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Khiêm - S A Task 1
Khiêm - S A Task 1
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by YLE Englishforkids
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The bar chart illustrates the numbers of men and women who come to an adult
education centre in the evening in the year 2009. At a glance, we can see that
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most people choose to come to the language course. As you know, language is a
subject with lots of appeal to everyone. The sculpture is a subject that has a
minor vote for both. Men choose painting a lot, and they choose sculpture less.
The majority of women liked the language, and 40% of women chose it. Just
like men, the sculpture is the lowest chosen.
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The pie chart shows us the ages of these course participants. People who are
fty years old or older account for 42%, and people under twenty account for
5%.
To sum up, the disparity between the choice of subjects and the percentage of
people in the age group is still high.