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1 3 WHY SOLDIERS FINE IT DIFFICULT FINE IT => FIND IT

TO COME HOME FROM WAR
2 7 At the bottom of that pile of modern woes lack of real intimacy =>
lies the emotional isolation that causes it of real intimacy/ the lack
all, the lack of love, lack of real intimacy of real intimacy
with others, the lack of freedom to express
how we really feel, the necessity of
repressing our real desires.
3 9 According to the Law of Life, the behaviors of thus optimize => thus
individuals in Nature will always be the ones optimizing
that minimize pain, thus optimize the
likelihood that their species will flourish.
4 11 Suicide and domestic violence are not the Problem => problems
problem. Both are symptoms. For every
sui-
5 12 It can never get high on life, no matter how no matter how nice the
nice the cage. cage => no matter how
nice the cage is
6 15 All the other animals kept their investment in in natural order => in the
natural order natural order
7 16 Among both animals and humans, our in some cases desires
spiritual obligations to each other spring more powerful than an
from powerful desires—in some cases individual’s will to live.
desires more powerful than an individual’s => which, in some cases,
will to live. are more powerful than
an individual’s will to
live.
8 18 But, as subjects of legal obligations, we a spiritual dishonesty =>
have manifest reasons to pretend love—a the spiritual dishonesty
spiritual dishonesty that results in a lot of
human suffering.
9 24 As feeling beings, humans are suffering As feeling beings => As
emotionally from the regimentation that emotional creatures
defines modern life
10 27 His sacrifice demonstrates the mindlessness the populace which
that insti-tutional subjugation imposes on demands it => the
all civilized people—from the leaders who populace who demands it
order the killing, to the populace which
demands it, to the soldiers who are duty duty bound => duty-
bound to carry it out. bound
11 27 It’s my view that our spiritual awakening, thus understand the need
our salvation, our happiness, and our to => thus understanding
 species’ ability to get back on track rest on the need to
one thing— that we recognize the centrality
of feelings in human existence, thus
understand the need to surrender our
designs on the future.
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