Renata S Journey To Self-Will Screenplay

Renata's Journey to Self-will Screenplay(TBC) 1.
Renata's Journey to Self-will

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Story and Written By

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1 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 1

Camera Pans across desk displaying a first draft of Renata's
comic Manga. The Camera moves showing off Japanese Anime
Models, Comics and some Samurai films. The Camera pauses over
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her Level 3 College results that display 'fail' with a sticky

note saying
"you could have done so much better if you wasn't focused on

this comic of yours. You let yourself down and it's time you
need to grow out of this"
The camera moves onto Renata as she fidgets in bed dreaming
2 EXT. FOREST - DREAM - NIGHT 2

CAMERA Pans through the forest in a POV angle. Whooshing as
its the camera floats through the trees
A Crackling laugh and demonic whispers echo through the
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The camera pans slowly from a close up of Renata's head
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moving left and right to a medium shot
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4 EXT. FOREST - DREAM - NIGHT 4

The camera Continues the POV shot moving past tress.
From a POV camera, moves passed tree leaves to reveal a drain
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tunnel.
EMILY (V.O.) - ECHO

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The camera still on Renata's shoulders continues to pan out
to a full shot. Renata's whole body laying on the bed moving
agitatedly. Renata mumbles and moans in her sleep.
6 INT. FOREST TUNNEL - DREAM - NIGHT 6

Close up of Bubbles, a red light gradually get brighter in
the water. A hand bursts out of the water. Then the other
hand comes out as if she’s pulling herself up from the water.
A close up of her hand using the water for a solid surface.
The camera looking down the tunnel as the figure moves from a
crouched position to a standing. The silhouette staggers

towards the camera. The Echo gets louder. (possible Red

eyes?)
EMILY (V.O.) - ECHO
Renata starts to panic. Close up of Renata's hand clenching

the bedsheets. Close up of sweat rolling off her forehead.
She mumbles
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8 EXT. FOREST TUNNEL - DREAM - NIGHT 8
CAMERA pans slowly towards the tunnel edge from the outside
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EMILY (V.O.) - ECHO
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Camera watching Renata struggling then Rack focus on Clock

Striking 12.
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10 EXT. FOREST TUNNEL - DREAM - NIGHT 10
CAMERA close up of her Hand SLAMING down clawing to the edge
of the Tunnel as Emily pulls herself out
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EMILY (O.S.) - GROWLING

just let me in!
Emily sounding desperate/demonic.
Renata wakes up screaming! Similar to a bad nightmare.

She takes deep breaths and sits up
RENATA
What the fuck
She rubs her face and holds her head in her hands

Renata looks over to her desk as spots a screwed up paper

ball.
RENATA
huh?
Renata stands up and walks towards the desk. She picks up the
paper ball and unravels it. Its her Exam results with big red
writing "Failure" across the page. A Close up of Renata's
face filling with anger as she screws up the paper and throws
it on the desk then clenching her hair
RENATA (MUMBLE)
Why am I so childish?
Renata looking at all her display
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RENATA (MUMBLE)
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Why do I like all this?
Ranata calms downs and removes her hands of her hair. POV of
Exam results placed normally on the desk with no writing.
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Renata looking confused
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RENATA(MUMBLE)
I need to go back to bed
She sits back down on the bed and glances over at her anime
models
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RENATA
It's cool, perhaps mum has a point.
She picks up a sketch of her comic character
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I thought I could finish you.
Renata places the sketch next to the modules and leans back
into bed with a sad smile looking remorseful.
a close up Renata eyes slowly close…
12 EXT. FOREST - NIGHT 12
Camera focuses on a contract pinned up on the tree. A fade of

warm light takes over the darkness as an Oil lantern
approaches the contract revealing A silhouette of a woman
wearing a MASK and KASA hat. She Rips of the contract and

holding it up so the camera can see it, then folds it like a

scroll and goes on her way (out of shot)
13 INT. BEDROOM - MORNING 13

Renata's Alarm goes off
Beep Beep Beep
RENATA
Huh?
Renata gets up looking tired and drained. She looks at her

