Name : M.

Rifqy Fakhroni
Nim : E1D020134
Class : 2E

Midterm Test answer

1. There are one introductory paragraph, the paragraph is the first paragraph. Why i
called the first paragraph is the introductory? Because that paragraph is describe about
the main topic of the essay it is about Malaria.
2. The thesis statement is in the last sentence of the first paragraph : (While there have
been many programs designed to improve access to malaria treatment, the best way to
reduce the impact of malaria in Sub-Saharan Africa is to focus on reducing the
number of people who contract the disease in the first place, rather than waiting to
treat the disease after the person is already infected.)
3. • A major program to combat malaria was WHO’s Global Malaria Eradication
Programme.
• Instead of developing plans to treat malaria after the infection has incurred,
programs should focus on preventing infection from occurring in the first place.
• One of the cheapest and most effective ways of preventing malaria is to implement
insecticide-treated bed nets (ITNs).
4. The concluding paragraph is quite long and maybe some information should be added
to develop control ideas on the topic so that readers can more easily understand the
contents of all paragraphs.