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01 Objectivity in Writing

The document discusses objectivity in writing and identifies personal, emotive, and judgmental language in a sample paragraph. It analyzes the paragraph and finds the following instances: (1) Personal language when it refers to "our Australian community" and "us". (2) Emotive language when discussing the "life-threatening issue" and "protection of health and well-being". (3) Judgemental language such as referring to children as "vulnerable creatures" and saying immunization policy is "obviously" responsible for their health. (4) Further emotive language calling children's healthcare a "total priority". (5) Judgemental language saying failure to promote immunization will lead

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01 Objectivity in Writing

The document discusses objectivity in writing and identifies personal, emotive, and judgmental language in a sample paragraph. It analyzes the paragraph and finds the following instances: (1) Personal language when it refers to "our Australian community" and "us". (2) Emotive language when discussing the "life-threatening issue" and "protection of health and well-being". (3) Judgemental language such as referring to children as "vulnerable creatures" and saying immunization policy is "obviously" responsible for their health. (4) Further emotive language calling children's healthcare a "total priority". (5) Judgemental language saying failure to promote immunization will lead

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01 Objectivity in Writing

Read and analyse the paragraph below. Then, identify any personal,
emotive, or judgemental language in the material.

Answers:
(Personal Language) Indeed, countless values are shared by our
Australian community and which are extremely relevant to the life-
threatening issue of compulsory childhood immunisation.
(Emotive Language) Of course, the protection of the health and well-being
of Australian kids must be a shared response.
(Judgemental Language) Obviously, they are such vulnerable creatures
who cannot protect themselves, and it is the full responsibility of the
Australian community to stop endangering their fragile lives.
(Emotive Language) Mandatory childhood immunisation policy is definitely
consistent with the view we share as Australians; that is, our children’s
healthcare is a total priority.
(Judgemental Language) Clearly, if childhood immunity is not vigorously
promoted across Australia, then all our children will contract ghastly
vaccine-preventable diseases leading to death!!
(Personal Language) So, enforcing childhood immunisation programs
TODAY is the only logical way for us to watch over the precious youth of
our nation.

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