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• Yang My

1. Are you good at singing?


well actually, i would say I don’t have a beautiful voice for singing. i ‘m completely
tone deaf (khi viết thì tone và deaf có thêm gạch nối) and I always sing off key. But,
you now (know), instead of, I’m quite fond of singing and i can sing all the time when
i’am (I’m) home.
2. What kind of music do you like to listen to?
I must say it depends on my mood. If I’m down or stressed or on the gloomy days
(bỏ the), songs which are memorised , slow, and touching could make me feel
somehow released, on the days when i’m energetic, I would listen to songs that have
catchy tunes or are full-of-hope and sunshine . I mean I dont stick with a certain kind.
Nhận xét: Yang My kiểm soát ngữ pháp khá tốt, chỉ mắc vài lỗi spelling nên em ráng
check lại nha. Em phát âm hầu như không sai các từ, bật âm đuôi /s/ /z/ khá tốt, em
nên đẩy tốc độ lên xíu để tăng fluency nhen.
• Thương
1. Good at singing or not:
I have a soft spot for music, and singing as well. But frankly saying, I am not a
talented singer since I can not (viết dính lại) feel the beat in its (a) proper way.
However, because of my immense affection for music, I will try my best not to sing
off-key and not to derail the tune of the song.
2. Favorite kind of music:
Frankly speaking, I am not a musically gifted person. However, I am spontaneously
into music a lot, especially those (bỏ) contemporary melodies. I love pop songs,
because for usual (as usual) most of them will have a catchy tune and upbeat tempo
which fits my taste a lot so I don’t have to worry about my singing off-key.
3. Favorite sports and frequency:
Recently (/ˈriː.sənt.li/), I have spent much of my time and effort regulating my body
mass index, and I have chosen yoga as my favorite sport to help me achieve this
physical goal. Well, Yoga is indeed my best bet since it does not only help me to
maintain my physically healthy condition but it’s also a very special way to release
stress after a hard-working day. Well, I spend around 10 minutes every morning doing
yoga, followed by the next 5 minutes taking meditation and I think that this is a very
wonderful way to help you to have a productive working day.
Nhận xét: Thương hầu như không sai những lỗi ngữ pháp quá quan trọng, sử dụng
khá nhuần nhuyễn các mẫu câu phức, cấu trúc câu đa dạng. Thương cũng phát âm
khá tốt và không mắc nhiều lỗi phát âm, em cần lưu ý âm đuôi /s/ nhé, cố gắng linking
nhất có thể nhé em. Good job, em ơi!
• Thùy Linh
1. Are you good at singing?
=>To tell you (bỏ you) the truth, I like singing alone at home especially taking a
shower. But I am not good at singing at all.

