Opinion Essay

Assignment Score: 59
Statistics
1. You have written 124 words.
2. I count a total of 1 paragraph.
3. You have written 10 sentences.
4. Your average sentence length is 12.40.
5. You have written 0 question.
6. You have used 0 first-person pronoun (I, me, my, mine).

Writing quality: 20%

You have not used very many transition words (2-3) and cohesion devices in
your essay to help your reader understand the relationship between your
ideas. Add more transition words and phrases for a higher score. Some
Cohesion: examples of transitions that you can use are as follows: along the same lines,
because of this, as an example, as an illustration, take the case of, to
illustrate, as a matter of fact, there is no question that, without a doubt. Your
score for this feature = 40/100
Dynamism:
Your essay does not contain very many words that could provoke an
emotional reaction in your reader. Provocative words help to engage and
sustain your reader's attention. Add more to increase your score. Here are
Provocativeness: some examples of words that provoke an emotional reaction in readers: awe-
inspiring, brutal, children, danger, explode, fear, gorgeous, hoax,
invasion... Your score for this feature = 20/100

Cliches: I did not detect any cliches in your writing. No penalty was applied.

Exclamation I did not detect any exclamation marks in your writing. No penalty was
marks: applied.

Essay structure and content: 50%

Paragraph 1 - introduction: 25%

Title: Nowadays English is the most significant subject at school.

 Make sure to capitalize any word with four letters or more in your title. Your
score for this feature = 0/100
The first reason is, people who come from different countries use English
to communicate with each other.
Opening: I noticed that you started your essay with a short anecdote or narrative to
spark interest in your topic. That's good. Your score for this feature =
100/100
I checked your introduction for words and phrases that writers use to
establish the importance of their topic. I was unable to find any matches.
Establish the importance of your topic with one of these phrases: a vital
Context: factor in, the leading cause of, widely considered to be, set to become,
undergoing a revolution, is responsible for. There are others. Your score for
this feature = 0/100

Thesis: because of that, we should encourage students to study English.

The last sentence uses provocative words that will make an impact on your
reader. That's good. Remember that a good thesis statement should express a
  debatable claim that you can support with evidence and reasons. Your score
for this feature = 100/100

Vocabulary: 86%
Argument-related words: because, reason, research, study
Feedback: You have used only a few words related to argumentation. Expect the minimum score for
minimal effort. Your score for this feature = 60/100
 
Vocabulary profile:
Feedback: 65% of your essay comprises the most common 1000 words in the language. You
possess a very large vocabulary and excellent academic potential. Your score for this feature =
100/100
 
Academic vocabulary profile: research, role, assist, communicate, job, summarize, appreciate
Feedback: 7% of your essay comprises words from the academic word list. You possess a very
large academic vocabulary and suggests excellent academic potential. Your score for this feature =
100/100

Language Accuracy: 80%

Number of errors: 4
Feedback: I was able to detect a few errors in your writing. Do your best to eliminate any avoidable
errors in your writing by rereading your essay carefully and by using a spell checker and grammar
checker. Your score for this feature = 90/100
Grammar Check Feedback
You wrote: ...English to communicate with each other. . Because of that, students can have a ch...
Feedback: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
You wrote: ...r. . Because of that, students can have a chance to communicate and learn with st...
Feedback: Use "I" not "a" to refer to yourself. Revise: "I chance to communicate".
Suggestion: I chance to communicate
You wrote: ...plicants have who have a strong English skillset. To summarize, English plays an
importa...
Feedback: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: skillet, skill set
You wrote: ...mportant role in teaching and studying. because of that, we should encourage
students t...
Feedback: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because