NAME: Princess Xyra T.

Mallari
SECTION: 11- HUMSS, St.Anthony De Padua
TITLE OF THE ACTIVITY: Sentence Outline

HAIR LOVE

I. INTRODUCTION
A. Hook
Seven-year-old Zuri attempts to style her thick, natural hair while watching an
instructional video narrated by her mother (Issa Rae). Her father, Stephen, attempts
to help her and, after much effort, styles her hair. As shown in the credits, the
mother's hair starts growing back over time

B. Background Information

1. He campaign surpassed its initial goal of 75,000 and raised over 300,000.
According to kickstarter, that exceeds the amount raised by any other short film
project on the platform.
2. “Hair Love” is a sweet and joyful story about an African-American father learning
to style his daughter’s natural hair in his wife’s absence.

3. The film uses words sparingly; the characters’ gestures and expressions take viewers
through the father’s commonplace but poignant endeavor

C. Thesis Statement (Your thesis statement should follow the format given in
Module 1)

Hair Love, in essence, is about loving your hair and yourself. The story also contains a
message about love and labor between a family, as the father works hard to do his
daughter's hair. “Hair Love” is a sweet and joyful story about an African-American father
learning to style his daughter’s natural hair in his wife’s absence. The film uses words
sparingly; the characters’ gestures and expressions take viewers through the father’s
commonplace but poignant endeavor.

II. BODY

A. Main Point 1: Hair Love, in essence, is about loving your hair and yourself. The story also contains a
message about love and labor between a family, as the father works hard to do his daughter's hair.

1. Supporting Detail 1: Hair love is beautiful and fefreshing story that touches on topics around family,
self esteem, pride, style, identity and culture.

Supporting Detail 2: A man tries to do his daughter’s hair for the first time.
 1. Main Point 2: The story of a man who must do his daughter's hair for the first
time, and it features Issa Rae as a voice of the mother
2. Supporting Detail 1: Hair Love is a 2019 American animated short film directed
by Matthew A. Cherry, Everett Downing Jr., and Bruce W. Smith, and written by
Cherry.
2. Supporting Detail 2: The Hair Love short film hit theaters August 14th in front of
Angry Birds 2 and won the 2020 Academy Award for Best Animated Short Film.

1. Main Point 3: : This story was born out of seeing a lack of representation in
mainstream animated projects, and also wanting to promote hair love amongst
young men and women of color. It is our hope that this project will inspireHair
Love is a 2019 American animated short film directed by Matthew A. Cherry,
Everett Downing Jr., and Bruce W. Smith, and written by Cherry

1. Supporting Detail 1: Hair Love, a sweetly poignant film about an African-American father’s efforts to
style his daughter Zuri’s curls, became the latest in a handful of productions to take a deeper look at the
cultural significance of afro hair. 

2. Supporting Detail 2: : Hair’s Love multitude of timely, relatable themes are what made people
connect so strongly, he adds. “Depending on people’s background they can pull out different aspects of
it.

CONCLUSION
A. Restatement of the Thesis Statement (paraphrase your original thesis
statement)

Hair Love, in essence, is about loving your hair and yourself. The story also contains a
message about love and labor between a family, as the father works hard to do his
daughter's hair. “Hair Love” is a sweet and joyful story about an African-American
father learning to style his daughter’s natural hair in his wife’s absence. The film uses
words sparingly; the characters’ gestures and expressions take viewers through the
father’s commonplace but poignant endeavor.

B. Lesson to be Remembered

Hair Love is a beautiful and refreshing story that touches on topics around family, self
esteem, pride, style, identity and culture. the film range from loving your hair to the
power of persistence and, ultimately, family love.
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Criteria 4 3 2 Score
Content (x2)
The outline clearly states the
thesis statement, main points, and
supports it with evidences.
Organization
Two or
All the information on the outline All
One more
is all connected with one another. indicators
indicator is indicators
Also, ideas flow effectively. are
missing. are
Grammar and Mechanics present.
missing.
There are no lapses or mistakes
in grammar.
Completeness
The format is complete with the
information being asked.
Total Score (HPS: 20 pts.)