TASK 1

1. Nilai : 6.0

Soal :
The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the
information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.

Jawaban :

Rapid development in technology caused so many effects not only in fruitful aspects but also
in bad consequences, especially in cities. Some people believe that big urban areas have a
poor impact on its citizen such as on people's health. I completely agree with this opinion
and this essay will explain the reasons.

First of all, I believe that a big city contains so much air pollution since so many vehicles fulfill
an urban area by generating carbon dioxide emissions. As a result, that air pollution can
come into people's lungs and it will cause so many health problems. For instance, it can
cause a lot of diseases such as pneumonia, asthma, or even cancer. That's why air pollution
will cause some health problems to people who live there.

Secondly, almost all urban areas have perfect terrible traffic jams which make people live
there being stressed that will leads them not only to bad physical health but also to mental
health. Yet mental health is not as feasible as physical health, it will lead to the appearance
of other diseases. In the other words, people's anxiety which can result from traffic jams can
cause illnesses such as stomachache or even heart attack. Thus, traffic jam is harmful to
people's mental health.

To conclude, I strongly agree that a big urban area can lead people who live there into some
atrocious health conditions. The impacts are living in a city can affect not only people's
physical health but also their mental health.

2. Nilai : 6.0
Soal :
The chart below shows the percentage off Irish language by province (Leinster, Munster,
Connacht and Ulster) in the Republic of Ireland (State) in five different years. Summarise the
information by selecting and repoerting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.

Jawaban :
The graph chart delineates the percentage of Irish language user in Republic of Ireland
counted once in every five year from 1981 until 2022 in five province. Overall, Irish language
in the Republic of Ireland most used in Conacht and the least common speaker is Leinster.

With regards to the amount of speaker over the period given, I will first describe Conacht
and Munster as the province with the most use of Irish language. Conacht and Munstern has
 a similar pattern which started with a steady state condition until in 1991 it rose significantly
to approximately above 45%.

Ustler and State also has a similar pattern. They experienced a slight grow until it increased
dramatically to above 40% in the end of counted year. It has a little bit differences with
Leinster which has an overall low percentage in Irish language user. It experienced a slight
fluctuation until it rose sharply in 1996 and grew steadily in 2002.

3. Nilai : 6.25
Soal :
Two chart

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening
courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about
the ages of these course participants.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.

A glance at those two graphs delineates the number of people who join numerous late
afternoon progressions at an adult education center counted for both sexes in 2009. The
bar graph pageants the number of men and women who joined several different activities
while the pie chart spectacles the proportion of the range of age groups. It is clear from the
graph that the sculpture course had the least number of attendance and the most common
age range attendance is 50 or over.
The bar chart shows that women were the biggest attendance of almost all the courses. In
drama and painting courses, women had approximately 10 different people above the
opposing sex while in the language course women were beyond men by 20 points. This is so
different from the sculpture course where women got a lower score than men by
approximately 5 points.
The pie chart parades that the most common attendances were from the range of age 50 or
over while the least participate were from the aged under 20. Moreover, people in their 40s
 ages got the second rank proportion in 26% then followed by 30s people who got 16% and
by the age of 20s who got 11% in proportion.

4. Nilai : 6.5
Soal : The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Comparison bar chart

A glance at the graph delineates the amount of air pollution caused by different factors
counted in the four specific nations in 2021. Overall, the highest volume of air pollution
came from China for all the causing elements, while Australia was the lowest pollutant
nation.

First of all, in terms of electricity generation, America seated the second position after
China which had pollutant measurements of approximately 30 PPM. Its volume was followed
by Australia, which got a 19 PPM pollution load, while Japan had about 16 PPM pollution
volume.

Secondly, for the transportation reason, it had a similar-but-different pattern from the
electricity reason in which China stood for the first position. In contrast, America got the
second position which reached approximately 59 PPM. Furthermore, the difference was in
the third and the fourth positions, which took Japan and Australia. Japan got a 30 PPM, while
Australia reached approximately 19 PPM pollution level.

Third, in terms of Industrial reasons, Japan followed China in a second position which
got 40 PPM pollution volume. America got 30 PPM, and Australia was the least pollutant
country for industrial reasons, which earned only 19 PPM.

5. Nilai : 6.125
Soal : The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009
and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.
 Answer :

A glance at the bar graph delineates five cellphone brands' wholesale counted every
two years from 2009 to 2013.

Overall, Samsung and Nokia reached the highest-selling brand while ZTE got the most
petite sale in the counted period.

First of all, in terms of the highest-selling brands wholesale, Nokia got approximately
440 in 2009. It experienced a slight drop in the next two years before it plunged extremely in
2013. Nonetheless, Samsung reached 250 in the first counted year before it rose
considerably in 2011. Finally, it underwent a dramatic growth to 450 in 2013.

Secondly, in terms of moderate-selling brands, Apple reached an extremely low-selling

score while it gradually raised in every counted year. However, LG pageants an opposite
pattern from Apple, which experienced a gradual fall every estimated year.

Thirdly, in terms of the lowest sales brand, ZTE underwent a slight rise which increased
by approximately ten numbers every counted year.

