Nama : Rizki Alfi Syahri

NPM : 201912500068
Kelas : R5A
No. WA : 0818-0803-1469

I. Please do an error analysis from both the texts below. Don’t forget the step-in doing
error
analysis.

My Family

1. I will tell you about my family consist1 of 5 members

2. Consists of 2 There are my mother, my biological 3 father, my first4 brother is a
boy 5, my second 6 sister is a girl7, and I am the first daughter in this family
3. My mother's name is Emily
4. She is a very8 great mother even though sometimes she’s 9 grumpy
5. She10 Has a round face and slightly chubby body, has11 long and12 curly black hair.
6. She13 Has round and black eyes
7. My mother always makes a14 very good food for us
8. My father's name is Ronald, he is a little bit15 older16 because he is 50 years old
9. He is a very strict but also17 loving father
10. Although he is a little bit18 older19 but he still works hard for us

1
Omission of verb
2
Misinformation of verb
3
Misinformation of adjective
4
Misinformation of adjective order
5
Misinformation of noun
6
Misinformation of adjective order
7
Misinformation of noun
8
Misinformation of adverb
9
Omission of pronoun
10
Omission of pronoun
11
Misinformation of auxiliary verb
12
Omission of conjunction
13
Omission of pronoun
14
Omission of indefinite article
15
Omission of noun
16
Omission of adjective
17
Omission of adverb
18
Omission of noun
19
Omission of adjective
 11. My father has slightly gray hair
12. His eyes were black and he was quite tall.
13. Next is my20 first brother and21 his22 is23 named is24 Fedrick
14. He is 17 years old and25 attending SMKN 1 grade 11
15. He has a stout and tall body, has26 black and straight hair, his skin is tan
16. He is a bit lazy and stubborn but he never disobeys an old man's27 parents’
orders
17. Then there is my youngest sister, her name is Gwen
18. Gwen is 12 years old
19. She has black and slightly curly hair, she is very beautiful with round eyes and
curly eyelashes
20. He28 She is diligent, quite smart, and good at singing
21. My family and I live in Cibinong
22. Because29 Cibinong is the most comfortable city for us, because30 the people are
friendly and I have many friends here
23. My family is not very warm but we still love each other31 and always support
each other in every condition.

20
.Omission of pronoun
21
Omission of conjunction
2222
Omission of possessive determiner
2323
Misordering of auxiliary verb
24
Omission of Adverb
2524
Omission of conjunction
2625
Misinformation of auxiliary verb
2725
Misinformation of adjective
2826
Misinformation of pronoun
2927
Misinformation of conjunction
3028
Omission of conjunction
3129
Misinformation of adverb
1. Tabel Umum Kesalahan

Total Kalimat Kalimat Yang Menyalahi Total Kesalahan

Kaidah

23 16 29

2. Tabel Khusus Kesalahan

Tabel Kesalahan Pada Determiner

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Struktur

Kesalahan

My mother always My mother always Omission of indefinite

makes a very good food makes a very good food article
for us for us

His is named is Fedrick His named is Fedrick Omission of possessive

determiner

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Noun

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Struktur

 Kesalahan

….my brother is a boy ….. …my brother… Misinformation of noun

… my sister is a girl ….my sister…. Misinformation of noun

….and I am the first ….and I am the first child Misinformation of noun

daughter in this family in

…even though …. even though Omission of pronoun

sometimes she’s grumpy sometimes she’s grumpy

She Has a round face and She has a round face and Omission of pronoun
slightly chubby body… slightly chubby body….

She Has round and black She has round and black Omission of pronoun
eyes…. eyes….

My father's name is My father’s name is Omission of noun

Ronald, he is a little bit Ronald, he is a little bit….
….

Although he is a little bit Although he is a little Omission of noun

……
bit…..

Next is my first brother…. Next is my first brother… Omission of pronoun

He She is diligent, quite She is diligent, quite Misinformation of

smart, and good at smart, and good at pronoun
singing singing

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Verb

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Struktur

Kesalahan

I will tell you about my I will tell you about my Omission of verb
family consist of 5 family consist of 5
members members
Consists of There are my There are my mother…. Misinformation of verb
mother….

Has long and curly black ….long and curly black Misinformation of
hair…. hair….. auxiliary verb

….. is named is Fedrick …..named is Fedrick Misordering of auxiliary

verb

He has a stout and tall He has a stout and tall Misinformation of

body, has black and body, black and straight auxiliary verb
straight hair…. hair….

