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Response to Feedback
(Record brief notes indicating how
you would apply the feedback to
modify/adjust the audio lesson or
enhance the presentation)
Resource 2 – Video lesson
Curriculum Area, Year Level and English, sentence structures- complex sentences, year 5
Focus Content Descriptions
Brief outline of summative Students need to plan, draft and write a feature article with the
assessment task focus topic, Flying Foxes Friend or Foe? Sentence structure,
subjective and objective language and persuasive language play a
key role in this task, where the writers need to persuade readers to
believe a Point of View.
Specific feedback sought 1. Was the video resource engaging enough for students to
(Frame questions seeking specific engage with?
feedback on aspects such as the
relationship between the video
content and the intended learning 2. Were the activities in the video supportive of the resource?
and assessment/ the engagement
strategies/ the clarity of the
communication/ the teaching 3. Could the resource be easily incorporated into the designed
strategies/ the expectations for English unit to support student learning?
student understanding of the concept
or skill)
4. Was the information in the resource relevant to the topic/
concept being taught?
Response to Feedback
(Record brief notes indicating how
you would apply the feedback to
modify/adjust the video segment or
enhance the presentation)
Resource 3- PD Session Recording
Curriculum Area, Lesson Focus English, sentence structures- complex sentences, year 5
and Year Level
Learning Goals for the lesson Write sentences which include noun groups, that are
relative to the points of view that could be expressed about
flying foxes.
Be open to receiving and giving appropriate feedback to
your peers
Specific feedback sought 1. Do you think the PD session will be useful for teachers in
(Frame questions seeking specific understanding the concept?
feedback on an aspect of the lesson
or script that you found challenging
or you are unsure is suitable to 2. Do you have any feedback/ changes to give that would
support the learning of students enhance the presentation in regard to teaching English?
across the full range of abilities))
Response to Feedback
(Record brief notes indicating how
you would apply the feedback to
modify/adjust the audio lesson or
enhance the presentation)