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clock in an annoyed state.
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RENATA
Urgh. hate this job
Renata gets out of bed and starts to gets dressed in her

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uniform and quickly brushes her hair. She checks herself in
the mirror. Close up of the reflection in the mirror looking
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like a mess with last nights make-up, poorly done lipstick

and scruffy hair. The CAMERA pans (180') from the reflection
around her showing that she is the complete opposite, looking
Smart, Pretty and respectable.
RENATA (SAD)
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yea I look okay...
She looks down at the floor and looks back up
RENATA (SAD)
What a mess
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A whisper
INNER VOICE (EMILY)
Your so pathetic
She picks up her work bag and leaves the bedroom through the
door.
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14 EXT. FOREST PATH - AFTERNOON 14

Renata is walking down a forest footpath, her phone Ring its

her boss.
RENATA (GETS CUT OFF)

Morning...
BOSS
Tell me why I'm getting complaints
from people who are saying that the
toilets are fucking disgusting!?
Renata stops in her tracks, and starts worrying and shaking
RENATA (STUTTERING)
wha..um...what? I cleaned them
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BOSS
SIR! and it's always lies with you.
over and over again. I pay you to
clean the fucking shop. I hired you
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specially cause you failed your
college therefor no one will wants
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you. That means you belong to me.

you get that? (mockingly) do you
understand that? Your stuck with me
So you better step your game up
otherwise you will be gone. Then
you'll be on the streets! do I make
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myself clear?!
A close up of Renatas cheek, a tear drop forms and runs down

her face.
RENATA (CUTOFF)
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Sorry, um...I ..
BOSS
I didn't ask for your apology
Renata. I Asked do you understand
me!
Renata snakingly standing completely still in the middle of

the forest path.
Shot at 60FPS (Slow-motion) The camera starts to pan 360

around Renata heavy breathing is heard and mumbling voice
start
VOICE#1

No one wants you, You have failed

the first step!
VOICE#2
haha your such a baby. grow the fuck
up!
VOICE#3
Just forget about this thing: Japanese cartoons, Toy figures,
violent black and white sword films? What's WRONG WITH YOU
A close up of her tears falling down her face.

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VOICE#4
Can you just be normal. can you just
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fit in with our family?

VOICE#5
Stop with this comic character.
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focus on your life?
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A close up of tears drop hitting the floor.

all the voice merge into one .
VOICE#1
Can you do this , can you do that,
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you need to change, you need to...
The camera still going in slow motion, the voices get louder
and Renata cant cope,
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She hold her left hand up to her ears and the phone slips out
of her right hand. Both Renata and the phone fall to the
floor. Renata landing on her knees. (Low angle looking up at
them as they both make contact with the floor)
15 EXT. RENATAS MIND, FOREST - DAWN 15

Valda comes in from behind Renata holding an oil Lantern.
CAMERA shows off her equipment.
VALDA
Hey its okay...it's okay stand up.

Valda places her hand on Renata's Shoulder and places lantern

by her shoes and grabs hold of Renata's waist helps her up.
Renata looks hopeful
RENATA (DISBELIEF)
Your...Your Valda?
VALDA
Renata... there is a strong ora of
discouragement and withholding of
affection inside of you causing a
strong evil presences. Don't listen
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Renata looks confused, Valda kicks a log and dust flies off
it, she adjust her Armour and then cracks her knuckles making
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sure the gauntlets are secured, she pulls out a gun and looks
the right of her where Renata is standing
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RENATA
I...
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BOSS
Do you Understand me?
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VOICE#1
Why do you love all this childish
stuff
Valda checks chamber of the GUN and starts following where

the voices are coming from. Looking left and right
VALDA
Don't listen to them!, they don't
understand you. Its not childish.
its what you l...
A hand grabs hold of Valda's ankle, Valda looks down and gets
pulled down to the ground. Valda is then dragged into into
darkness.

The voice becomes Emily.

