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Objectives:
1. determine various patterns of development in writing across disciplines;
2. write an essay of a specific purpose.
Hence, before you are able to write about your topic of choice, it is important to
be acquainted with various patterns of development. Knowing these different patterns
would not only allow you to appreciate the texts you read but help you to develop your
own original works too. You can also control your paragraphs more successfully if you
are familiar with the patterns of developing a paragraph.
This lesson will help you to distinguish between and among patterns of
development in writing across the disciplines. In this lesson, you will learn about the
different patterns of development/organization that will help you write an essay for a
specific purpose. Basically, the four types of discourse are: narration, description,
exposition, and argumentation.
We cannot just put all our ideas together. They need to flow well and hang
together to form a unified whole. Hence, it is important for us to learn how to develop
our paragraphs. Simply put, we must use patterns of development—patterns a writer
uses to express his/her ideas in a coherent and effective manner.
Take some time to decide what you want to say and then decide which method of
development will be most effective in presenting your ideas. Think of methods of
development as writing tools to help you organize and focus your writing.
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A. DESCRIPTION (Sensory and Spatial)
Descriptive paragraphs are often used to describe what a person looks like and how
s/he acts. You can also describe a place, thing/object, or situation/event. In writing
description, you should remember to create an impression using descriptive words.
Description appeals to the sense of sight. Observation is implied by description when it
brings the sense of sight (visual), touch (tactile), smell (olfactory), taste (gustatory), and
hearing (auditory) to enrich the sense of sight. Simply put, when you write a
description, you create a clear picture in the reader’s mind. The reader should be
able to envision the picture that you had in your mind as the writer. To do that, you use
all your senses, your memory, and sometimes your imagination to make a picture with
your words.
A descriptive pattern basically provides details on the idea by using either a sensory
or spatial pattern. Through a sensory pattern, ideas are arranged based on one or all of
the five senses. A spatial pattern, on the other hand, arranges ideas by location or
physical space. Description is often paired with the narrative because a good narrative
contains description of sights, sounds, tastes, smells, and even emotions.
The following signal words can help you write a good descriptive paragraph.
Properties Measurement Analogy Location
size length is like in/inside/out/outside
color width resembles above/top/atop
shape mass/weight is similar to below/under/beneath
purpose speed beside, across
near/nearby/close
behind/back of
left/middle/right
farther
on/off
Sample Text:
I am forty years old, rather tall and I have black eyes and short black hair. I wear casual dress as I
teach students in a relaxed atmosphere. I enjoy my job because I get to meet and help so many different people
from different countries. During my spare time, I like playing badminton which I play at least three times a
week. I also love listening to classical music and I must admit that I spend a lot of money buying new CDs! I live
in a pretty mountainside town on the north of this region. I enjoy eating great Filipino food and laughing with
the likable people who live there.
- “is defined as” A pest is defined as any animal or pest that damages crops,
forests, or property.
- “is a kind of” Jazz is a kind of music that is lively and inviting.
- Other signal words: “is,” “means,” “refers to,” “to define”
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Sample Text:
TYPES OF DEFINITION
1. Formal definition – this consists of two parts: general class (genus) and
distinguishing characteristics (differentia). Genus refers to the classification of
the word, term, or concept defined. For example, when you define the word
‘chair,’ its genus or category is furniture. Its differentia is that it is made to sit on,
unlike a table which is another piece of furniture that is made for other purposes
such as a dining table where we can eat or an office table where we can work.
2. Informal definition – this type of definition does not follow any format. You can
start providing the meaning of a term or a concept by citing examples or details.
You may also be creative in defining meaning by using similes and metaphors.
To give you an idea on how informal definition is written, you may read the
sample that follows.
Vacation
Reading the paragraph above, we get to see from different lenses various meanings
of vacation. Vacation, then, is defined informally. Words like relief, relaxation,
recollection, and opportunity all refer to vacation.
Sample Text 1:
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Earthquakes can be classified into three main types based on the plate movements.
The first type is known as a convergent boundary. Also known as destructive plate
boundary, this type of earthquake happens when two tectonic plates move toward one
another and collide. The second type of earthquake is called the divergent boundary.
During this type of earthquake, two plates are forced to move away from each other
resulting in a rift zone. The last type is called the conservative plate boundary or
transform fault. During this type of earthquake, two tectonic plates slide past one
another.
D. EXAMPLE/EXEMPLIFICATION
An example paragraph or essay makes a point about a topic by providing examples
to support it. When we use this development pattern, we use a deductive form of
reasoning by supporting or expounding our central and main ideas with specific and
concrete examples. Examples may take the form of stories, researches, statistics,
surveys, cases, or testimonies. By citing examples, it makes our claims more convincing,
and therefore makes you credible/trustworthy.
A very practical purpose or function of explication is that examples can make
abstract ideas more understandable to human perception. For example, how will you
concretize poverty, love, or injustice?
Sample Text:
While the Internet offers so many benefits to man, it also has its downsides. One of
these is phishing, which refers to the act of obtaining personal information, such as
passwords and credit card details, through online means. In other words, phishing is a
form of cybercrime. As an example, let us consider the case of Mr. X. He received an
email stating that his Gmail account has been compromised and that he needed to click
a link to update personal information. If Mr. X clicks on the link, his personal information
will be illegally acquired by cybercriminals.
The following signal words can help you write a good comparison and contrast
paragraph:
Similarities Differences
is similar to, the same on one hand, on the other hand
both however, nevertheless, although
also but, while, yet
too, just as so in contrast, otherwise
as well (as), like, likewise differs from
while unlike, whereas
equally, similarly as opposed to, on the contrary
in a similar fashion/in the same conversely
way/manner
Most beginning college students quickly realize that college is different from high
school. They can build their own time schedules, choose their own instructors, and
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decide whether to attend classes. In high school however, freedom is more restricted.
Most high schools operate within a controlled time frame; teachers and students are
assigned, not selected by the students, and class attendance is required.
Tina and her father are both canny consumers. They grocery shop together
because they share similar delight in reading labels. Tina’s suspicion of fancy packaging
is like her father’s. Also, both can spot a bargain four aisles off!
Preparing a chart can help you organize information before writing a paragraph
that compares. Study this chart below:
Divina thought over whether to buy a sling bag or a back pack. The sling bag costs
only P150.00, compared to the P250.00 price tag on the back pack. However, the back
pack was more useful than the sling bag. On the other hand, the sling bag could carry
her things. Divina preferred to put all her books and notebooks in a back pack.
Note that the things being compared, the sling bag and the back pack, are included
in the topic sentence. The comparison inside the chart become the detail sentences.
Comparison and contrast also banks so much on the use of figurative language
as the use of such adds artistic and literary value to, and deepens the meaning and
interpretation of discourse. Writers do a creative approach in using comparison and
contrast through the use of figurative language. These add color and a deeper meaning
to what the author is trying to point out in a given piece of writing.
Example: Time is gold. (Time is being described as having the same high value as gold.)
Examples: Just as a sword is the weapon of a warrior, a pen is the weapon of a writer.
My friend is a wilting flower. She was a bud, full of anticipation for all the eyes
that will glorify its beauty. Once it bloomed, it showed splendor to everyone who cared to
look. But after a while, all the bees and butterflies found better things to do and left the
poor flower alone. Now, she is wallowing in self-pity and despair.
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