Pontificia Universidad Católica

Nara Cevallos, Pablo Jácome

English Course B1.1.
Quito, 10 de julio del 2021

Writing 1D: an e-mail

a) Write an email
Nara Cevallos’s email:

Hi grandmother!

I hope you are good

I need to tell you many things to my life is in constant change. First, I moved
the house, now I live in a big house. Then, I finished my second semester at the
university, I am excited about that. Now, I am learning English, I stay in level B1.1
and that is cool. Another important thing is I have a new job, I am a cashier in a
bank. I have new friends and I know many people, sometimes the people are rare
and serious, and I do not like that, but usually, they are friendly and warm. Right
now, I am listening to the song that you taught me, the song's name is "Hey Jude”.
This is my life now, please tell me about your life and do not forget that I miss you.

whit love

Nara

Pablo Jacome’s email:

Saturday, July 10th, 2021

Dear Friedrich.

Hi, my old friend, how are you? I was thinking about you, so tell me how you
feel. I know you are living stormy times and all I want is help you; I cannot visit you
now, and you don’t know my impetuous desire to go to the Italy’s coast to hug you,
then I beg you: do your catharsis telling me everything.
On the other hand, tell me about what is new for you. What have you
learning on these recent days in that beautiful country?
Finally, tell me what you have done on these days, besides read and walk.
Hope you get well soon.

Regards.

Your friend, Pablo.

b) Rectification:
 Nara´s email:
Hi grandmother!

I hope you are good

I need to tell you many things because my life is in constant change. First, I
moved the house, now I live in a big house. Then, I finished my second semester at
the university, I am excited about that. Now, I am learning English, I stay in level
B1.1 and that is cool. Another important thing is I have a new job, I am a cashier in
a bank. I have new friends and I know many people, sometimes the people are rare
and serious, and I do not like that, but usually, they are friendly and warm. Right
now, I am listening to the song that you taught me, the song's name is "Hey Jude”.
This is my life now, please tell me about your life and do not forget that I miss you.
G: 1

whit love

Nara

Pablo´s email:
Saturday, July 10th, 2021

Dear Friedrich.

Hi, my old friend, how are you? I was thinking about you, so tell me how you
feel. I know you are living stormy times and all I want is help you; I cannot visit you
now, and you don’t know my impetuous desire to go to the Italy’s coast to hug you,
then I beg you: do your catharsis telling me everything. (G 1)

On the other hand, tell me about what is new for you. What have you
learning on these recent days in that beautiful country? (G 2)

Finally, tell me what you have done on these days, besides read and walk. (G
3)

Hope you get well soon.

Regards.

Your friend, Pablo.

G1: it is not " I want is help you". It is "I want is to help you".

Then It is not "go to the Italy’s coast". It is " go to Italy's coast"

G2: It is not "What have you learning on these". It is "What have you learned
in"
 G3: It is not "tell me what you have done on these days, besides read and
walk". It is "tell me what you have done these days, besides reading and walk"

c)
Nara´s email:
Hi grandmother!

I hope you are good

I need to tell you many things because my life is in constant change. First, I
moved the house, now I live in a big house. Then, I finished my second semester at
the university, I am excited about that. Now, I am learning English, I stay in level
B1.1 and that is cool. Another important thing is I have a new job, I am a cashier in
a bank. I have new friends and I know many people, sometimes the people are rare
and serious, and I do not like that, but usually, they are friendly and warm. Right
now, I am listening to the song that you taught me, the song's name is "Hey Jude”.
This is my life now, please tell me about your life and do not forget that I miss you.
G: 1

whit love

Nara

Pablo´s email:
Saturday, July 10th, 2021

Dear Friedrich.

Hi, my old friend, how are you? I was thinking about you, so tell me how you
feel. I know you are living stormy times and all I want is to help you; I cannot visit
you now, and you don’t know my impetuous desire to go to Italy’s coast to hug you,
then I beg you: do your catharsis telling me everything.

On the other hand, tell me about what is new for you. What have you
learned in these recent days in that beautiful country?

Finally, tell me what you have done these days, besides reading and walk.

Hope you get well soon.

Regards.

Your friend, Pablo.