These days, nên bỏ tại ở dưới có nowadays rồi students should have a part-time

job or just focus on their learning is a hotly-debated topic that often divides
opinion. Nowadays, most of the students all over the world have their own part-
time job. --> Hook với background hổng liên quan ;-; From my point of view,
students should have a part-time job while they are studying because they can
not not only learn how to manage time effectively but also learn  appreciate
the value of money.
The first advantage is that students can learn how to organize and manage their
time properly. Because students are people who are going to school and have a
schedule to study. Therefore, they have to arrange their free time outside of
school to report their empty schedules to the store they work for.  không cần
viết thế lắm, bỏ hay không tùy chị ;((. Just like school, they must arrive at work
on time and not delay be on time, otherwise, their salary will be deducted. For
example, I personally have a part-time job at Circle-K at 7am. I had to arrive 7
o'clock earlier to change shifts, remove expired products and put new products
on the shelves. This part-time job helps me manage my time both at school and
at work, and I feel better no more delays and prolonging ngữ pháp không có
song song nhau my time. This part-time job helps me manage my time both
at school and at work and I feel better no more delays and prolonging my
time.- lặp lại câu trên à??
Moreover, the part-time job also helps students understand and learn the value
of money. When students go to school, they depend on their families and
always ask for money from them. their parents. They won't không có viết tắt!!
~.~ know how hard it is to make money until they work part-time. Students will
realize that it takes a lot time and efforts to make a living. This experience will
enrich them with confidence to face the vicissitudes of life. Schools increase
tuition every year, smart students but their families can't afford it --. sì mát
sì tiu đần là seo má ;-;?, so they have to work part-time hạn chế lặp từ  in
their spare time. For example, lỗi lặp từ  For instance, this  không nên ghi
this vì câu đằng trước không có nói là làm gì my part-time job helps me to
earn money to pay my tuition and accommodation  living expenses. Last but
not least, It helps me to make my family less difficult and I will be more
cautious when buying something rather than buying unnecessary things
randomly.
Some people say that students should not do part-time jobs. Instead, they should
spend their time on studying. However, students can get more practical
experiences for their future business. Working part-time seems –> is seemed to
be more helpful as it helps students learn more about responsibilities as well as
real business challenges, which reinforces what they are learning in school.
In conclusion, students when working part-time  lặp từ nhiều, thay bằng
Having part time jobs is a valuable experience, and students can gain a lot of
benefits for life. In my opinion, the decision whether a student should take up
?? không hiểu nghĩa lắm  take a part-time job or not is based on his or her
circumstances  khum hiểu lắm ạ ;(((  attitude that will bring in positive or
negative impacts on their future. impact on their future.