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1 TARGET 140+: AN APPROACH TO WRITING A SCORING ESSAY – BY MK YADAV SIR 3
2 ESSAY 01 - SINCE AGES, WE ARE LIVING ON THIS PLANET AS IF WE HAD ANOTHER ONE TO GO TO 5
3 ESSAY 02 - ATTITUDE DETERMINES THE ALTITUDE OF LIFE 14
THEME-WISE PREVIOUS 25 YEARS ESSAY QUESTIONS
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BY MK YADAV SIR
Essay is indeed one of the least understood and underrated, yet scoring paper, in the entire CSE Mains
examination scheme. Time and again, aspirants have come up with fluctuating scores in essay over the years.
So, what makes some candidates score consistently well (140-150+) every time? What are they doing right?
With UPSC, one can only make an educated guess.
Here are some pointers that will enable you to develop a consistent strategy & approach to writing a scoring
essay. These have been tried & tested by theIAShub’s selected candidates, thus, offer a credible blueprint.
1. What sources should one study for writing a brilliant essay?
• You may refer the same sources as you’ve referred for the GS exam preparation, including optionals.
• Basically, it is the same knowledge pool and content bank. Only the approach changes ie. you’ve to
write in a precise manner in GS answers and in detail explanation format in an Essay.
• Word of Caution - Do not overuse your optionals knowledge. It would limit your ability to generate
general and varied dimensions. Do not make your essay too complex.
2. What kind of language should one use?
• Remember, it’s not about writing heavy words and showing the strength of your vocabulary. Write an
essay which can be understood by anyone ie. write in a simple yet lucid language.
• Do not forcefully insert complicated words, it will only break the natural flow of your thought.
• If you really want to appreciate the power of simplicity, do listen to US ex-president Barak Obama’s
presidential speech of 2008 (available on YouTube). He used the simplest possible vocabulary, and yet
very powerfully expressed his thoughts.
• And have neat, clean, & legible handwriting. You’re not in a calligraphy competition!
• Word of Caution – Simple language does not mean simplistic language. Do not hesitate to be creative
with language - use keywords, quotes, idioms etc and make your essay interesting. Of course, this ability
comes with reading good articles, books etc.
3. Should one write essay in point format? And draw diagrams, just like GS answers?
• A 1000-1200 words essay should preferably be written in a paragraph format, with small paragraphs (to
break the monotony).
• Each paragraph should have a unique idea which must not be repeated anywhere else in the essay
(don’t unnecessarily break single idea paragraphs).
• You can divide the entire essay into 6-7 major parts and give relevant sub-headings.
• Avoid mindmaps/diagrams or use only if it goes with the overall flow of your idea. Do not attempt to
“force fit”. You can use tables to show data, if necessary, or maps.
• Word of Caution – Proper structuring of essay is crucial. Prepare a rough outline of your essay, in the
rough space provided, before actually attempting it. This requires brainstorming of points and
prioritising them to give a proper flow to the essay.
4. How should one go about choosing the Topic?
• Choice of topic must be based on familiarity with the topic. If you are comfortable with the topic, ideas
will flow naturally. You have to own the topic!
• Choose a topic where you can generate more dimensions and have a reasonable depth of knowledge.
• Remember to stick to the topic. Keep a grip on the central theme throughout the essay. Deviation from
the topic ends up irritating the evaluator and results in poor marks.
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• Word of Caution – Do not unnecessarily choose a difficult, unconventional topic. A good topic with bad
content will (definitely!) not fetch marks.
5. How important is writing an introduction? How to write a catchy introduction?
• Well begun is half done! A catchy introduction captures the interest of the examiner (who probably is
dead bored with correcting several essays!). It gives a sneak peek into what more interesting ideas await
in rest of the pages.
• Preferably, start with a relevant quote! If need be, you may explain it.
• You may narrate a historical anecdote, state a current situation (fact, news etc.), relate a personal story,
pose a counter question, can extrapolate a future happening based on current scenario etc.