6. Nilai : 6.5
Soal :
The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and
reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
 Jawaban :
A glance at the graph delineates the proportion of various ways of the music purchase
counted in every year from 2011 to 2018. Overall, the CD purchased, and the download
underwent a moderate fall while the streams rose considerably.
First of all, in terms of the purchase which experienced a fall, CDs purchased started by the
highest proportion in the first counted year while downloads got only two-thirds of that
proportion. Then, CDs purchased saw a gradual decrease every year. On the other hand, the
downloads were undergoing a steady rise before they had a substantial plummet from 2014
to 2018.
Secondly, the streams underwent a gradual increase while others saw a drop in overall
counted years. In 2011, it started with the lowest percentage of all before was steadily
growing until 2015. Then, it underwent a significant climb to reach the top proportion of the
music selling proportion in 2018.
7. Nilai : 6.375

A glance at the two graphs delineates the proportions of various causes of society's
migration, with the first pie chart depicting the immigration proportion, while the second
graph shows the emigration percentage. Overall, the most influencing factor was the
 definite job, both for immigration and emigration. The most visible difference is for the
formal study percentage, which reached a high proportion in the immigration reason, yet in
the emigration's cause got the lowest rate.
In terms of immigration, the highest logic to did it is the definite job which reached 30% that
opposed the no reason stated which gained the lowest proportion of immigration. The
second highest position obtained by the formal study reason which obtained 26%, while
other reasons such as accompany/join, looking for work, and further got moderate
proportion is approximately ten's percents.
On the other hand, the emigration to the UK had a slight difference in reasons with the
immigration. Yet the highest proportion is still from the definite job, the second place gained
by the people who were looking for work. Other reasons gained the moderate proportions
while the formal study got the lowest percentage which gained just the 4% percentage.

8. Nilai : 6.375

The diagram delineates the stage of life of a frog. Overall, a frog undergoes life stages in two
main places, the water and the land. Moreover, it experienced the cycle from being an egg
until being an adult frog.
In terms of the water stage, an adult frog lays their eggs before turning into an embryo.
Next, the front legs appear after those embryos change to the tadpole form. At that stage,
the tadpole tries to prepare its respiratory tract to start pulmonary breathing. It is the end of
the water stage before they can move to land.
In terms of the land stage, the first step that they experience on the soil is being a tadpole
frog which has a smaller body if people compare with the adults. Finally, it turns into an
adult frog and being fertile enough. This stage makes the adult frog ready to release its eggs
in the water.

9. Nilai : 6.5
 The provided diagram delineates the steps of making coffee, from the form of coffee
beans to be ready to sell in a jar. Overall, coffee beans have to undergo several temperature
changes and shape transformations before it becomes a powder shape. Furthermore, it
experienced two main stages, which include stages before and after becoming an essence.
In terms of before becoming an essence, it starts with picking the coffee bean before
farmers dry it under the sunlight at the farm. After roasting the bean, people can cool them
rapidly in low temperatures before grinding them into a smaller form. Afterward, we can mix
it with hot water, which are then strains the mixture. Then we get the essence form of the
coffee.
In terms of after being the essence, we can cool them at a lower temperature until
they freeze. Having been ground in the form of frozen liquid, we can dry it in a vacuum until
all the moisture and water are released from the powder. Finally, we can pack the powder
into jars and the coffee ready to sell in appropriate packaging to sell.
10. Nilai : 6.5
The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the
information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.

The provided diagram delineates the water heating system which generates hot water to
being spread all over the house by pipes. It can be seen from the diagram that overall, the
heating system is divided into two main parts; the stage before and after the water has
boiled. Moreover, the main devices in that system are the boiler and hot water radiators.
In terms of the stage before water being boiled, cold water flows into the house from the
upper part of the house to the storage tank, which is located at the middle level of the
house. The source is from the water tank or from the pipe outside. After the water has
collected in the storage tank, the water flows to the boiler, which is generated by gas or oil
before it spreads.
In terms of the stage after the water has boiled, the water spreads to some hot water
radiators which are placed in several rooms of that house after it has been pushed by the
pump. Having a small tube to save the temperature, it keeps the temperature heat in every
room that has the hot water radiators installed. In fact, the pipe installation which spreads
along the room contains not only the hot water channel but also the cold water. As a result,
people can use both cold water and hot water due to their needs. Afterward, the end
devices of this system are sinks or showers that have water to tap. Finally, people can enjoy
both water and cold water when they do some bathroom activities.

11. Nilai : 6.5

 The provided maps delineate the difference between West Park Secondary School counted
every 30 years from 1950 until 2010. It can be seen that overall, that school was modernized
and underwent several developments.
In terms 1950 to 1980, the school experienced a dramatic expansion due to the fact that
houses beside that school were converted into its car park and science block. A
redevelopment was undergone by the farmland, which switched into the school's sports
field.
In terms 1980 to 2010, there was a minor change rather than 30 years before since it was no
expansion of that school. The proportion of the car park was extended. The expansion of
that car park stood on the former sports field area while the sports field was smaller than
before. The new sports field was relocated to the left side of the playground. The area of
that playground was reduced as a consequence of this.

12. Score : 6.5

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

 Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
 ?
One main idea per paragraph
 ?
Include an introduction and conclusion
 ?
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
 Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
 ?
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
 Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
 Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
 Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
 Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
 Answer all parts of the question
 ?
Present relevant ideas
 Fully explain these ideas
 ?
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Soal : The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented
accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Jawaban :
The provided bar diagram delineates the proportion of a household accommodation
ownership to The British and The Wales counted from 1918 to 2011. It can be seen that
overall, the owned households accommodation underwent a gradual rise while The British
and The Wales tent to substantially decreased their desire to rent the households
accommodation.
First of all, in terms of household in owned accommodation, it started at approximately 23%.
Having increased moderably in 1939, it underwent a stagnant position in 1953. About 69% of
population in 1991 like owning households after experienced a considerable growth before
it witnessed a steady state, although in the end, it saw a slight fall.
Secondly, the households in rented accommodation started at the highest proportion in the
first counted year in 1918. It drop to 68% before it reached a stagnant position in 1953.
Experiencing a significantly decline until 1991, it fall slightly before it underwent an slow rise
in 2011.

13. Score :