Paragraph Writing 1 by Nut

Saturday

Saturday is my boring day of the weekend, I have to stay home because of Covid-19. I

have to change activities online such as study , work and meeting. In the morning of Saturday

I always wake up around 10 a.m.. to take a shower prepare myself to go outside. At 11

o’clock I buy something at the shop to cook for lunch by motorcycle. After I come back I will

cook for 30 minute. I forgot to tell you something, I have a cat named Kati. I always feed it

when I have lunch. After I take care of my cat I play games. The game that I play is online on

computer. I play with senior and my friends. Their name is Ford and Jane. I spend time for

playing game about 3-4 hours per day. In the evening In do some house work such as

washing dishes. In the evening I have dinner at 6 p.m.. After that I will watch movies on

youtube and go to bed around 11 p.m.

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Edited Paragraph Writing 1 by Euro

Saturday

Saturday is my boring day because I have to stay at home during Covid-19 pandemic.

On Saturday morning, I always wake up late around 10 a.m. Then, I make my bed, take a

shower, and get dressed. Around 11 o’clock, I go to a shop by motorcycle to buy something

for cooking lunch. After that, I hurriedly go back home because I don’t want to get into

crowded people for a long time during this pandemic. After I arrive home. I always feel

hungry, so I cook my lunch. Then I have lunch about 12.30 p.m. Anyway, I have a cat named

Kati. I love her so much. I always feel happy to feed her some foods during my lunch. After

lunchtime, I usually play online games on my computer. I always play with my university

senior. His name is Ford. Sometimes, I play with my best friend, Jane. I spend a lot of time

playing online games about 3 to 4 hours per day. In the evening, I have dinner with my

family at 6 p.m. Next, I do some housework such as washing dishes, cleaning the living

room, and iron my clothes. Then, I go to my bedroom. I usually watch videos on YouTube or

check my Facebook. Finally, I go to bed around 11 p.m. Saturday is the most boring day for

me because I really get bored to spend almost time at my home.