• Develop a good quote bank (for introduction & conclusion). Memorising takes time, so begin early. Try
jotting down good lines, quotes, examples, stories, case studies, etc. from daily newspaper editorials or
other readings. Try compiling the quotes theme-wise – for eg. Women, Economy, Education, Health,
International Relations etc.
• Word of Caution – Do not overuse quotes or straight jacket them where they do not belong.
6. How can one cover all the major dimensions in the body of the essay?
You may use these well-tested techniques to gather dimensions –
• Temporal Analysis – Past, Present and Future
• PESTLE Analysis – Polity, Economics, Science, Tech, Law, Env.
• Level Analysis – Personal, Family, State, National, International
• Stakeholder Analysis – Govt, Public, Business, Media, NGOs etc.
• GS syllabus based – Geography, History, Society, Polity, Governance, International Relations, Economy,
IS, S&T, Environment, Disaster Management, Ethics etc.
• Word of Caution – In an attempt to generate too many dimensions, do not forget to maintain the flow
and central idea of the essay. Your ideas, point of view and vision must be solid, dimensions are to be
used only to expand on them.
7. How can one enrich the essay and make it stand apart?
• As mentioned earlier, before attempting, make a rough framework of the essay and jot down all the
important dimensions in the rough space provided. This will help you to remember all your enrichment
points and stick to the topic, otherwise you may lose track!
• Cite important facts, Keywords, SDGs, Committee’s name, SC judgements, World Summit, Parliamentary
Law, words from PM/President/Vice-President speeches, thoughts of famous thinkers, NITI Ayog
Reports, Important Indices/ Index, current affairs news etc.
• Simply generating issues is not enough, give innovative solutions, or a positive way ahead.
• Word of Caution – For every argument you make, back it up with facts or examples to lend weight to
your opinions.
8. What else?
• Time Management – Preferably, assign 5 minutes to select the topic, 15-20 to prepare broad framework
and brainstorm, 1-1.15 hrs to write the essay.
• Practice, Practice, Practice – The more you sweat in peace, the less you bleed in war. Practice at least 5-
6 essays before the exam.
• Go through last 20-25 years’ essay topics - This will also help assess the oft repeated topics and aid you
you in preparing ready reference fodder on various topics.
• You may also refer to the answer copies of past toppers to have an idea and give few tests to help you
in self -evaluation.
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Note: The aim of this document is to give varied dimensions and broad fodder points for the essay topics.
These are meant to serve only as indicative frameworks for students to build further upon. Essays are a
subjective expression of one’s point of view. So, content, context, and dimensions may change from one
person to another.
MODEL APPROACH
DEMAND OF THE TOPIC:
The topic mainly requires addressing major issues related with overall environmental degradation over the
period of time. These major issues are - climate change, pollution, extraction of earth’s resources, extinction of
various species, etc. It also (indirectly) questions the so-called “Development” which the human race has
achieved, and the efforts, achievements, hurdles, and future of sustainable development paradigm.
INTRODUCTION
The essay can be started with
1) Quotes: For e.g.-
• “The world has enough for everyone’s need, but not for everyone’s greed.”- Mahatma Gandhi
• “The greatest danger to future of our planet is apathy.”- Jane Goodall
• “Here we are, the cleverest species ever to have lived. So how is it we can destroy the only planet we
have?” - Jane Goodall.
• “The question is, are we happy to suppose that our grandchildren may never be able to see an elephant
except in a picture book?”- David Attenborough.
2) Reports/ facts:
• IUCN data - world will witness loss of 20% of its biodiversity (flora and fauna) by the end of this century.
• UNEP Report - A healthy environment plays a key role in meeting almost all the 17 SDGs!
• World Environment Day 2020 Theme: ‘TIME FOR NATURE.’
• Our Common Future Report, Brundtland Report, 1987- “Humanity’s inability to fit its activities into that
pattern is changing planetary systems, fundamentally. Many such changes are accompanied by life-
threatening hazards. This new reality, from which there is no escape, must be recognized- and
managed.”
FODDER POINTS FOR MAIN BODY
Broad Outline/Essay flow
1. Connecting introduction with significance of environment for the whole humanity.
2. Despite widely acknowledged looming climate change threat, why delays in dealing with or ignorance
towards environmental issues.
