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    The document discusses the debate around whether social networking sites have a negative impact on individuals and society. While some argue they can negatively impact health and reduce face-to-face social interaction, the author believes the benefits outweigh the costs. Specifically, social networks allow people to stay informed on current events through diverse pages and help strengthen relationships despite geographical distance by allowing easy communication like between parents and children living apart. Overall, the author contends that social networks can broaden horizons and maintain social ties if used properly, though they could potentially cause health and social isolation issues.

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    The document discusses the debate around whether social networking sites have a negative impact on individuals and society. While some argue they can negatively impact health and reduce face-to-face social interaction, the author believes the benefits outweigh the costs. Specifically, social networks allow people to stay informed on current events through diverse pages and help strengthen relationships despite geographical distance by allowing easy communication like between parents and children living apart. Overall, the author contends that social networks can broaden horizons and maintain social ties if used properly, though they could potentially cause health and social isolation issues.

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    Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on

    both individuals and society.


    To what extent do you agree or disagree?
    The 21st century has opened up dramatic changes in our temporary lifelives with the advent of social
    networking sites including such as Facebook. Although such innovations can wield have some adverse
    effects on both individuals and communitiesy, I would argue that the benefits they offer are
    undoubtedly more significant.

    To begin with, social networks are somehow detrimental to people and their society. One of the most
    remarkable limitations is that users who take advantage of electrical gadgets like computers or
    cellphones to surf Facebook in succession are easily vulnerable to the a deterioration in health status.
    This could can be exemplified by many cases of adolescents suffering from impaired vision due to the
    excessive exposure to the screen merely to text their friends or update their status online. On society a
    social level, such sites would accelerate a social isolation among people owing to the deficiency in of
    face-to-face communication. For example, it is no longer a popular habit for people to meet up with
    their friends or beloved relatives in public places like coffee shops to talk or discuss talk with each other
    but to stay connected through these online sites, which worsens weakens the relationships and bonds
    among between them.

    Despite some negative by-products of internet-based networks, I still believe that these virtual
    communities are, in all likelihood, beneficial to people in various aspectsoverall. One of them is that
    netizens are able to keep informed and updated about any prevailing news around them immediately
    while surfing Facebook. This is because there is a are a mixed diversity of pages specializing in a certain
    fields like music, economics or even politics, which allows them to not only keep abreast of current
    affairs but gain fascinating insights into various aspects without efforts. Another upside worth Comment [A1]: Way to vague – be more
    specific!
    mentioninged is that such sites could can significantly consolidate relationships which are hampered by
    geographical constraints thereby, shrinking the world. Thanks to these technological advancements,
    parents can converse and follow the life and daily activities of their children who are settling in other
    countries for studying or working. This can help secure strengthen their family’s bond.

    In conclusion, while online networking sites could cause to people health deteriorationhave health
    problems and become isolated social disconnect, I still contend that this is an optimum option for
    modern citizens to enrich their knowledgebroaden their horizons and maintain social relationships if
    they are utilized in a proper way. One more sentence…

    Why 2 main ideas per paragraph? It means that each one gets less support…

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