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write about an interview and then to turn that interview into an audio essay. Together with in-
class activities such as peer review meetings, these projects are experiential learning
opportunities that will help you achieve our goals enumerated in the course’s “Learning Goals”
below.
College Writing I can be a demanding course. However, if you participate in each class
and do your best work on each assignment, you will pass. Once passed, you will have satisfied a
Kent Core requirement and be on your way to College Writing II.
Texts and Materials
The readings for this course can be accessed for free by clicking on the hyperlinks in the
course calendar. You will read from:
• Student Guide to College Writing I & II
• Writing Spaces, various authors
o Volume 1
o Volume 2
o Volume 3
o Volume 4
• Purdue Online Writing Lab
Any other course materials, including assignment guidelines, will be available on Canvas.
In addition to reading announcements on Canvas, check your email. You are also encouraged to
log into your free Microsoft 365 account using your student login.
Talk with me if you run into problems securing reliable internet.
Minimal Course Requirements
Students must compose a substantial amount and variety of work in order to demonstrate
that they have met the learning outcomes below. Learning to write and writing to learn are often
discrete activities, but both should be part of the writing class. To that end, students in the first
writing class will:
1. Compose a variety of texts with opportunities to consider and clarify their ideas in light
of response from others, including teachers and peers.
2. Produce at least 5000 words of text that has been thoughtfully revised and copyedited to
meet the expectations of particular rhetorical situations. Multimodal texts may be
included as part of the overall body of work students produce in the course.
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E. Develop a clear line of reasoning and recognize how incorporating ideas and evidence
from sources can strengthen their work.
III. Knowledge of Composing Processes
Students will work individually and collaboratively to hone their revising and editing
skills. By the end of their first writing course, students should be able to:
A. Recognize that writing is a flexible, recursive process that typically involves a series of
activities, including generating ideas and text, drafting, revising, and editing.
B. Use electronic environments to support writing tasks such as drafting, reviewing,
revising, editing, and exploring texts.
C. Discover and reconsider ideas through drafting, reviewing, and revising.
D. Recognize the difference between revising and editing and understand why both
processes are critical.
E. Understand that writing is often collaborative and social. To demonstrate that
understanding, students should be able to
F. Work with others to improve their own and others' texts.
G. Balance the advantages of relying on others with taking responsibility for their own
work. Apply this understanding and recognition to make global and local revisions.
IV. Knowledge of Conventions
Students will study genre conventions and apply appropriate conventions to their own
work. By the end of their first writing course, students should be able to:
A. Recognize the genre conventions for structure, paragraphing, tone, and mechanics
employed in various rhetorical contexts.
B. Use syntax, grammar, punctuation, and spelling appropriate to particular rhetorical
situations.
C. Select and employ appropriate conventions for structure, paragraphing, mechanics,
format, and design.
D. Acknowledge the work of others and use a standard documentation format as needed.
How Stuff is Graded: What is Labor-Centered Grading?
Think about how your writing has been graded before. Grading in traditional writing
classes, inside and out of college, have often been what is called “product-centered.” Product-
centered grading assigns grades only on the teacher’s judgement of your final submission’s
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quality. For example, I once had a professor—Professor F—who would subtract 5 points for
every linguistic error (such as beginning my sentences with a conjunction). But I and my peers
were human and new to writing essays. What good do you think such unrealistic standards of
quality did us? Do you think they made us better writers or better spellcheckers?
What Professor F failed to see in his grading was the work, the energy, the labor that
went into those final essays. Writing takes time. In college, it can really take a lot of time. Like
in any job, one’s labor needs to be compensated for as much as the final product one makes.
Therefore, I’ve done my best this semester to design grading criteria that rewards labor.
In short: you can earn a passing grade by completing all of the labor asked of you. You can then
earn higher grades by meeting more than half of your assignment expectations and by doing
other helpful labor throughout the semester.
There are five projects you will complete in this course. You cannot pass the course
without completing each project. These include:
• Literacy narrative
• 3-4 pages (total > 1,500 words)
• Write a narrative detailing an event(s) that contributes to the writer/reader
you are today.
• Analysis of an online discourse community
• 3-4 pages (total > 1,500 words)
• Reading responses
• Total > 250 words each
• For most assigned readings, you will write a response to a few questions
provided by me. You will submit the responses on Canvas by 1 hour
before the start of class. Reading responses can be turned in before but are
not accepted after this time.
2. Doing Substantial Revisions to Create Drafts that Meet at Least Half Expectations
An instructor cannot watch you labor through your writing. Therefore, I must make an
inference based on the quality of your work. It’s important to me that with each assignment, you
are doing the work of considering and reconsidering the guidelines. Further, it’s important to me
that you are using peer and instructor feedback. Therefore, here are the ways you can earn
passing points on your drafts:
• First draft: Your first draft meets the minimal word count and is itself evidence that you
tried meeting expectations.