3. Consequences of such ignorance/ inaction/ procrastination/ negotiation deadlock/ current scenario.
4. The other side of the coin/ positives/ what we have done at various levels.
5. What more needs to be done at individual/ societal/ national / and international level.
6. Concluding essay on positive note.
7. Note: Give a Short sub heading for each dimension.
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• International consequences:
- Water crisis - Cape Town case study
- Increasing deforestation eg. Of the countries that lost the most forest since 2001, the top five are
located in the Global South namely - Brazil, Indonesia, Columbia, Peru, Bolivia (i.e rainforests
countries of the world) - The World Resources Institute Report
- Climate change evidence - melting glaciers, increasing temperatures in polar regions, etc.
- Increased International water dispute, eg. India and all its neighbours - China (Brahmaputra river),
Pakistan (Kishanganga), Nepal ( source of Mahakali), Bangladesh (Teesta) etc.
- Climate change refugees ➔ Xenophobia, conflicts, etc.
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• Societal level - promoting practices like donating trees/ adopting trees on occasion of social- political
functions instead of felicitations with garlands.
- Piplantri Village Model (Rajasthan) - they plant 111 trees to celebrate the birth of every girl child.
• National level - Increasing role of local governments, incentives for social forestry, better and effective
implementation of existing plethora of schemes and initiatives, stabilize GHG emissions, reduce
emissions by 2/3rd by 2050, improve energy conservation and efficiency, introduce new regulations eg.
transportation and building codes, raise price of fossil fuels and establish a carbon tax etc.
• International level:
- Not reactive but proactive policies and programmes for implementation.
- Increasing awareness - supporting international efforts like Earth Hour
- International community – Governments, private sector, media, NGOs etc must work together to
act against climate change. For eg. Marrakech Partnership for Global Climate Action
- Global south- south cooperation for stricter implementation of common but differentiated
responsibilities principle.
- Paris Deal plus approach - more ambitious targets, while ensuring welfare of all.
- Ability of developing countries to take on ambitious targets hinges on availability of finance,
technology, and capacity building ➔ Thus, developed countries, the historical polluters, must fulfil
their commitments under the Pre 2020 agreement.
- More transparent rules and guidelines for usage and utility of Global Commons (Atmosphere, Outer
space, The high seas, Antarctica) etc.
- Consensus on outcomes will be achieved only if trust is built. Thus, the platform provided by Talanoa
dialogue must be used optimally.
• Need to stop being an “individual” and work as a “collective force” - “We cannot, of course, save the
world, because we do not have authority over its parts. We can serve the world, though. That is
everyone’s calling, to lead a life that helps.” - Barry Lopez
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ATTITUDE DETERMINES
2 THE ALTITUDE OF LIFE
MODEL APPROACH
DEMAND OF THE TOPIC:
• Human beings are different from other species due to their “ability to reason’. They can think, express,
understand other fellow human beings and also determine their responses to various situations.
• However, despite having this ability not all of us can respond in a uniform way, the reason behind this
is our “Attitude”.
• It is the core aspect which determines the outcome of various human actions and its consequences.
• It is not necessary that all our actions always result in expected success, we might face numerous
failures, but with the right attitude we can see that as an opportunity to improvise!
INTRODUCTION
The Essay can be Started with
1) A quote/ philosophical idea:
• “Keep your thoughts positive because your thoughts become your words. Keep your words positive
because your words become your behaviour. Keep your behaviour positive because your behaviour
becomes your habits. Keep your habits positive because your habits become your values. Keep your
values positive because your values become your destiny.”- Mahatma Gandhi
• “Attitudes are a secret power working twenty-four hours a day, for good or bad. It is of paramount
importance that we know how to harness and control this great force.”- Irving Berlin
• “The greatest discovery of all time is that a person can change his future by merely changing his
attitude.”– Oprah Winfrey
• If opportunity doesn’t knock, build a door. Milton Berle
• “We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.“- Oscar Wilde
• “Sooner or later, those who win are those who think they can.”- Richard Bach
• “Weakness of attitude becomes weakness of character.”- Albert Einstein
• “It’s not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.”- Epictetus
• Your problem isn’t the problem, it’s your attitude about the problem. -Ann Brashares
• “Excellence is not a skill. It is an attitude.” -Ralph Marston
• “You cannot have a positive life and a negative mind.” -Joyce Meyer
Some other thoughts to start with
• 21st century positive attitude is as important as talent and mastery over skills.