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Adverb

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Struktur

Kesalahan

She is a very great She is a great mother Misinformation of

mother even though even though adverb
sometimes ….. sometimes….

He is a very strict but He is a very strictly but Omission of adverb

also loving father also loving father

My family is not very My family is not very Misinformation of

warm but we still love warm but we still love adverb
each other and always and always support each
other in every condition
support each other in
every condition.

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Adjective

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Struktur

 Kesalahan

….my biological father…. …..my father…. Misinformation of

adjective

….my first brother…. ….my brother… Misinformation of

adjective order

….my second sister…. ….my sister…. Misinformation of

adjective order

….he is a little bit older ….he is a little bit older Omission of adjective

Although he is a little bit Although he is a little bit Omission of adjective

older but he still works older but he still works
hard for us hard for us

He is a bit lazy and He is a bit lazy and Misinformation of

stubborn but he never stubborn but he never adjective
disobeys an old man's disobeys parents’ orders
parents’ orders

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Conjunction

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Struktur

Kesalahan

…..long and curly black …..long and curly black Omission of conjunction
hair. hair

He is 17 years old and He is 17 years old and Omission of conjunction

attending SMKN 1 grade attending SMKN 1 grade
11 11

Because Cibinong is the Cibinong is the most Misinformation of

most comfortable city comfortable city for us, conjunction
for us, the people are the people are friendly
friendly and I have many and I have many friends
 friends here here

Because the people are Because the people are Omission of conjunction
friendly and I have many friendly and I have many
friends here friends here

first brother and is first brother and is Omission of conjunction

named named

3. Tabel Akumulasi Kesalahan

No Jenis Kesalahan N S

1 Determiner 5 14,29
%

2 Noun 10 28,57
%

3 Verb 6 17,14
%

4 Adverb 3 8,57%

5 Adjective 6 17,14
%

6 Conjunction 5 14,29
%

Total 35 100
 4. Diagram Presentase Kesalahan

Kesalahan

Adverb
8,57%
Conjunction Noun
14,29% Noun 28,57% Verb
Adjective
Determiner Determiner
14,29% Conjunction
Adverb
Verb
Adjective 17,14%
17,14%

5. Tabel Akumulasi Kategorisasi Kesalahan

No Kategorisasi Kesalahan N S
1 Misinformation 14 46,67
2 Omission 15 50
3 Misordering 1 3,33
4 Addition 0 0
Total 30 100
6. Diagram Presentase Kategorisasi Kesalahan

Kategorisasi Kesalahan

Misordering 3.33%

Misinformation
Misinformation Omission
Omission 48% Misordering
48% Addition
II, My Hobby

1. I am32 going to tell33 you about my hobby, a lot of people say34 said I had35 have a
very weird hobby or interest , because I'm falling in love with automotive and
36
especially a car, because cars are the thing that37 I love the most, and my dream
car is a 38 Ferrari
2. Because39 Ferrari is everybody’s a40 dream car for 41everybody42, Because43 Ferrari
is a lovely expensive modern sports car which has a beautiful shape and had44 has
a very typical color , that is red which is very Italian sports car and everybody was
a ferrari fan
3. Maybe for most people, a45 cars46 is just a transportation that takes them from
one place to another, but47 for me the cars48 is an object that we must enjoyed
and in49 every trip I have to enjoy the taste of the car, whether it's a sports car or
an MPV car or whatever car you driven of, And also my hobby besides it is a50
Motorsport , or sports that use the engine to do it like a racing car
4. I know it's a dangerous sports, but I think51 it's very exciting, because I'm very
happy when I'm at high speed, feeling all the adrenaline and high concentration

32
Omission of verb to be
33
Ommision of verb
34
Misinformation of verb 2
35
Misinformation of verb 2
36
Misinformation of conjunction
37
Omission of demonstrative determiner
38
Omission of indefinite article
39
Misinformation of conjunction
40
Misinformation of indefinite articles
41
Misinformation of preposition
42
Misordering of pronoun
43
Omission of conjunction
44
Misinformation of auxiliary verb
45
Misinformation of indefinite article
46
Omission of plural noun
47
Omission of conjunction
48
Omission of plural noun
49
Omission of preposition
50
Omission of indefinite articles
51
Misinformation of verb
 to stabilize the car staying on track, battle with the others52 guy53 to be the
number one on the track or even the championship
5. But unfortunately my parents don't support my hobby, because they’re worry
about me , because54 racing car must be fast on track , and my mom was get55
really scared about that,

52
Omission of plural noun
53
Misinformation of noun
54
Misinformation of conjunction
55
Misinformation of verb
1. Tabel Umum Kesalahan

Total Kalimat Kalimat Yang Menyalahi Total Kesalahan

Kaidah
5 5 24

2. Tabel Khusus Kesalahan

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Verb

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Khusus Kesalahan

I am going to… I am going to…. Omission of verb to be

….tell you about my ….tell you about my Omission of verb

hobby… hobby….