2. What kind of music do you like to listen to?


=> I like merry and cheerful songs the best. That's because it’s so fun (funny) to sing
them with my buddies anytime. More specifically, I love the ones with silly lyrics
(/ˈlɪr.ɪks/) or catchy melodies.
3. Do you like sports and how often do you play sports?
=> Yes, I find it relaxing to walk around town (the town). Whenever I'm stressed
(/strest/) or have a lot on my mind, I go out for a walk (/wɔːk/). However, when the
weather's sunny and clear, I visit it almost every day. When I visit, I usually stroll
around the park to enjoy nature.
Nhận xét: Thùy Linh còn sai vài lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm vẫn còn chưa tròn và rõ ràng
lắm, em còn phát âm sai vài từ nữa, em nên đẩy nhanh tốc độ nói hơn, tự nhiên hơn
nhé. Cố lên em!
• Vĩ Hiếu
1 Are you good at singing?
Well, to be honest, I’m quite tone-deaf (thiếu âm đuôi /f/). But (however) I really
enjoy singing in karaoke with my friends, it (which làm chủ ngữ thay thế cho1 mệnh
đề phía trước) does give me lift (a lift) to my mood.
2 What kind of music do you like to listen to?
Most of the songs in my playlist are country music. Because it highlights chilvary
(chivalry) and promote (promotes) women with honor, which is a rarity in today’s
music culture.
3 Do you like sports and how often do you play sports?
Hmm, I think I would have to say that I’m not keen on sports but I do like being
active to get rid of obesity. I enjoy playing badminton with my best friend every
weekend. Additionally, I do some push-ups and planks during weekdays.
Nhận xét: Hiếu kiểm soát ngữ phát khá tốt, chỉ có vài lỗi spelling nên Hiếu cần chủ
động check lại nhé. Về phát âm, chỉ có vài lỗi nhỏ như miss âm đuôi nha. Nhìn chung,
Hiếu đã làm khá ổn. Good job bạn êi!
• Trung
Script 1
I love music and I usually listen (listen to) music when I have spare time. However,
unfortunately (/ʌnˈfɔːr.tʃən.ət.li/), my voice doesn’t suit for singing.
Script 2
I have to work on the computer all the day (all day), so I usually listen (listen to)
music during working time. In order to stay focus and increase (miss /s/)
concentration, I need a chill, light and smooth music (music không đếm được, a piece
of music: 1 bản nhạc, or a song). And lo-fi would be as right as rain. That's also my
favorite music.
Script 3
Definitely, I do like sports (thiếu âm /s/). And jogging is my favorite type. I jogging
(jog) at (in the) morning which is filled by most (the most) beautiful sunset
Nhận xét:Anh Trung còn sai lỗi ngữ pháp lặt vặt, nên anh cần cẩn thận hơn. Anh
cần cố gắng phát âm to rõ ràng, đẩy nhanh tốc độ và hạn chế những khoảng dừng
nhé.
• Thùy Dương
1 Are you good at singing?
Despite the fact that I have a huge (thiếu âm /dʒ/) interest in singing, I am not really
good at it. Actually, That can't stop me being (from being) passionate about singing.
2 What kind of music do you like to listen to?
To be honest, I enjoy music and I listen to all sorts of it, including Kpop, Vpop, US -
UK or so on. I am interested in EDM most because (miss /z/) of its amazing melody
which always makes me feel full of bean (beans).
3 Do you like sports and how often do you play sports?
I am aware that sport is vital to be healthy so I am really keen on sport, especially
doing gymnastics and I’ve gone to the gym for more than 2 years, 3 times a week.
Thùy Dương: Em kiểm soát ngữ pháp khá tốt, tuy nhiên em cần phát âm rõ ràng hơn,
thoát giọng hơn nhé cũng như đẩy nhanh fluency. Cố lên em nhé!
• Thiên Phú
Question 1
To be honest, I would say that I’m average since there are some people (people who)
enjoy hearing me singing. However, I am not really good at keeping track on (of) the
tone of the song.
Question 2
I am not really keen on any specific kinds of music though if I had to choose, I would
like to listen (dư /s/) to songs that are up-tempo like hip-hop rap or pop rock.
Question 3
All of my friends will say that I am a sporty person and I don’t deny it. It is lucky for
me that my school has a standard playground so that I can play sport(s) every day in
order to enhance my physical health.
Nhận xét: Thiên Phú còn vài lỗi sai ngữ pháp không đáng có, em cần cẩn thận hơn
nhé. 1 điểm cộng cho em đó là em phát âm đuôi đầy đủ và rõ ràng, em cần đẩy fluency
lên để thêm lưu loát, tự nhiên em nhé.
• Ngọc Thúy
Question 1:
Not really. Because I usually sing off-key and I also feel my voice when singing
(when I sing) is not good. But (bỏ but cũng được) anyway, I still love singing.
Question 2:
Well, I actually often listen to many kinds of music, it depends on my mood at that
time. But, generally, I’m keen on songs with gentle and cheerful melodies.
Question 3:
To be honest, I’m not really into sports. Because I'm a pretty sedentary girl. You
know what, I only play sports about 10 times or less in (bỏ) each year. And If I had
to choose what sport to play, I'd choose swimming, basketball and badminton.
Nhận xét: Ngọc Thúy kiểm soát ngữ pháp rất tốt, phát âm cũng rất rõ ràng và tròn
trịa, giọng điệu khá tự nhiên. Giữ tiến độ và phát huy hơn thế nữa nhé em. <3!
• Mỹ Dung
1 Are you good at singing?
Honestly, I’m not sure that I am good at singing but I am really into singing. I like to
sing when I feel blissful, that allows me to double the (bỏ) happiness.