• Your attitude forms every event in your life, whether you realize it or not.
2) Note: You may also begin with an anecdote – For eg.
A wiseman was approached by a trader who had just one question, “How are you able to remain positive
all the time”. The wise man replied, “It’s simple. Each morning I wake up, I say to myself, you have two
choices today. You can choose to be in a good mood or bad one. I chose good mood.
Whenever something bad happens to me, I ask myself, either you can choose to be a victim or can learn
something from it. I chose to Learn.
Every time someone comes complaining to me, I have choice to accept complaint or I can point out positive
side of life. I chose positive side of life..”
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Life is all about choices. When you cut away all the junk, every situation is a choice. You choose how you
react to situations. It’s your choice how you live your life.
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• Our attitude not only helps us to deal with ourselves but it also helps to deal with people around
us! Keep the words of George Washington in mind “Associate yourself with men of good quality if you
esteem your own reputation, for it’s better to be alone than be in bad company.’
• It is simply a way of responding to life in a manner that allows us to accept the duality, the paradoxes,
the contradictions, the contrasts of our experiences. A positive attitude enables us to make a difference
in the world around us because when you are able to see things in a positive light, you help to influence
and shape other people’s attitude as well.
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• Stress free and Happy - “Happiness is an attitude. We either make ourselves miserable, or happy and
strong. The amount of work is the same.” Good health, especially mental health, is key to good and
productive life. One can contribute much more.
• More focused - With positive thinking, you achieve emotional balance, which actually helps the brain
to execute functions properly. You learn to stay focused and as a result, you can come up with the right
decisions in challenging situations.
• Attitude helps in introspection and improvisation - In a world characterized by upheavals, crisis,
disappointments, depression and dejection, there is a need for every individual that wants to live, to
grow, to be successful, have fun and ultimately take the rightful place in destiny to be self-motivated
and self-encouraged.
• Connecting this with the argument that the challenges will remain in every journey, however the
journey (of any walk of life) cannot be completed meaningfully without Positive Attitude.
4. How to develop positive attitude?
Positive attitude is never automatic. You have to work at it!
• “ATTITUDE IS A MATTER OF CHOICE!”: Choose to be happy. One needs to consciously make that choice.
• It’s not only a matter of choice, but also repeated attempts. Repeat affirmations to inspire and motivate
yourselves. Practise positivity on an ongoing basis. No matter how tough a situation is, there is always
some good in it, some insight and lessons to learn.
• Remember that YOU control your attitude - Attitude does not emerge from what happens to you, but
instead from how you decide to interpret what happens to you.
• Constructive solutions - It is not enough just to believe that things will turn out okay. You also need to
seek constructive solutions and carrying them out.
• A positive attitude is not about merely displaying a perky disposition, our smiling faces or merely positive
talks. It is about feeling positive from within.
• Listen to your internal dialogue. When faced with a negative thought, turn it around to make it into a
positive thought. (For example, “I am no good at this!” could be changed to, “Maybe this is not one of
my strengths, but I’ve tried my hardest, and I am skilled in many other things.”)
• Associate yourself with positive people, since happiness is contagious.
• Enjoy the present but keep striving for better – Positive attitude does not mean complacency.
• Create a "library" of positive thoughts - read, view, or listen to something inspirational or motivational.
Avoid angry or negative media.
• Volunteer - Do something that will help others. This will give you a sense of fulfilment and make you
feel happy inside.
5. Conclusion
• Albert Einstein rightly said “Weakness of attitude becomes weakness of character.”
• Nothing good stands without the right attitude. You may know how to do it, but if the attitude is
negative, all you can say is “I could have done it”. So, know that we may encounter many defeats, but
we must not be defeated."
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