EMILY
Can you just be normal. can you just

fit in with our family
VOICE#2
Stop with this comic character.
focus on your life
RENATA
Shut up... Shut up!
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Everything goes dark.
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Renata wakes up from the day dream. She wipes her tears away
and hears her boss mumbling from her phone. With a small weak
stagger she bends down to pick up the phone
BOSS
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Renata Do you understand me?
hello...
RENATA
I...I understand sir
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As Renata stands up straight a figure in the distance is

behind her shoulder. The phones starts to distorts
RENATA
Hello?...Hello...
PHONE(EMILY-DEMONIC)
I'm coming for you
Beep Beep Beep
The phone cuts off
Renata panicking, she tries to call back. The phone rings for
a second and then cuts off displaying No Caller ID

A message comes through from an unknown number
PHONE
Your fired
PHONE
Embarrassing to the family name
Renata gets bombarded with hateful messages
POV of Renata holding her phone trying to fix whatever the
problem is. The phone battery runs out.
RENATA
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For FUCK SAKE! why is this happening
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She turns around and the makes contact to the waist of this
figure. It's figure from the dream
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RENATA
oh...sorry
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The shape smacks the phone out of her hand

RENATA (SHOCKED)
HEY!
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Renata tries to push Emily but immediately bounces of her
causing her to stumble next to a tree.
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Woah
Emily grabs hold of Renata's hair and SLAMS her right side of
her face into the tree trunk causing a split eye brow and
cuts down the side of her face, Emily kicks her in the back
causing her to fall SMASHING her right kneecap on a rock
RENATA
Aurgh!
Renata mumbles in pain, she looks up Emily is gone but she is
inside her head for good. The voices start to come back but
worse.
INNER VOICE (EMILY)

You liked that? It what you deserve
being such a disappointment you

are... always lies always excuses
Renata on floor starts crying. she crawls toward her phone as

blood drips down her face.
INNER VOICE (EMILY)
You have nothing to live for. lets
end this
She reaches out and grabs the phone and stands up barely
using her hurt knee, there is slight rip in her trouser leg
and blood is pouring out from her ankle.
Renata still traumatized of what just happened, she starts
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crying and the voices have come back but hard to understand
what they are saying. Renata holds her face and limps home.
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17 EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE - AFTERNOON 17
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She hobbles down a path and looks up at the house. She holds
the rails and walks up the stairs leading to her house
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18 INT. HOUSE, HALLWAY,LIVINGROOM AND KICHEN - AFTERNOON 18
She stumbles in the hallway calling for her Mother,

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Mum!..Mum (Breaks down) I'll change
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She hobbles into the living room looking around.
RENATA
I'll Change for everyone
INNER VOICE(EMILY)
Good...good??
She walks in pain towards the kitchen with silently

struggling
RENATA
I promise!

She looks over her shoulder the camera pans across the
kitchen side revealing a knife block
INNER VOICE(EMILY)
Lets finish this, I can hear your
thoughts and it's interesting how
each victim retreats to suicide.
RENATA
Get out of my head!
INNER VOICE(EMILY)
OH? Still have some fight in you
after all who have let you down, mmm
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lets try this
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She shuts her eyes stopping her right hand reaching out for
the knife
VOICE#1
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Your such a weirdo for liking this?
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VOICE#2
A bit childish isn't it. Cartoon
characters and sword films
VOICE#3
Your an embarrassment to the family
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with all this stuff
VOICE#4
I should your cousins your room they
laughed at it. You need to grow up
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VOICE#1
Renata I can't pass you on this
course. The Exam board and I only
see fantasy work. This does not meet
the criteria.
VOICE#2
Your a good artist so put it to
something useful instead of this
ambition of yours
19 INT. WHITE BATHROOM VISION - NIGHT 19
Renata dressed as a 'fangirl' with posters, artwork and

models on the floor. There is blood running down the white

tiles, a puddle expanding from a blurred object, the camera

gets close to the blood and pans out revealing the object was
Renata's Wrist slashed open. The camera then pans away from
her dead body showing a kitchen knife dripping with blood,
and it keeps panning out more and more of the knife is shown
and then Renata's Hand holding it. She's wearing all
black/Red.
There is a crackling laugh(Emily)
EMILY - GROWLING
At least no one can change you now.
RENATA
They will finally appreciate me