• Second draft: Your second draft (1) meets at least half of expectations and (2) shows
substantial revision that takes into account feedback on the first draft (when making a
grade on this, I always compare your revisions to the peer review documents you’ve
received). A second draft too similar to the first is returned for revision without a grade.
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• Importantly: If your second draft fails to meet half of the expectations enumerated
in your Project Guidelines document, you will earn at most 50% (failing) on your
final project grade, unless you revise for a third draft.
• Third draft: If your second draft does not meet enough expectations, you can try again for
a third draft to earn most to full credit. In these cases, the second draft will be returned
with its projected final grade, encouragement to keep trying, and a resource (such as a
meeting with me).
• You can turn in a third draft on two conditions: (1) you submitted a second draft
that was substantially revised from the first draft (which you turned in on time for
peer review) and (2) your third draft is fully revised from your second,
demonstrating attention to feedback.
• Students who did not turn in a first draft cannot turn in a third draft.
• Third drafts are due a week after the second draft is returned to you.
• Projects due during finals season are not eligible for third drafts.
3. Attending Class
You agree to participate in, as best you can that day, at least 28/30 of our scheduled class
meetings. Meeting these requirements for at least 28/30 meetings results in no points deducted.
This is in line with Kent State’s policy 3-01.2 which requires regular attendance.
Each unexcused absence beyond the second results in a deduction of 200 points—a letter
grade’s worth—from your final tally. Thus, it’s very possible you’ll fail the course if you miss
more than two weeks’ worth of class meetings without university-approved excuses.
To compose successfully, you must learn from your peers and in turn contribute to their
learning. Thus, you must participate in class, conducting peer review, Socratic Seminars,
workshops, or other discussion formats.
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There are a few key parts of peer review that you have to complete to earn points in this
area towards your final project grade. These steps build on each other, so if you miss one, you
will not receive credit for peer review. The steps include:
The labor you put into collaborating with your peers contributes to a passing grade on
projects.
In addition to doing the required labor on projects, you can earn points towards your final
course grade by:
is returned and writes a significantly revised paper may earn 40 additional points
towards their final course grade. This is in addition to the increased final grade the
student earns towards their project grade.
• Student-proposed x points
o I encourage students to propose to me extra labor and negotiate the labor’s point
values. Any proposed labor must be agreed upon by week 8. After we agree, I will
make an announcement on Canvas so that every student can complete the labor.
Points will be continually tallied throughout the semester in the Grades section on Canvas.
The total value of projects adds up to 900/1,000, or an A. This decision was made to encourage
students to experience collaborative “other” labor, such as tutoring and meeting your groups. A
breakdown of where points come from and how they add up:
Self-Assessment 150
1,000
We will be using the +/- grading scale to describe intermediate levels of performance
between a maximum of A and a minimum of F.
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Grading Policies
All of the labor you complete for this course directly impacts the learning of your peers;
we rely on one another to learn in this class. It is expected that every piece of writing you do is
turned in on time so that your peers may benefit from workshopping it.
Submitting drafts up to 24 hours after the initial due time results in a letter grade
deducted from the final project grade. For up to 48 hours after the initial due time, submitting
results in the deduction of two letter grades.
Drafts submitted 48 hours after the deadline are considered missed and may not be
submitted for credit.
In most cases, excused absences in class do not warrant any extensions of project
deadlines. For example, you are still expected to submit peer review responses if you miss class
during a peer review meeting (unless you talk with me about why this may not be possible given
your circumstances).
Gimme
Students will have one “gimme” that they can apply to their points total in consultation
with me. Our primary concern will be to make fair and equitable arrangements that still meet the
university’s regulations on attendance, conduct, and workload. A gimmie is not an “out clause”
for anyone who happens to not fulfill obligations in some way; it is for rare and unusual
circumstances out of the control of the student. Talk with me to figure out ways you might want
to apply your gimme, keeping in mind I must document the gimme and its use in the gradebook.
Here are three (but not all possible) options:
• One project may be turned in up to 48 hours late without any points deducted.
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the entire course. Repeat offenses result in dismissal from the University. University guidelines
require that all infractions be reported to the Student Conduct Officer on our campus.
“Plagiarize” means to take and present as one's own a material portion of the ideas or
words of another without full and proper credit to the source of the ideas, words, or work.
Plagiarism includes, but is not limited to:
• Copying words, sentences, and paragraphs directly from the work of another
without proper credit.
