems to be content with its

many disadvantages11.

    The facts don't lie. With the competitions in inventions, variety, and sweetness, only one

comes out victorious in this long, drawn out comparison. As I have repeatedly stated through this

piece, it's obvious that Coke is the better soft drink, in the U.S and around the world. From Brazil

to China, Canada to Australia, people agree that Pepsi isn't worth their time. And so do I10!

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