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School of Languages & English
Advanced: Reading & Writing
Nguyen Hue walking street is the most famous public place in Ho Chi Minh city
where many people come to enjoy the beautiful sight of the city in the main center.
tourists when they visit Ho Chi Minh city for the first time. However, many
problems cause controversies, such as traffic jams, air, and noise pollution. This
essay will outline Nguyen Hue walking street and recommend the solutions to
Nguyen Hue walking street is located in the heart of Sai Gon is surrounded by
modern shopping malls with stylish designs of well-known brands, fancy bars,
luxurious restaurants, magnificent hotels along the road. Furthermore, The Rex
Hotel brings historic architectural locations to life. Families can learn about the
history of the French colony. The creative performances to serve the visitors, such
The walking street has problems with traffic jams, air pollution, and noise
pollution. Solve issues are needed to preserve the environment, quality, and noise
School of Languages & English
Advanced: Reading & Writing
daily days for people are working in the near buildings or the visitors come to play
in the main square that leads to traffic congestion. The amount of waste is
increasing due to street vendors and other people don't have good responsibility to
put the trash into the green recycle bin. Furthermore, there are a few recycle bins
and laborers to clean the street. Many different third places, such as bars,
restaurants open loud music speakers have the attention of travelers that leads to
noise pollution.
The first solution to deal with traffic congestion is to open the parking stations and
more parking spaces in the buildings next to the main square in the walking street.
It will reduce the number of vehicle transportations in the daily days. The second
solution provides cleaning services so there will be more laborers to clean the
street. Watering and planting trees are needed to care by the cleaning service in
the middle square. In addition, the local police at district one will patrol every
afternoon and night. The street vendors and visitors have to be ensured that they
don't put trash underground anymore. The third solution for noise pollution is to
make rules, and monetary fines are needed to stop noise pollution in the third
In conclusion, Nguyen Hue walking street is the destination for Vietnamese people
and tourists to visit the attractions view the sight of Ho Chi Minh city with complex
modern and historic architecture buildings. Three solutions are building parking
spaces to prevent traffic jams, provides cleaning services to clean the street and
the policeman patrol at night to protect the environment and monetary fine for third
School of Languages & English
Advanced: Reading & Writing
places make noise pollution. These recommendations are vital factors to solve the
problems.
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