• Copying illustrations, figures, photographs, drawings, models, or other visual
and nonverbal material of another without proper credit.
• Presenting work prepared by another in final or draft form as one’s own
without citing the source, such as the use of purchased papers.
Plagiarism is different from misuse of sources, which is when a writer does not properly
cite a source, misuses quotations, includes too much of an original source in a paraphrase or
summary, or commits similar unintentional violations of academic protocol. If you misuse
sources, we will work together on appropriately incorporating and/or citing the sources. Note
that some audiences/instructors will consider misuse of sources to be plagiarism; for this reason,
it is extremely important for you to identify the conventions associated with source use and
citations in any class (or writing situation). More information can also be found at: Plagiarism >
Information for Students.
Registration Requirement
The official registration deadline for this course is week two and can be found under
Calendars and Deadlines on the University Registrar webpage. University policy requires all
students to be officially registered in each class they are attending. Students who are not
officially registered for a course by published deadlines should not be attending classes and will
not receive credit or a grade for the course. Each student must confirm enrollment by checking
their class schedule (using Student Tools in FlashLine) prior to the deadline indicated.
Registration errors must be corrected prior to the deadline.
Class Cancellations, Snow Days, and Other University Closings
In the case of an emergency, weather-related or otherwise, please check the Kent State
website for information on class cancelations and/or campus closings. Students may also
subscribe to Flash ALERTS, Kent State’s official emergency text notification system to alert
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subscribers of critical information no matter what time it is or where they are in the world. Flash
ALERTS expands the university's ability to send critical news and information to the university
community during campus emergencies. Students may sign up for Flash ALERTS online.
Student Accessibility Services
University policy 3342-3-01.3 requires that students with disabilities be provided
reasonable accommodations to ensure their equal access to course content. If you have a
documented disability and require accommodations, please contact me at the beginning of the
semester to make arrangements for necessary classroom adjustments. Please note, you must first
verify your eligibility for these through Student Accessibility Services. Visit the Student
Accessibility Services (SAS) website for more information. Talk with me if you need help
connecting with (SAS).
Mental Health Resources and Mandated Reporting
If you are in need of mental health assistance, please know that the University provides
several resources. Step Up & Speak Out is a suicide prevention campaign with one of the most
comprehensive lists of resources available for students, including campus-specific information.
You can also find a list of resources, including domestic violence at Mental Health Help. Kent
State also offers Psychological Services, including teletherapy. If you are struggling with
housing and basic care needs, consider contacting the Ohio Homeless Shelter
Directory or the Kent State Women’s Center.
Although I am one of your many resources here at Kent, I must report to the University
any communications (including your essays) that indicate (1) intent to harm yourself and/or
others, (2) mentions of sexual assault, (3) or might otherwise suggest you or others are presently
in danger. If these points are relevant for you, please visit the appropriate resource above and do
not include details of them in your College Writing assignments. I will be happy to help you
connect with those resources but be aware of my obligation as a mandated reporter.
Writing Commons
The Writing Commons is a free service to help students become stronger writers. They
are a place for students to talk with outside readers about their work, both early on when they are
still generating and considering ideas, as well as later during the drafting and revising stages.
They have a staff of peer tutors who are specially trained to help students identify their writing
needs and to offer insight, feedback, and support. You can visit for help with developing your
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ideas or focusing your essay. This service, however, is not for editing. Please do not ask a tutor
to proofread your essay. However, you can ask for help with introductions, conclusions,
transitions, clarity, etc.
Withdrawal Deadline
If you are considering withdrawing from this course, please consult with your advisor.
Withdrawal from a course can affect financial aid, student status, or progress within your major.
For withdrawal deadlines, please refer to the Registrar’s webpage. If you have experienced
extenuating circumstances and the withdrawal deadline has passed, you may be eligible to
petition for a late withdrawal.
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Read
Before
WEEK 0
Due
Listen
• Asao Inoue’s Pedagogue Episode
Before
Read along as you listen:
Tues.
• PDF Transcript of Pedagogue episode
Aug.
How do we assess writing?
30
During Socratic Seminar on writing assessment and Inoue
• Inside: A-L
WEEK 1
Read
Before • “Shitty First Drafts” by Anne Lamott
Tues. • “Resources for Writer’s Block” Student Guide
Sep. 6 How do we start?
During
Writing Activity: Intro to invention
Due Reading Response: Lamott [1 hr. b/c]
Watch
WEEK 2
Read
• “The Phenomenology of Error” by Joseph M.
Before Williams
• “Peer Review & Collaborating with Others” Student
Guide
Tues. How do we give content-focused feedback to our peers?
