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NAME : Farhan Ramzy S

Class : XI Science 2

DRAFT
1. Title : The importance of immunity during Covid-19 pandemic

2. Purpose : To remains the reader how importance to maintain immunity during pandemic

3. Main Ideas:
Paragraph 1 : Explain the importance of keeping our immunity to get protected from Covid-19
Paragraph 2 : The benefits if we maintain our immunity
Paragraph 3 : How to maintain our Immunity
Paragraph 4 : Another ways to get protected from Covid-19 is keep praying to god
Conclusion : Summary from paragraph 1-4

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The importance of immunity during Covid-19 pandemic

At the beginning of 2020, the world was shocked by a dangerous virus where this virus spreads
very quickly throughout the world. The name is the corona virus disease known as Covid-19.
This virus is transmitted between humans and humans and attacks the human respiratory
system. When referring to Covid-19, recently there are many topics discussing the importance
of maintaining our immunity during a pandemic like this. Of course, the role of this immunity is
very crucial and important in keeping our bodies protected from Covid-19.
You need to know, what is the benefits we get if we maintain immunity in this situation. Of
course, the main thing is that we will not be susceptible to viruses. From several research by
scientist, they say that Covid-19 only attacks people who have weak immune systems. Maybe
all of you already know that the functions of immunity that we have in our bodies is to prevent
the entry of diseases that will enter our bodies. So that we have to maintain our immunity
properly
Next, is how can we maintain our immunity properly. There are many ways we can do to
maintain our immunity. Starting from exercise reguraly, we don't have to do a hard exercise,
just do light exercise but effect to our body condition remains stable. Furthermore, we have to
fulfill the needs of our bodies with healthy foods, try to consume fruits and vegetables
routinly, because fruits and vegetables have many vitamins and other substances that can
keep our bodies healthy. And the most important thing is to manage our stress properly,
excessive stress can increase the risk of many diseases and of course the virus will easily enter
to our bodies.
Last but not least, we have to be sure that we can get through this pandemic together, besides
we have to keep trying, we must also keep praying to God and hope that this pandemic will
end soon, believe that we will breathe a fresh air again after all of this is over. Do various ways
to keep our bodies stay healthy and our immunity is maintained. And don't forget that we also
have to follow the health protocol that recommended by the government.
In conclusion, it is very important for us to maintain immunity in this situation, keep praying
and hope that this pandemic will end soon, I know it’s very hard for us, but we must be sure
that we can survive this pandemic in a safe condition. Then what are we waiting for? Let's fight
Covid-19 together.

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