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CREATIVE LITERARY WRITING

NAME: WISNU SANJAYA


NIM:E1D019214
CLASS: 5TP3
the curse of the gold rose
Once upon a time, in a village called "Suma" village, a village located beside a mountain
and surrounded by a forest is a village that is said to have a magical story. This village is the
legacy of a beautiful, strong and magical queen who is feared throughout the country. He is very
cruel and likes to kill and enslave people. but suddenly it disappeared, everyone did not know
where the queen had disappeared, she was lost for more than 200 years the people were happy
and felt they were not enslaved anymore.
In this suma village there lived a man, his name is caka. His name is taken from the word
“cempaka”. he is a 21 year old man, has a good physical appearance, he also has a handsome
face and a little mole under his eyes. Caka is a very nice person in the village. He Always Help
Everyone and Very Friendly. Caka lives alone in the old hut of his pet dog, which he names Jiva.
Many residents told Caka to move to a better and more suitable place to live in. But jaka always
refuses because he doesn't want to leave his parents' inheritance. His parents were declared
missing in the forest when he was 5 years old. His mother's name is Aning and his father's name
is Suryo. Now Caka lives by selling charcoal and other produce.. His parents only have a
necklace with rose petals wrapped around it, even though he never breaks his heart and believes
that his parents are still alive. Caka is also quite famous among the villagers and outside the
village because of his very strong sense of smell. Caka once won a “saimabara” to find the
missing princess. That's why people gave him the nickname Caka the Snake. Snakes are one of
the animals that have a sharp sense of smell. He is also very good at the martial art of pencak
silat. Caka once invited a group of bandits who wanted to destroy his village.
One day when he was looking for honey to sell, he smelled a very strong smell. the more
he inhaled the smell the more his heart beat. a very familiar smell, a very fragrant but gripping
smell, a smell that can be controlled and controlled . he finally rushed to the source of the smell.
He finally stopped at a large tree the source of all the smell. During his life, Caka had never
found a tree that big, so he was so amazed that Jaka went around the tree and touched it.
Suddenly the tree moved its top and made an arch that resembled a cave, suddenly Caka was
surprised and fell down seeing all that, while Jiva just ran around Caka. The cave looks very
scary because it is very dark and silent. But Caka was curious about what the secret was in the
cave. Finally without thinking he went straight into the cave.
Inside the cave the air was very cold and there was no light at all. There are many strange things
that Caka goes through, such as the sound of children playing around him, the sound of residents
chatting coolly, and many more but Caka can get through it with his sense of smell. after half
way he saw a light, very bright and yellow. The light was like a reflection of a very large gold,
He immediately approached and he was very surprised to see a very fragrant and sparkling
golden rose. Caka wasn't even sure that it was a flower, because it looked more like jewelry
made by jewelry craftsman. Immediately the awar rose to the top and spread the powder. The
smell was so strong that Caka couldn't control himself and he finally passed out.
Caka wakes up in another dimension that he doesn't know about. It was like a big room that was
only white, he tried to walk around looking for a way out. But what he felt was that the room had
no end and no end. Finally, Caka decided to remain silent and pray. not long after that something
came from below, like golden rebate roots and two people. he was surprised that it was his
parents tied with rose gold, they were helpless, as if the energy was being absorbed by the vines.
he rushed to free them from the flowers, but there was a loud crash from the side. someone
kicked him so he bounced away. someone in a gold kebaya complete with batik wrapped around
his waist and hair flowing down while carrying gold roses. the nyai maya batara laughed while
looking at caka "welcome my son, you look more handsome" caka was surprised by the nyai
maya batara's words and said "what do you mean?" "Your surprised expression is very sweet"
Caka was still confused with the words. "What does all this mean? Who are you? Where is this?
What are you doing with my parents?” said Caka, pointing at the nyai maya batara. The nyai
maya batara also moved very fast until Jaka didn't see her already in front of her face "I am your
mother, I created you to destroy humans and I am named Nyai maya batara" the nyai maya
batara said loudly while strangling Caka's neck. Caka who can only be in pain can't fight back,
"But they were the two who stole you from me, dirty humans who don't know themselves." Caka
slowly took the sword that was on his waist and slashed at the nyai maya batara's hand. Caka felt
pain, he could not believe that a beautiful nyai maya batara could have such power. He was
running while asking "why don't you do it yourself? You're strong, why did you even create
me?", the nyai maya batara immediately grew her slashed hand while saying "I'm a metaphysical
creature that can't be connected or can't come into direct contact with humans, because I've been
sealed by humans when I want to do something. 200 years of extermination. They locked me into
a golden rose, and you were half of my energy that I created so I could instantly use your body to
kill all humans.”
Caka immediately stopped, mixed feelings because of the truth that the nyai maya batara said.
Nyai maya batara immediately attacked quickly at the silent Caka, the Caka who didn't have
time to see was hit in the stomach and bounced far away. Caka got up and ran again while
holding his sword. The nyai maya batara took out a root in her hand, the akra had sharp and large
thorns. Even though he was still in pain, Caka was able to dodge and cut all the roots and rushed
to save his parents. Seeing this reaction, the nyai maya batara took out a large sword from the
handle to slash the caka. Caka, who only focused on his parents, couldn't see the movement of
the nyai maya batara. The nyai maya batara approached and was about to draw her sword at the
caka who was running suddenly bounced far away. The nyai maya batara didn't see the attack, it
turned out to be Caka's pet Jiva who turned into a big and terrible dog with fangs. Caka freed his
parents and hugged them tightly. Finally they realized and said "Caka my son, I miss you", "I am
also a mother and father, but before that I have to beat that nyai maya batara" Caka Sambal
pointed at the nyai maya batara who was fighting with Jiva. "He is the one who captured us here,
we saved you from him when I found you in the forest with your necklace" Caka's father pointed
at the necklace "You have to use the rose to kill him right in the heart" Caka got up and pulled
the necklace and rubbed the rose against his head. his sword. The sword turned red like a very
hot fire. Caka ran while whistling to call Jiva. Jiva who heard immediately turned around and
approached his master. Cakapun immediately rose to the soul while lifting his sword "let's end!!!
Mother”, “You child does not know yourself, just be careful” shouted the nyai maya batara while
raising her sword. The fight has started
caka continued to attack the nyai maya batara with his combination technique with the jiva, the
nyai maya batara had also taken root again and continued to attack with all her might. But Caka's
determination is unanimous and the sword he was holding was already very hot. He also tried to
stab into the ground while cutting the roots that attacked him. The nyai maya batara started to get
scared because she couldn't regenerate anymore, finally only one root remained, Caka jumped
and tried to stab the nyai maya batara's heart. It is better for the nyai maya batara to strike back
by directing the roots to the caka's body. There was a loud bang that caused the soul to be blown
away, when they looked they were already stabbed, the caka was pierced by the root while the
nyai maya batara was with her sword.
The nyai maya batara immediately screamed and disappeared like blown ash. They also return to
the human dimension. Caka, who had lost blood, was immediately rescued by his parents. Caka
was not helped because the wound was very big Caka said "please take care of your soul, you are
still my parents" finally Caka died with a smile.

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