INTRODUCTION & CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

Simple introduction: 2 sentences (Background + Thesis)

Complex introduction: 4 sentences (background + detailed background +
Thesis + Outline)

SIMPLE
Question 1:
In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people
tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited
access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you
think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
Introduction
In many countries, small-sized shops in city centres cannot compete with large
stores that are located in the outskirts; therefore, many of those small businesses
are threatened with closure. Although this change may bring several drawbacks,
the returns are highly justifiable.
(Although this change is advantageous in some ways, it can do more harm than
good.)
Conclusion
Although the dominance of big stores outside the city centre may come at a cost,
the advantages still outweigh the disadvantages.
(Although the dominance of big stores outside the city centre may bring some
obvious benefits, the advantages are still outweighed by the disadvantages.)

Question 2:
Many people today are worried about cybercrime such as hacking and identity
theft. What problems does cybercrime cause, and what solutions can you suggest
for ordinary people and business to take?

Introduction
Cybercrime has been increasingly ubiquitous results in several negative effects,
and some viable solutions can be implemented to alliviate it.

Conclusion
In conclusion, cybercrime may cause various problems, and the proposed
solutions can be executed to hopefully tackle it to some extent.
Question 3:

In many countries, financial crime involving identity theft is increasing. What are
the causes of this trend, and what effect does identity theft have on the victims
involved?

Introduction
Identity theft has been increasingly ubiquitous in recent years. This isue is
driven by several factors and attributable to a whole host of problems to
citizens.

Conclusion
In conclusion, identity theft may stem from various underlying factors, and it
results in several negative effects on citizens.

COMPLEX
Question 1:
The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do
you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages?

Introduction
The Internet has revolutionized the world in many different ways. Among these, it
has made it possible for people to work from home. Despite the many advantages
that may derive from this arrangement, it is felt that working from home is
predominantly disadvantagous to the professional. This will proven by looking at
how the home sets professionals up to be boht distacted and unable to detach
themselves from work.

Conclusion
In conclusion, despite advantages of lower overhead and independence, working
from homw has many more drawbacks than favorable points. It is thus hoped that
professionals everywhere think carefully before settling on this working
arrangement.
Question 2:
All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel
are the main causes of this? What are the effects?
Introduction
Global obesity rates have been swelling for several decades now. This is a trend
that is having devastating effects on populations everywhere. Although often
debated, it is felt the food a person consume and the lifestyle they live are the base
precursors to this problem. In this essay, a look at these cause and their effects will
be made.

Conclusion
Following this look at the causes and effects of obesity, it is felt that education is
the single most important counter to this problem. Thus, it is hoped schools
everywhere encourage children to eat nourishing diet and practice a healthy
lifestyles in an effort to change this disturbing global health trend.

Question 3:
Describe some of the problems overreliance on cars can cause and suggest
possible a possible solution
Introduction
In the modern world, humanity’s reliance on motorized vehicles has reached levels
never seen before in history. With the rise of the developing world, these numbers
are only going to continue to swell. It is felt that popullation and the draining of
world resources are the most serious problems caused by this trend. Carpooling
will be argured a feasible response to these challenges.
Conclusion
Following this look at the challenges and potential solutions to this topic, it is clear
that something has to be done in order to reduce the world’s reliance on motor
vehicles. It is thus hoped carpooloing lanes are introduced in all big cities the
world over.
PRACTICE
Write introduction paragraphs
1. Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it
a positive or negative development for the local people and the
environment?
2. International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country
visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
3. In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects
family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments
outweigh the disadvantages?
4. In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with
people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it
a positive or negative development in your opinion?
5. Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time.
Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?  
6. Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may
choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in
apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in
university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the
community. Where would you prefer to live?
7. Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a
result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does
this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
8. Some people believe that factories and private tour operators should bear the
cost of cleaning up environmental pollution, instead of the government. To
what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
9. Animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in
the sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
10.Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the
community as a whole.
11.Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not
local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local
people to visit these places?
12.In some parts of the world it is increasingly popular to research the history
of one’s own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or
negative development?