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20 INT. BEDROOM - AFTERNOON 20
Renata storms into her bedroom with a black dustbin bag and a
kitchen knife, Shouting and screaming
RENATA
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you want me to change?
Renata starts ripping the posters of the walls
INNER VOICE(RENATA)
No... what am i doing?
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She slams the ripped paper into a the black bin bag. she
looks over at the module
INNER VOICE(RENATA)
Noooo!
She picks up the figures and looks at them, she starts crying
RENATA
You want me to fucking Change...Fine
She slams the figure into the bin and then doing the same to
the others.
Renata picks up her Asian films and slams them into the bin.
She falls on the bed looking exhausted.

RENATA
You want to carve me?
She looks down and places the knife on to her right arm
RENATA
You want to shape me into what you
want me to be?
INNER VOICE(RENATA)
NO! Don't do it..
She presses the knife hard on her wrist causing a drop of

blood. Renata reacts in pain and tears form.
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RENATA
Wonder if they will miss me?
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EMILY - GROWLING
Do it!
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She raises her arm in the air for commitment shaking the
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knife. Strikes down The Camera becomes slow motion, a close

up of Renata's eye turning to the left and seeing her comic
book.
INNER VOICE(RENATA)
I thought I could finish you.
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Renata's Face changes from SHOCKED/RELIEF

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21 EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE - DAY 21
(Dream like) Renata walking down a path looking sad. head

facing the floor, a faint argument is coming from the house.
DAD
I have no idea where she has got
this from. Its fucking embarrassing
MUM
I cant control what she likes? why
are you taking it out on me? Do you
think I approve of this?
Renata looks over and sees them arguing through the window,
she looks down at the floor and continues to walk.

She gets to the front door and sees a parcel on the floor.
Camera Pans in on address. Its for her. Her sadness face
turns happy. She runs up stairs into her bedroom she rips
opens the parcel.
RENATA
Oh my goodness, I forgot I ordered
this.
Its a module of her favourite anime ( its the figure she
broke)
She picks it up and places it on her desk/shelf
RENATA
aww this is soo cool! you can live
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her excitement cant expressed, she picks up the module again

to have another look.
The module starts to age and starts cracking into pieces. A
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close up of Renata's face with her mouth open
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RENATA-ECHO
Noooo!

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transitions in Renata's face goes to ANGER
The camera follows the knife.
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23 EXT. FOREST, RENATAS MIND - DAWN 23
Valda comes to investigate the location of Emily, she's
holding an Oil Lantern for light she hears laughing all
around her.
EMILY
Hello Valda... thought you'd come
sooner.
Valda does not speak, she gently puts down the oil lantern
next to a tree.
EMILY
(tauntingly) Can you salvage her
after what I have done?, the amount
of pain I have caused within her
mind. I have subjugated over 10,000

lives. All of them deserved it.

Humanity thrives on its own sin.
Life is a journey to suicide. Life
is depression. This girl is gone,
and she is mine (shouting) LEAVE!
The voice echo's around Valda she circles her head trying to
pin point the origin, until its behind her, Valda turns
quickly and sees a figure standing there.
VALDA
(Defensive) I Will not leave! She
has her entire life in front of her.
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Valda stands with commitment she takes her Colt 1911 out of
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the holster
EMILY
The weak ones never forget, she wont
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move on, she will suffer. I have
already won.
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VALDA
Let's get this over with
Valda flick the safety of her gun CLICK she aims skilfully
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BANG she shoots while walking towards Emily. She dodges Four
bullets but one scratches her right cheek and smiles, she
continues to walk towards Valda.
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BANG Valda manages to hit Emily twice one in her Shoulder and
the other in the leg to to slow her down, Green blood pours
out of Emily as she falls on to the floor.
EMILY
Augh... You slut!
She then Crawls really fast on all fours in a demonic way,
Valda shoots the last two bullets in her back which stumbles
Emily slightly.
Valda ejects the magazine and reaches for a new clip. She
loads the magazine in the gun whilst Emily gets up in fast-
forward motion drawing her kitchen knife. Valda stops the
motion of kitchen knife by grabbing hold of Emily's left
wrist. Valda quickly cocks the gun and tries to shoot Emily.