…. a lot of people say said I ….a lot of people said i had Misinformation of verb 2
had a very weird hobby or a very weird hobby or
interest…. interest….

….which has a beautiful …which has a beautiful Misinformation of auxiliary

shape and had has a very shape and has a very verb
typical color…. typical color….

I know it's a dangerous I know it’s a dangerous Misinformation of verb

sports, but I think it's very sports, but it’s very
exciting…. exciting….

….and my mom was get ….and my mom was really Misinformation of verb
really scared about that… scared about that…

I had have a very weird I have a very weird hobby Misinformation of verb 2
hobby or interest or interest
 Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Determiner

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Khusus Kesalahan

….because cars are the ….because cars are the Omission of demonstrative
thing that I love the most… thing that I love te most… determiner

…and my dream car is a ….and my dream car is a Omission of indefinite

Ferrari Ferrari article

Ferrari is everybody’s a Ferrari is everybody’s Misinformation of

dream car…. dream car… indefinite article

Maybe for most people, a Maybe for most people, Misinformation of

cars cars…. indefinite article

And also my hobby besides And also my hobby besides Omission of indefinite
it is a Motorsport… it is a motorsport…. article

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Noun

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Khusus Kesalahan

Maybe for most people, Maybe for most people, Omission of plural noun
cars… cars……

….for me the cars is an …for me the cars is an Omission of plural noun

object that we must object that we must
enjoyed… enjoyed…

….high concentration to ….high concentration to Omission of plural noun

stabilize the car staying on stabilize the car staying on
track, battle with the track, battle with the
others… others…

…guy to be the number …to be the number one on Misinformation of noun

one on the track or even the track or even the
the championship…. championship….

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Pronoun

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Khusus Kesalahan

….Ferrari is everybody’s Ferrari is evrybody’s dream Misordering of pronoun

dream car everybody.... car….

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Conjunction

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Khusus Kesalahan

…. because I'm falling in …. because I'm falling in Misinformation of

love with automotive and love with automotive conjunction
especially a car…. especially a car…..

…..Because Ferrari is …Ferrari is everybody’s…. Misinformation of

everybody’s…. conjunction

Because Ferrari is a lovely Because Ferrari is a lovely Omission of conjunction

expensive modern sports expensive modern sports
car which has a beautiful car which has a beautiful
shape… shape….

…but for me the cars is an ….but for me the cars is an Omission of conjunction
object that we must object that we must
enjoyed….. enjoyed….

….because they’re worry …because they’re worry Misinformation of

about me , because racing about me , racing car must conjunction
car must be fast on track… be fast on track….

Tabel Untuk Kesalahan Pada Preposition

Kesalahan Rekonstruksi Kategori Khusus Kesalahan

Ferrari is everybody’s Ferrari is everybody’s Misinformation of

dream car for …. dream car….. preposition

….an object that we must …an object that we must Omission of preposition
enjoyed and in every trip…. enjoyed and in every trip…

3. Tabel Akumulasi Kesalahan

No Jenis Kesalahan N S
1 Verb 7 29,17%
2 Determine 5 20.83%
3 Noun 4 16.67%
4 Pronoun 1 4.17%
5 Conjunction 5 20.83%
6 Preposition 2 8.33%
Total 24 100
4. Tabel Presentasi Kesalahan

Kesalahan
4,17%
8.33%
29.17%

Verb
16.67% Determiner
Counjunction
Noun
Preposition
Pronoun

20.83%
20.83%

5. Tabel Akumulasi Kategorisasi Kesalahan

No Kategorisasi Kesalahan N S
1 Misinformation 12 50
2 Misordering 1 5
3 Omission 11 45
4 Addition 0 0
Total 24 100
6. Diagram Presentasi Kategorisasi Kesalahan

Kategorisasi Kesalahan

Misordering Misinformation
5%
Ommision
Misinformation Misordering
Ommision 50% Addition
45%