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Your intro must grab the reader's attention, but it must also spell out what your essay is going to be about.
2. Does each sentence follow the next in logic? (There should be no leaps in
logic.)
4. Does your thesis identify the specific position you will take in your paper?
Sentence 1:
Begin with an eye-catching sentence (e.g a quote, a definition, or a shocking / interesting statement that will draw
the reader in)
Also See:
Thesis Statement
Sentences 2-4:
Briefly introduce topics from the prompt that will be addressed in the paper, if discussing books / articles, include
the title(s) and author('s) name(s), and some brief information about the text.
Also known as the thesis statement, this is the most important part of the introductory paragraph. The thesis
statement should make a controversial claim, or a strong argument, while addressing the prompt. If the thesis
statement cannot be argued, then it is not strong enough. The goal of the writer is to use the thesis statement to
guide the flow and organization of the paper, while still providing a point.
Note
Remember to ask yourself: Is the first sentence eye-catching? Does the paragraph address the prompt? Is the
thesis strong and controversial, and does it make a claim?
Quick Tips
• The thesis statement addresses the topic and presents the reader's point
of view.
• Think of different thesis statements, and see which one best fits your
paper.
• Revise / alter your thesis to fit your paper, even if your original ideas
change.
It is the unifying idea that lays the foundation for the rest of the paper. It is the reason you are writing and thus the
most important part of your paper!
It is a proposition that one attempts to support and ultimately prove in the paper. It is the main tool by which one
can affect and influence an audience.
• Your topic
Body Paragraphs
Your body paragraphs are where you make your argument. Each paragraph argues one aspect of your overall
thesis. Your paragraphs must be arranged to logically flow from one idea to the next (think chronological order;
what do we need to know next?)
2. Does the topic sentence argue one aspect of your argument? (Note that a
reader should be able to read your thesis and your topic sentences and
the argument?
4. Does your paragraph answer how and why? (How is your claim true? Why
is it true?)
5. Do your quotations come in only after you have discussed your argument
in your own words using your own examples?
9. Could you remove all your quotes and still have a clear argued paper?
Conclusion:
This is where you answer the question "so what?" Make sure you are looking at the bigger picture, and challenging
your readers to do the same.
Concluding paragraphs are used to tie up an essay in a cohesive and concise summary of the thesis and key points.
Although this may sound intimidating, formulating a conclusion can be broken down into helpful tips that will lead
to an accomplished ending.
Do not simply restate the thesis. Summarizing and supporting the thesis and main points will lead to a focused
essay. Recounting on what was written in the thesis will suggest to the reader that the writer accomplished what
he or she set out to accomplish.
Writing the introduction and conclusion paragraphs after the body of the essay has been written might help you
accomplish this task.
Frame the paragraph by reminding the reader of something you referred to in the introduction that will remind the
reader of your thesis.
Conclusions can also be a place to suggest further research if applicable, make a prediction or comparison, and
analyze what the argument of the paper means.
Finally, end on a strong note. Make sure to stray from cliche phrases, bringing up new ideas and identical wording
used in the introduction or throughout the essay. Instead try these suggestions:
Include a compressed summary of the main points of the essay and recount why they are important and how they
connect to each other.
Ask a question or use a quotation that may invoke a response from the reader.
Keep in mind that an effective concluding paragraph will leave a lasting impression on the reader and remind them
of the purpose of the essay. It is also an opportunity to check that essay remained focused and proved and / or
supported the thesis.
Brainstorming
Also See:
* Use numbers to put them in the order you want to mention them in writing.
Drafting
* Leave a wide margin. You can use this space for additions, comments...
* Push yourself to the end of the first draft. Don't stop to correct yourself.
* If unsure about which word to use, write two or three words, or write the
Here are some changes you may want to make when revising.
* Adding parts (use your margin, write them after and put an arrow)
Proofreading
Proofreading is very important in the writing process. You should give it some time and attention in all your
writing. See proofreading details.
At this point, you have done the hardest part and you don't want to lose points / quality for simple mistakes. Put
some effort in this last stage. It is one of the easiest stages but a very important one.