Persuasive Essay Outline Sketch.
Fill in each section with 2-3 detail sentences. If you are not sure what to write in each section, please go to the file
named "MATERIAL". There you will find examples to guide you. A graphic organizer of the structure of the essay is
at the last page, in case you get lost.
Essay piece
1. What is the essay
topic? It is the subject of
your essay according to your
grade.
2. What is your
opening hook? Draw the
reader in and get them
interested in what you have to
say.
3. What is the thesis
statement of your
essay? It’s a statement that
summarizes your topic and
declares your position on it.
4. What is the topic
sentence of your first
body paragraph? Is the
first sentence of your paragraph.
It should be related to your
thesis statement.
5. What is the topic
sentence of your
second body
paragraph? It is the first
sentence of your paragraph. It
hould be related to your thesis
statement.
Development of two to three ideas.
1st grade essay topic: Teenagers and the internet.
How helpful has the internet become in our lives? Comentado [1]: I added this question to begin this
To begin, unquestionably the internet has been gaining section. I also changed what you had as your thesis to
start your introduction.
ground in the lives of adolescents. As a result, almost 100% Comentado [2]: ok maestra
of adolescents use it regularly as a source of information,
communication, socialization and above all, it is a great
support in our learning.
The Internet has become the new modality that helps
adolescents to foster their creativity, also the supports them
for homework, and attends online classes at distance. In this
new way of learning, adolescents consider themselves the
natives on the internet era. From my perspective, the Comentado [3]: I added some details here because
internet has its advantages as well as disadvantages. your opinion has to due with both pros and cons of the
internet.
The internet is of great importance because it supports
adolescents in their activities. Comentado [4]: This is your topic sentence. The rest of
your information will become the SECONDARY IDEAS.
Additionally, it also has strategies to stay safe and it is easy
to use. Its advantages are impressive, for example: it
supports homework in creativity and is useful as a source of
information.
On the other hand, this new modality also has some risks,
for example…. Comentado [5]: Here, you have your topic sentence.
The disadvantages of the internet need to be explained
In some cases they lose interaction with their social and
here.
family environment. They can become victims of
Comentado [6]: I changed what you had originally
cyberbullying, identity theft, on the other hand they expose because you were still writing about pros of the internet.
themselves to people they often do not know, publishing Now, it is in the previous paragraph.

Persuasive Essay Outline Sketch.
6. What is your
opponent's point of
view? Describe what your
opponent´s point of view is.
That's the first sentence for
your third paragraph.
7. What is a conclusion
paragraph? It should resemble
your introduction by restating the
thesis statement, but in different
words or in a different way.
Fill in your personal information.
personal information. They become victims of viruses,
grooming, video game addiction, and social media addiction
My grandfather assures that the internet is absorbing the
brain of adolescents and that it does not help in their learning Comentado [7]: Here, it ends your opponent´s point of
that they also no longer read that they only copy and paste view. The idea separated from your original paragraph
information.
will become your refusing idea or contra argument.
However, I think that he is wrong because it does contribute
to the educational field, because we adolescents find a new
way of reading different sources of information such as
encyclopedias.
Finally, as long as adolescents make correct use of the
internet, it will be beneficial as it is a new source and learning
tool that will continue to evolve over time.
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Persuasive Essay Outline Sketch.

• Full name: Vladimir Martinez Pablo

• List number:25

• Group and grarde:1A

• Shift: afternoon

• Date: February 11 th 2021

Graphic Organizer of the essay's structure.

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