Emily pulls Valda's arm away causing the gun to fire 3 times
in the air.
BANG BANG BANG!
Valda still stopping the Kitchen stabbing into her shoulder.
Valda uses her strength to snatch her wrist out of Emily's
hand, then smashes the gun across Emily's cheek with the
barrel.
With a quick draw reaction Valda fires all four bullets into
gut, the gun runs out and smoke pour out of the chamber due
to rapidly firing.
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EMILY
Urgh!...
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Emily SMASHES the gun from Valda's Hands, the gun flies
across the battlefield. Claws form on Emily's left finger
tips and then SLASHES across Valda's right side of her face
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causing her mask to fly off and her left arm gives in
slightly and the knife gets closer to her shoulder blade.
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Valda punches Emily's cheek causing a bruise to form but

Emily hardly flinches. Emily pushes Valda's face with force
causing her nose to brake, her lip to be split and her hat to
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fly off behind her. Valda's head reacting to the attack
causes the knife go into her shoulder
As blood pour from the left side of her nose she looks over
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to see how deep the blade went in
Emily pulls her head back revealing fangs and bites right
side of Valda's neck. Blood pours down into her breasts
staining the white top.
With slight movement in her left arm Valda uses her right arm
to RIP off Emily's ear to get her off.
EMILY
URGH!, YOU F....
Valda clenches her fist and uppercut Emily's Chin stopping
her from talking.
Emily's teeth explode green blood goes everywhere, Valda then
hits Emily in the Ribs causing her feet to be lifted offthe
ground.

Valda grabs the back Emily's hair and smashes her face into
her knee CRACK as her nose breaks. Emily is stunned, for the
final blow Valda manages to clenches her left hand smashes
Emily to the floor, (whilst battle crying)
Valda drops to her knees in pain while holding her neck, her
left arm stiffening up, she looks at the floor as blood pours
out every where, she removes her hand from her neck and see a
puddle of blood in her palm.(First Person)
Emily is wheezing with every breath she takes as her ribs are
broken.
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EMILY
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I will fucking END YOU ( growl).

Emily starts to run and jumps to finish of Valda with a kick
to the head.
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The Warrior clenches her teeth
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EMILY
Aurgh!
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Valda dives for the floor knowing that her strength isn't at
full protentional, Emily Rolls on the floor, shocked but
mocking way seeing such coward-ness.
EMILY
YOU COWARD...Giving up? haha
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Valda raises intimidatingly

VALDA
I'm not finished with you, not while
you still draw breath
She draws her sword (close up of sword coming out of the
Koshirae)
Emily laughs as blood comes out of her mouth, the fight
majority of it is Emily defending herself with swords, until
a a sneaky low attack, Valda slices Emily's kneecap pulling
up to her thigh causing blood to pump out and rips start to
form on her outfit, blood is coming down her leg, Valda looks
up at Emily in shock as shed hoped Emily would fall but she
doesn't

Emily rises her sword and SMASHES down causing the warrior to
pull the sword out quick and block the attack, by doing so
she falls to her knees, Emily staggers forward with little
movement in her leg to repeat the attack again but is blocked
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The knife reaches Renata's wrist and starts slicing slowly, a

small amount of blood drips out
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Valda stands up to SLICE through the waist of Emily. Green

blood explodes
VALDA
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How can that be?
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EMILY
She's giving in to me, she will be
mine
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Valda's sword is JAMMED inside Emily's waist, She tries to
SAW it back and fourth but has to abandon it quickly as Emily
comes down for the killing blow. Valda uses her gauntlets to
protect her mainly using her right arm
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Each attack becoming more and more powerful, then suddenly