2 What kind of music do you like to listen to?


Pop is one of kinds (the kinds) of music I like most. I am keen on listening to Pop
music while I’m cooking, doing housewwork (housework), doing homework and
taking a bath. So, it has a strong attachment to me everyday (every day).
3 Do you like sports and how often do you play sports?
I extremely like sport because I think it plays an important role in my life. The kind
of sport I like most (miss /s/) is doing work out. I do it 3 times a week. That helps me
have a powerful and attractive body
Nhận xét: Mỹ Dung chỉ mắc vài lỗi nhỏ xíu về ngữ pháp thôi, còn lại em đã phát âm
khá tốt, fluency cũng khá tự nhiên, rõ ràng. Làm tốt lắm em ơi, cố gắng phát huy nhé
<3!
• Mỹ Châu
1 Are you good at singing? (1-2 sentences)
To be honest, I’m really fond of listening to music and singing along to my friends
but it’s (miss âm /z/) never my forte. My buddies usually joke with me that I’m
completely tone-deaf and always sing off-key.

2 What kind of music do you like to listen to? (1-2 sentences)


Well, I’ve always been a huge (thiếu âm đuôi /dʒ/) fan of music since I was a little
girl. For me, I’m keen on music genres (/ˈʒɑːn.rəs/) which have a soft and catchy tune
like country music or pop music. It’s a wonderful melody that can help me both relax
and feel more energetic. Normally on rainy days, opening acoustics songs and sing
along to my favorite hits, have a cuppa, and let my hair down, music will do the rest.

3 Do you like sport and how often do you play sports? (2- 3 sentences)
Of course, I’m into those activities like playing sports. I often playing badminton or
going swimming 2-3 times a week. You know, practicing a sport regularly does
wonder for my health. It not only keeps me in shape but also refreshes (thiếu âm đuôi
/iz/) my mind after a long day of hard work.
Nhận xét: Mỹ Châu không sai lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm khá tốt chỉ có một vài lỗi em cần
lưu ý, fluency cũng khá trôi chảy, tự nhiên và cuốn hút. Câu trả lời khá đủ về mặt câu
chữ và nội dung. 1 Like cho sự cố gắng của em. Good job <3!
• Minh Ngọc
Are you good at singing?
Actually, I love singing along to a lot of songs but I’m completely tone-deaf and I
always sing off-key.

What kind of music do you like to listen to?


Each has its own perks but I intend to lean towards Korean pop and Indie. I have a
Korean song which is my favourite. It is so catchy. It’s a great ear worm (earworm)
and gets stuck in my head. I love it so much that I used it as my ringtone. So every
time or anytime somebody calls me I can listen to it again.

Do you like sports and how often do you play sports?


