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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever
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In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the view that
community whose bases are rules and laws could not activate if citizens were able to do
anything at their disposal. In my view, I wholeheartedly agree with this view due to the reasons
provided below.
Firstly, the public would be thrown into chaos with the absence of laws. To be specific, citizens
will do anything they desire without fear irrespective of consequences. They may tackle their
conflicts with violence or steal money when running out of it, since there is nothing holding
they back. As a result, some painful accidents might unexpectedly happen, or thief can own
money without working. All of these issues would act as a precursor to a deteriorated society.
For example, a football fan used gun to murder a player of rival without reluctance just because
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Secondly, a set of strict punishments could prevent law breakers from repeating their crime or
mistake again. Particularly, given a severe punishment, those who broke the laws would be
conscious before acting. This means they were reformed successfully not to commit the crime
again, which gradually can better the civilization of society. For instance, if a robber is
sentenced for several years, when being released to normal life, he would be repentant and
start to be a good citizen in order not to live in prison for a long period of time.
In conclusion, due to the contributions provided above, I strongly place the emphasis on the
role of laws and rule in the public since it can remain a stable and civilized society on the whole.