Valda's weak arm could help no more, she was left with one
gauntlet, Valda drops her left knee due to exhaustion, then
with one blow the sword slides of her gauntlet SLICING
through her thigh and into her calf pinning her down.
VALDA
URGH!!!
Valda's right arms drop to the floor beside her as she looks
up to Emily mercifully . Emily pulls the sword out from Valda
and then hits her left eye with the Tsuka (handle)causing it
to be bruised and a mouthful of blood as she drops to the
left.
EMILY
HAHAHAHA Told you I'll fucking Win

Emily Laughs and pulls out Valda's sword from her waist using
her left hand, she throws it to the left of Valda. Valda
follows the sword and starts to crawls towards it with
Emily's sword jammed through her thigh and calf.
Valda gets into reach of the sword and then Emily jumps on
Valda (Spider Style) her right boot pinning her right arm
down, as her wounded leg goes across Valda's waist.
Emily grabs her sword which transforms into a kitchen knife.

She then starts looking at Valda's left Arm examining at the
battled damaged gauntlet trying to find an opening for her to
SLIT Valda's Wrist.
Emily finds an opening and smile, as she places the blade on
her wrist and starts to cut
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Close up of the knife cutting more into Renata's wrist, blood
is dripping. in the background is a muffled Theme song from a
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samurai movie
27 EXT. RENATAS MIND, FOREST - NIGHT 27
Close up of Renata's face panicking...

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VALDA (STRUGGLING)
Urgh Nooo! Think about You and Amy!
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The phone starts ringing on the side of the desk. it displays
Amy and her photo comes up.
Renata's concentration stops on the knife and looks towards
the phone with relief.
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29 EXT. RENATA’S MIND, FOREST - NIGHT 29

VALDA - POWERFUL
Urgh!

Valda headbutts Emily. Breaking Emily's nose even more.

Allowing her right arm to be freed, Two black eyes form and
green blood BURSTS everywhere on Valda's Face
EMILY
UGHHH..
Valda Smirks with blood in her mouth
EMILY
You think that funny?
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Emily brings her knife to Valda's right eye, she defends it
just in time by holding Emily wrist. Valda looks over to the
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right and sees her sword in reach. She looks back at the
knife and it's almost touching her pupil.
PHONE (V.O)
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Hey Renata hope your day off is going great. They really
loved my audition.
Valda tires to throw a punch with her left arm but can't.
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With no other way Valda allows the knife into her eye
EMILY
grunts
Valda reaches across to wield her sword and grabs it while in
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pain she stabs Emily through her gut while letting go.
EMILY
Cough cough
Emily's blood pours on Valda's face, Emily tries to pull
herself up but is held down with Valda's right hand across
her destroyed ear. with a one movement Valda's left arm grabs
her Emily left side of her head and both of Valda's thumbs
press in Emily's eye sockets, Green blood pops all over the
place
EMILY
YOU CU cough cough
Emily pulls back blinding walking around Valda takes the
knife out of her eye socket

VALDA
Arugh
Valda pulls out the knife in her eye and rolls over and
crawls on the floor with little movement in her left arm and
leg causing them both to be dragged, blood pours from her
eye, a trial of blood is forming as she is pulling herself
along. She eventually get to her gun, and places the knife
down she picks up the Colt 1911 and ejects the mag shaking
badly, she loads the gun only using her right arm and then
then continues to hold it
Valda takes her hand and places it over the Kitchen Knife
turning it into a Tanto Sword, then pulls herself up using a
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nearby tree trunk. She looks over and sees Emily staggering
around blindly with her arms stretched out.
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Emily starts to hobble faster and faster as she seems to be

going crazy making demonic sounds. She holster the Tanto
Sword and hops towards Emily.
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Valda limps closer to Emily with her shaking hand she aims
the Colt 1911.
EMILY
ARUGH
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She aim for both Emily's kneecaps and Shoots with smirk BANG
Emily drops to her knees Valda staggers around Emily to face
her, She wraps her wounded arm around Emily's neck then jams
the Colt to Emily's chest smashing through her rib cage, till
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the end of the barrel is inchs away from Emily's Heart.
VALDA (IN EMILY'S EAR)