Yes, I’m really into sport. However, to be honest, I just play sports about 2 (twice) to
3 times a week with my friends. The sports I enjoy playing include badminton and
yoga. Besides, I also watch sports sometimes, if I have time, like the big matches of
my country’s national football team. Vietnamese people excel at football. We’ve
done really well in a few competitions in South East Asia recently, so it’s been really
exciting to watch, to say the least.
Nhận xét: Minh Ngọc không có lỗi sai gì nghiêm trọng ở ngữ pháp, em phát âm không
sai, bật âm đuôi rõ ràng và fluency khá ổn. Well done nha <3!
• Hương Giang
1 Are you good at singing?
To be honest, I like singing alone at home especically (especially) while doing
household chores, taking a shower or surfing the internet. But I am not good at singing
at all.
2. What kind of music do you like to listen to?
My music taste varies widely from West to East and from the 90s to modern EDM.
But if aucotics (acoustics) is considered as (miss /z/) a kind of music, then, that’s my
favorite of all time.
3. Do you like sports and how often do you play sports?
Well to be honest (miss /s/), I would say that I am actually quite keen on playing
sports, and I would probably have to say that I enjoy volleyball the most. If I have a
lot of spare time, I will serve in twice or 3 times a week. Whereas in contrast (By
contrast), if I’m busy, I will have to refuse any of offers (miss /z/) for a play which
will take my time away.
Nhận xét: Hương Giang đã tiến bộ hơn rất nhiều, lỗi ngữ pháp cũng không đáng kể.
Em chú ý phát âm rõ ràng hơn, để nhiều năng lượng hơn và đẩy tốc độ lên xíu em
nhé.
• Hồng My
Are u good at singing?
I absolutely love singing but I am not musically gifted. I am always painfully shy
when I have to come to sing in front of others.
What kind of music do you like to listen to ?
Actually, I’m not completely into any (nếu muốn thì thêm specific ở đây) type of
music specifically (không cần thiết nên bỏ đi nhé), it depends on my mood from
ballad to rock. I don't believe that good music can only be found in a certain genre,or
at a certain artist. For me it doesn't matter what kind of it as long as it makes me feel
an emotion.
Do u like sports & how often do u play sports?
To be honest, I would say that I am actually quite keen on playing sports, but I would
probably have to say that I enjoy skip (skipping) rope most. In addition to skipping
rope, I’m pretty fond of badminton. I usually play skipping 15 minutes in my room
every day and play badminton on weekends (File nghe câu này anh không nghe được
nhé)
Nhận xét: Về ngữ pháp, em không mắc nhiều lỗi sai, đây là 1 điểm cộng em nhé, em
có phát âm đuôi /s/ /z/. Tuy nhiên, em cần phát âm rõ ràng hơn, nhấn nhá tự nhiên,
tránh ah um cũng như đẩy tốc độ em nha.
• Bích Hạnh
1 Are you goood (good) at singing? (1 - 2 sentences)
Honestly, I’m not a musically gifted talent and I’m never much of a singer, but I do
love singing. I usually sing along to my favorite songs when watching on Youtube.
2 What kind of music do you like to listen to? (1 – 2 sentences)
Well, I used to love Korean pop music when I was a high school student, but these
days I prefer to listen to a variety of music, rather than a particular tune.
3 Do you like sports and how often do you play sports? (2 – 3 sentences)
To be honest, I’m not a fan of sports, but I do like being active to get myself into
shape. I used to play Vovinam – a Vietnamese martial art when I was a freshman at
university, so I did practice regularly three to four times a week at my club. At the
present (At present) however, I rarely practice myself and just do jogging when I have
spare time.
Nhận xét: Bích Hạnh không sai lỗi ngữ pháp nào, phát âm khá rõ ràng, không bị miss
âm đuôi /s/ /z/, em nói khá tự nhiên, trôi chảy và có nhấn nhá. Well done, cứ cố gắng
và tiếp tục phát huy em nhé.
• Thư
1. Are you good at singing? (1-2 sentences)
To be honest, I love singing along to the soundtrack of various massive hits, but I
have no talent for music because I’m completely tone-deaf and my voice is terribly
bad.
2. What kind of music do you like to listen to? (1-2 sentences)
Normally I’m a huge big fan (a huge/big fan) of acoustic (/əˈkuː.stɪk/) genres
(/ˈʒɑːn.rə/) of music (acoustics là được rồi nhé) with catchy tunes and memorable
melody. Besides, the harmonies of instrumental music is also a good option for me if
I need to concentrate on my work.
3. Do you like sports and how often do you play sports? (2-3 sentences)
Frankly speaking, I’m not keen on sports very much, as a result (/rɪˈzʌlt/) I only play
sports once in a blue moon. I think I will take up a sport frequently when I have free
time because playing sports gives us a wealth of benefits. It can not only release stress
and refresh our mind after a long day of hard work (working) but also keep us in good
shape.
Nhận xét: Thư cũng đã có những tiến bộ tuy nhiên em vẫn còn sai lỗi ngữ pháp, phát
âm một số từ chưa rõ, em cần phát âm tròn hơn, rõ ràng hơn. Đẩy nhanh tốc độ lên
em nhé, vì đây là giao tiếp chính vì vậy em cần nói tự nhiên, lưu loát hơn nhe. Cố lên
em nhé. <3!

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