Sep. 13 Socratic Seminar on assessing peer writing and writing
During
feedback
WEEK 3
• Inside: A-L
Reading Response: Williams [1 hr. b/c]
Due Literacy Narrative Draft 1 [Tues by 5pm]
Peer Review Responses [Wed by 5pm]
Read
Before
Thur. • Peer review responses to your work.
Sep. 15 During Peer Review Meeting (see Canvas for group assignments)
Due Contribution Survey [end of class]
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Read
• What’s That Supposed to Mean? Using Feedback
Before
on Your Writing by Jillian Grauman
• “Revising & Editing” Student Guide
Tues.
How do we self-assess and revise?
Sep. 20
Writing Activity: Reverse Outlining
During
WEEK 4
Read
• Understanding Discourse Communities by Dan
Before Melzer
• “Understanding Visual Rhetoric in Digital Writing
Environments” by Mary E. Hocks (pp. 340-350)
Tues.
Discourse communities? or, Who are we composing for?
Sep. 27
Socratic Seminar on discourse communities
During
• Inside: A-L
Assigning Project 2: Online Discourse Community Analysis
WEEK 5
Read
• The Sixth Paragraph: A Re-Vision of the Essay by
Before
Paul Lynch
Tues. • My Five-Paragraph Theme-Theme by Ed White
Oct. 4 How do we arrange our thoughts on the page?
During Breakout Discussion
Writing Activity: Outlining
Due Reading Response: White & Lynch [1 hr. b/c]
Read
WEEK 6
Read
Tues. Before
• Peer review responses to your work
Oct.
During Peer Review Meeting (see Canvas for group assignments)
11
Due Collaboration Survey [end of class]
WEEK 7
Thur.
Oct. Fall break runs from Oct. 13 to Oct. 16 (Sunday).
13
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Read
• Writing with Force and Flair by William T.
FitzGerald
• “Using Transitions” from Student Guide To College
Before
Writing
Tues. • Multimodal textual analysis exemplar: “The
Oct. 18 Fashion Industry: Free to be an Individual” by
Hannah Berry
WEEK 8
Read
• Wikipedia Is Good for You!? by James P. Purdy
Before • “Research Questions” Student Guide
Bring to class
Tues.
• Laptops / tablets
Nov. 1
How do we conduct secondary research?
During Presentation: Wiki Mines and the Library Minds
Breakout groups: Finding and evaluating sources
WEEK 10
Read
• Annoying Ways People Use Sources by Kyle D.
Before Stedman
• “APA In-Text Citations” Student Guide
Tues. • “APA Reference Page” Student Guide
Nov. 8 How do we integrate sources into our writing?
Presentation: Who are the APA?
During
Socratic Seminar on academic honesty
• Inside: L-F
Due Reading Response: APA practice (Stedman) [1 hr. b/c]
WEEK 11
Read
• Walk, Talk, Cook, Eat: A Guide to Using Sources by
Before Cynthia R. Haller
• “Synthesizing Sources” Student Guide
• “Integrating Sources” Student Guide
Thur. How do we integrate sources into our writing?
During
Nov. 10 Writing Activity: Source Integration Techniques
Reading Response: Secondary source prewriting (Haller) [1
hr. b/c]
Due Online Discourse Community Analysis Draft 1 [Sunday by
5pm]
Peer Review Responses [Monday by 5pm]
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Read
Before
Tues. • Peer response to your work
Nov. 15 During Peer review meeting
Due Contribution Survey [end of class]
Listen (transcripts available on page)
• “Attention Donor 3046: Your Daughter Made A
Podcast To Find You” by Anya Steinberg
• “How to Win the Student Podcast Challenge” from
Before NPR and Anya Steinberg
WEEK 12
Bring to class
• Laptops / Tablets
• Headphones
Thur.
• Audio files of your interviews
Nov. 17
How do we present audio data?
Assigning Project 4: Audio Essay
Assigning Self-Assessment
During
Presentation: Taking Notes in Audacity; Burps, Coughs,
and Ums; and Royalty Free Music
Breakout discussions or Q/A
Due Reading Response: Steinberg [1 hr. b/c]
Prepare
Before
Tues. • Questions for your peers and instructor.
Nov. 22 During Workshop
WEEK 13
Thur.
Thanksgiving break runs from Wed, Nov. 23 to Sunday, Nov. 27.
Nov. 24
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Read
Before • Reflective Writing and the Revision Process: What
Were You Thinking? by Sandra Giles
Tues.
How do we assess our progress as writers?
Nov. 29
During Socratic Seminars on self-assessment Criteria
WEEK 14
Read
Before
Tues. • Peer review responses to your work
Dec. 6 During Peer review on audio essay
Due Contribution Survey [end of class]
Prepare
WEEK 15