You Lost
BANG blood squirts out and Emily falls on her back, Valda
places the gun into its place, Valda falls on Emily's body
and draws the Tanto to start sawing Emily's head.
The head comes loose from the body Valda holsters her Tanto
and uses her sword that still inside Emily's gut to help her
self stand while keeping hold of the head.
Valda shoves the head in a netted pouch and attaches it to

her belt.
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30 INT/EXT. STORY REWIND - DAY 30

Before going into the bedroom scene a montage of small clips
are played revealing Emily wasn't there in person. Renata was
doing in herself, such as headbutting the tree imagining the
letter from her mum and texts.
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Renata still holding the knife to her wrist, stands up in

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shock and drops the knife (Drops in slow motion) , The
credits is playing from the Black and White film, the clock
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display 12 o'clock at night. She hold her head in pain

happens, she lays back and passes out on the bed.
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32 INT. BEDROOM - SUNRISE 32
Its the first day of Summer. She wakes up and goes over to
her phone and sends a message to Amy
RENATA-PHONE
Hey, how about coffee, just me and
you? x
She Replies
AMY-PHONE
Yeah! I'd love too, been waiting for you to ask for years lol
x how about I cook for you? Dinner and after Netflix? <3 xx

33 EXT. RENATAS MIND, FOREST - DAY 33

Velda is sat on a blanket next to a tree branch, she has a
bandage over her right eye, right leg and her arm. She opens
up an envelop with the bounty poster of Emily with Claimed
printed over the portrait.
Valda then tips the envelop and the coins fall onto her hand
with another contract. She opens the contract its another
bounty. Valda stands up shaking, she stumbles away.
THE END
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Renata's Journey to Self-will Screenplay(TBC) 1.

Renata's Journey to Self-will

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1 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 1

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her Level 3 College results that display 'fail' with a sticky

"you could have done so much better if you wasn't focused on

2 EXT. FOREST - DREAM - NIGHT 2

3 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 3

4 EXT. FOREST - DREAM - NIGHT 4

EMILY (V.O.) - ECHO

5 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 5

6 INT. FOREST TUNNEL - DREAM - NIGHT 6

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towards the camera. The Echo gets louder. (possible Red

EMILY (V.O.) - ECHO

7 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 7

Renata starts to panic. Close up of Renata's hand clenching

8 EXT. FOREST TUNNEL - DREAM - NIGHT 8

9 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 9

Camera watching Renata struggling then Rack focus on Clock

EMILY (O.S.) - GROWLING

Emily sounding desperate/demonic.

11 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 11

Renata wakes up screaming! Similar to a bad nightmare.

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Renata looks over to her desk as spots a screwed up paper

Why do I like all this?

She picks up a sketch of her comic character

a close up Renata eyes slowly close…

12 EXT. FOREST - NIGHT 12

Camera focuses on a contract pinned up on the tree. A fade of

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holding it up so the camera can see it, then folds it like a

13 INT. BEDROOM - MORNING 13

Beep Beep Beep

Renata gets up looking tired and drained. She looks at her

Renata gets out of bed and starts to gets dressed in her

like a mess with last nights make-up, poorly done lipstick

She looks down at the floor and looks back up

INNER VOICE (EMILY)

14 EXT. FOREST PATH - AFTERNOON 14

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Renata is walking down a forest footpath, her phone Ring its

RENATA (GETS CUT OFF)

Renata stops in her tracks, and starts worrying and shaking

you. That means you belong to me.

A close up of Renatas cheek, a tear drop forms and runs down

Renata snakingly standing completely still in the middle of

Shot at 60FPS (Slow-motion) The camera starts to pan 360

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No one wants you, You have failed

A close up of her tears falling down her face.

fit in with our family?

A close up of tears drop hitting the floor.

15 EXT. RENATAS MIND, FOREST - DAWN 15

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Valda places her hand on Renata's Shoulder and places lantern

Valda checks chamber of the GUN and starts following where

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The voice becomes Emily.

Can you just be normal. can you just

Everything goes dark.