ESSAY ORGANIZATION/PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE (Two groups of data/more

- Non-Comparable)

PARAGRAPH I: Introduction
➡ paraphrase of the topic sentence (both/all groups)

PARAGRAPH II: Overviews

➡ the most extreme data (the highest, the lowest) of each group
➡ overall trends of each group

PARAGRAPH III: Details 1 (group 1)

➡ data classification
➡ more specific trends
➡ comparison/ranking
➡ some numbers are presented

PARAGRAPH IV: Details 2 (group 2)

➡ data classification
➡ more specific trends
➡ comparison/ranking
➡ some numbers are presented
PARAGRAPH PLAN

1. Types of sentences - Line Graph: Active Sentence

Bar Chart: Active Sentence
2. Tenses - Line Graph: Past Tense
Bar Chart: Past Tense
3. Subjects of sentences - Line Graph: The Global Audience
Line Graph: The Audience by Region.
4. Overview:
✓ Line Graph:
➡ Overall the percentage of households tend to increase
✓ Line Graph:
➡ The number of hours of housework decrease
5. Details:
✓ D-1 (Line Graph)
➡ The percentage of households with washing machine increase toward
100% in 1980 and it growth steadily next year
➡ In 1920, Households used refrigerator growth up from 30% to 100% and
it growth steadily next year.
➡ Differently with other appliances, the percentage of households with
vacuum cleaner increase from 40 % to 70% in 1960, but these needs
decrease by around 65%. Moreover, over 3 years after 1980, the
percentage of households with vacuum cleaner increase approximately
75%
✓ D-2 (Line Graph)
 ➡ In 1920, there were 50 hours of housework per week per household.
These number decrease linearly over 3 years until 1960.
➡ In 1980 the number of hours of housework decrease to 15% and it
growth steadily in 2000

The charts give information about the needs of household for using electrical appliances
and the amount of time spent doing housework in one country over 100 years.

Overall, the percentage of households increased except one using electrical appliances