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Writing process writing

Step1. Organize.

Marriage

CAREERS Harmonious
marriage and for
Numerous boring a lifetime.
careers and long
working hours.

My life in 2075

Family
House
Countless numbers
Live in polarized
of children, and
capsules floating
awesome.
in the air like
experiences.
black clouds.
STEP2. List the details in order
Careers
-Have numerous careers
-Long working hours
-Becoming boring
- digital shopping only with robots

Relationships/ Marriage
-Many beautiful relationships
- Harmonious marriage and for a lifetime.
- Have much more time to spend with your marriage husband and family
-
House
- Smart houses
- kitchen robots that read recipes
- An eye, voice or fingerprint reader that replaced the keys to access the home.

Family
-Numerous children in family
- Generation after generation will meet
-the woman's fertility period would be very long
STEP3. DO AN OUTLINE
Paragraph I
Today everything changed. I woke up in an incredible life and still sleepy I see my
alarm robot that insists on waking me so vigorously and persistently. Now I have a
multifaceted robot at home that does chores such as wakes me up in the morning, it
is also incredibly intelligent that it prepares food day and night all week, but I feel
that it prepares food without flavor, I can't smell anything exquisite because is a
pleasant meal but loveless. Every day I hear police sheets flying in the air guarding the
city streets with last generation mini digital 5D cameras, Now the streets are
extremely safe although those flying sheets make noises as if my ears are splitting in
half. It is during these times that I fondly remember the simple days of decades ago
when I prepared my own food and lived on Earth, not floating on it like a lonely
bubble. In the last decades I have had smart houses, numerous relationships,
numerous careers, countless children and awesome experiences. Now my life is an
endless racetrack fille full with immeasurable happiness and memories.

Paragraph II
Now my life is so longer when I drive to my work with my smart skateboard to
another state because I have different types of jobs to be able to solve all my
expenses. And on the way of the trip, I think it is very evident that the world has
changed and we can see in these times things have evolved in a very radically way.
The trees seem touchable, offering soft, plush leaves that sway in the breeze and pink
the face like fine wool. Arriving at the workplace I have long hours of work that over
time make me a bored and stressed person but on the other hand we have different
advanced and technological materials that make the work faster and easier but the
fact of staying sitting or standing Concentrating makes us feel very worrisome. For
instance; in the mornings I am in charge of supervising the purchases that customers
make from their cell phones, I am in charge of transferring the purchase with smart
carts to their doorsteps, then in the afternoons I continue studying my career as a
digital consultant helping in support of the machines that are transported in robot
form to the stores.
Paragraph III
Although the houses have been built very advanced here because they have many
benefits, through them you can do many extraordinary things. For example, the
houses have kitchen robots to learn and read recipes, it is magnificent to cook like
that, they have giant transparent tinted windows that inside you can see everything
outside in a clear capacity like watching a 5D movie I can also say that its security is
very high since it has an eye, voice or fingerprint reader that replaces the normal keys
to access the front door. Now here they have a high technology and absolutely
everything is advanced.

Paragraph IV
There are many advantages to live so long, the family is very sacred because having
people who support you in delicate moments and in making decisions are valuable.
People change and get stress after having a very extensive family, having lots of
children is difficult and knowing that we are going to continue proceeding because
life continues brings us a lot of mortification as a human being, especially for longer
women a fertile period and it will be longer. Although thanks to advanced technology,
women no longer suffer because there are many methods to take care of themselves
there are methods in the forms of chips introduced in any part of their little
particulars. There is no pain. In these moments I feel melancholic there is a
remember when life was different decades ago people complete a century of life and
other generations were born to evolve them.

Conclusion
Finally, my life now has wonderful moments after all, despite of the advancement of
time and advances in technology have made relationships last for decades and meet
our children and to all our generations, knowing stuff advances of the technology,
having numerous jobs and so you can spend all your time with the people you love.
Although the world has changed, I can open the windows and press a button and a
rainbow of colors and smells is revealed that represents how advanced life is and
when the technology has changed and developed that just by pressing a button you
can generate such beauty and remember the past like an immeasurably memory.
STEP 4: FINAL FIRST DRAFT
Today everything changed. I woke up in an incredible life and still sleepy I see my
alarm robot that insists on waking me so vigorously and persistently. Now I have a
multifaceted robot at home that does chores such as wakes me up in the morning, it
is also incredibly intelligent that it prepares food day and night all week, but I feel
that it prepares food without flavor, I can't smell anything exquisite because is a
pleasant meal but loveless. Every day I hear police sheets flying in the air guarding the
city streets with last generation mini digital 5D cameras, Now the streets are
extremely safe although those flying sheets make noises as if my ears are splitting in
half. It is during these times that I fondly remember the simple days of decades ago
when I prepared my own food and lived on Earth, not floating on it like a lonely
bubble. In the last decades I have had smart houses, numerous relationships,
numerous careers, countless children and awesome experiences. Now my life is an
endless racetrack fille full with immeasurable happiness and memories.
Now my life is so longer when I drive to my work with my smart skateboard to
another state because I have different types of jobs to be able to solve all my
expenses. And on the way of the trip, I think it is very evident that the world has
changed and we can see in these times things have evolved in a very radically way.
The trees seem touchable, offering soft, plush leaves that sway in the breeze and pink
the face like fine wool. Arriving at the workplace I have long hours of work that over
time make me a bored and stressed person but on the other hand we have different
advanced and technological materials that make the work faster and easier but the
fact of staying sitting or standing Concentrating makes us feel very worrisome. For
instance; in the mornings I am in charge of supervising the purchases that customers
make from their cell phones, I am in charge of transferring the purchase with smart
carts to their doorsteps, then in the afternoons I continue studying my career as a
digital consultant helping in support of the machines that are transported in robot
form to the stores.
Although the houses have been built very advanced here because they have many
benefits, through them you can do many extraordinary things. For example, the
houses have kitchen robots to learn and read recipes, it is magnificent to cook like
that, they have giant transparent tinted windows that inside you can see everything
outside in a clear capacity like watching a 5D movie I can also say that its security is
very high since it has an eye, voice or fingerprint reader that replaces the normal keys
to access the front door. Now here they have a high technology and absolutely
everything is advanced.
There are many advantages to live so long, the family is very sacred because having
people who support you in delicate moments and in making decisions are valuable.
People change and get stress after having a very extensive family, having lots of
children is difficult and knowing that we are going to continue proceeding because
life continues brings us a lot of mortification as a human being, especially for longer
women a fertile period and it will be longer. Although thanks to advanced technology,
women no longer suffer because there are many methods to take care of themselves
there are methods in the forms of chips introduced in any part of their little
particulars. There is no pain. In these moments I feel melancholic there is a
remember when life was different decades ago people complete a century of life and
other generations were born to evolve them.
Finally, my life now has wonderful moments after all, despite of the advancement of
time and advances in technology have made relationships last for decades and meet
our children and to all our generations, knowing stuff advances of the technology,
having numerous jobs and so you can spend all your time with the people you love.
Although the world has changed, I can open the windows and press a button and a
rainbow of colors and smells is revealed that represents how advanced life is and
when the technology has changed and developed that just by pressing a button you
can generate such beauty and remember the past like an immeasurably memory.

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