WRITING PRACTICE HOUR 1 – OUTLINE DRAFT

Names: Date: 22/10/2020

-Cortez Espinoza Luis David
-Ruiz Salazar David Sebastian
-Yagual Del Valle Odalys Alexandra
English III - Class # 107 Teacher: Laura Mariscal
Topic:
A Composition Outline Draft

STEP 1 : READ YOUR TOPIC CAREFULLY

TOPIC: MY FAVORITE RESTAURANT

STEP 2: PLANNING & ORGANIZING

2.1 Brainstorm ideas about the topic. (15 ideas)

1.- Atmosphere
2.- Music
3.- Food
4.-Location
5.- Cost
6.- waiter
7.- bathrooms
8.- customer support
9.-Seasoning
10.- Menu
11.- Quality
12.- Way to pay
13.- Business hours
14.- The building
15.- Delivery
 2.2 Select 3 ideas you want to use in your composition and omit those you don’t want to use.
Those which are not relevant.

1.- Atmosphere
2.- Music
3.- Food
4.-Location
5.- Cost
6.- waiter
7.- bathrooms
8.- customer support
9.-Seasoning
10.- Menu
11.- Quality
12.- Way to pay
13.- Business hours
14.- The building
15.- Delivery
2.3 Organize the ideas into 3 main groups (reasons). The last idea is the most important.

Chili´s

Atmosphere Delivery Food

2.4 Write 2 or 3 ideas
for each group (details and examples).

Chili´s

Atmosphere Delivery Food

.Original
.Cozy .Fast
recipes
.Service .Warm food
.Variety
.Attractive .Good food
decoration conditions
.Delicious
 STEP 3. WRITING THE FIRST DRAFT
3.1 Write a title for your work.
Chili’s, our favorite restaurant in Guayaquil
3.2 Write the main idea.
There are three reasons why Chili’s is our favorite grill restaurant in Guayaquil

3.2 Write the supporting reasons and details

Supporting reason 1: The inside atmosphere is pleasant place and cozy.

Detail 1: Their waiters are kind people.

Detail 2: Also, the place is cozy, each table is separate for better privacy.

Detail 3: The variety of colours with Mexican style in the decoration is attractive to people.

Supporting reason 2: Chili's home delivery service is reliable and easy to order.

Detail1: The delivery is fast because chili peppers have a lot of delivery men.

Detail2: The delivery men transport the food as soon as the order is ready.

Detail3: The Delivery men brings the food in good condition, because is protected in boxes.

Supporting reason 3: Chili’s prepares very delicious grilled dishes.

Detail 1: They have their own recipe for BBQ sauce that makes its flavor unique.

Detail 2: They have special cuts of meat and a variety of Mexican food.

Detail 3: The food is prepared with few condiments so that it has a natural flavor.

3.4 Write the conclusion.

In conclusion, Chilis is our favorite restaurant because it has efficient delivery service, attractive establishment and
unique cooking methods.
TITLE: Chili’s, our favorite restaurant in Guayaquil
Introduction sentence: There are three reasons why Chili’s is our favorite grill restaurant in Guayaquil.

Supporting sentence (reason) 1: First, the inside atmosphere is pleasant place and cozy.
Detail 1: Because their waiters are kind people.

Detail 2: Also, the place is cozy, each table is separate for better privacy.
Detail 3: And, the variety of colours with Mexican style in the decoration is attractive to people.

Detail 4:
Supporting sentence (reason) 2: Second, Chili's home delivery service is reliable and easy to order.

Detail 1: The delivery is fast because chili peppers have a lot of delivery men.
Detail 2: Moreover, the delivery men transport the food as soon as the order is ready.

Detail 3: The Delivery men brings the food in good condition, because is protected in boxes.
Detail 4:

Supporting sentence (reason) 3: The most important reason is that Chili’s prepares very delicious grilled dishes.
Detail 1: They have their own recipe for BBQ sauce that makes its flavor unique.

Detail 2: They have special cuts of meat and a variety of Mexican food.
Detail 3: In addition, the food is prepared with few condiments so that it has a natural flavor.

Detail 4:

Conclusion sentence: In conclusion, Chilis is our favorite restaurant because it has efficient delivery service,
attractive establishment and unique cooking methods.

STEP 4. REVISING
 4.1 Revise your draft on your own and make any corrections.

Organization & Development  Word choice / Grammar use  Mechanics / length  

Exemplary organization and development  Exemplary Word Choice / Grammar usage  Exemplary Mechanics 
 Clearly stated title   (VOC) precise and relevant word  May have minor errors 
 Brainstorming min.15 ideas  choice  o Indent  
 Clearly stated topic sentence (1)   (VOC) use of connectors and o Punctuation  
 Strong supporting ideas (3) and transition words   o Capitalization  
concluding sentence (1)   Consistent grammar usage  o Spelling 
 Third supporting idea or reason is o Subject/verb agreement  o Clear handwriting 
the most important  o Singular/plural nouns  o Spacing   
 Well executed progression of clear o Verb (tense and usage)   Needs little or no editing 
ideas  o Pronouns usage   150-180 words  
o Adjective / Adverb 

Excellent (4.00)    Excellent (4.00)    Excellent (2.00)   

Very Good (3.00)  Grade:  Very Good (3.00)  Grade:  Very Good (1.50)  Grade: 
Fair (2.00)   ________  Fair (2.00)   ________  Fair (1.00)   _______ 
Needs improvement (1.0)  Needs improvement (1.00)  Needs improvement
Non-Existent (0)  Non-Existent (0)  (0.50) 
Non-Existent (0) 

If you do not write about the given topic you will get a zero.

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